I remember the time where Jessie help a blissey that she made friends with when Jessie was a nurse assistant and not wanting blissey to pay the price of giving the food to team rocket because they are friends or the time Jessie and jame release their arbrok or wheezing so they can protect the ekans and koffin for a Pokémon poacher Yeah while do consider them annoying that the fact their stalking a kid for a pikachu, they do have redeeming qualities that aren’t evil
Some critique so far: You make a lot of awkward pauses that you could totally edit out, cuz those awkward pauses kinda mess with the flow of the video. Some background music would also do you some good. And lastly, the images you use have white backgrounds, which should be an easy enough fix. But overall, it's a pretty good what if, I'm a fan. Also, you briefly called Team Magma Team Plasma lmao
Jessie: "Prepare for battle from the skies!" James: "To take on the gyms, a wondrous surprise!" Jessie: "A goal as old as the galaxy!" James: "Sent here to fulfil our challenging spree!" Meowth: "Plus there's me!" Jessie: "To denounce the vices of sloth and pride!" James: "To expand our strength to the Leagues far-cried!" Jessie: "Jessie!" James: "And James!" Meowth: "And Meowth are the names!" Jessie: "Anywhere there's gyms to test our powers" James: "Team Rocket . . ." Meowth: ". . . Will be there . . ." All: ". . . To make their badge ours!" Wobbuffet: "Wobbuffet!"
This is making me laugh every single time it seems something is gonna happen but then it doesn't. I like this idea and this change which can change everything truly the essence of a What-if. I really wonder what would happen if that butterfly died in the past. YES BRELOOM MACH! Like I really don't like Shroomish and Breloom that much but for some reason Breloom with Mach punch is one of the things I do like. I can't really think of anything else to say.
Incredibly interesting, and I love that you also tied Giovanni closer with the trio. Establishing a Team Rocket presence was a plotline they teased but barely followed up on.
Nice concept an full respect for pulling it off. What I'd recommend to you is to take shorter breaks between sentences so it feels more like an audiobook. It's not as easy to read something outloud and have a flow in intonation and breaks that feels natural, but for me it was just a little practice. I'm looking forward on your progress. This style you're using feels more dramatical, slightly unfitting for this format (better for thrillers and serious stories where the listener has to digest what he/she heard and leaving some buffer to add suspencion) Maybe more of a "talking" style, similar to podcasts, would be more fitting, as it's more of an hypothetical story.
Prepare for Gym Battle And make it Double (One think such about this is I can watch this because when this video air I'm sleeping in my bed so sorry for that I will watch in the morning)
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I caught it too but at the same time, if you did run this in one take, kudos to you Ronin. Either way, slight mishap, we're all human, we make mistakes. Great content and happily ready and welcome to more! Keep it up bro! 🤘