This is a really good story. It’s very well written really like it a lot like the personalities that was given to all the characters. It’s cool that Kumo took Kina and her son in and Kakashi and Rin and also adopted Naruto who knows even though Naruto are extremely close maybe when they get older, the end up being together as a couple it’s kind of funny how Kachina is nicknamed the Shinigami and it’s cool that they were able to save Hashi‘s wife, though it did suck that they weren’t able to save Hashi‘s brother and his cool that the rage and all of them got there in timeto deal with the fake ambassador and Pender war from breaking out really hope that this story continues and comes out soon 2:54:17
Okay the story is very good I did enjoy it I like the plot line I also like the character development I hope you come back make a part two I also wish it was a lot longer and keep up the good work
