Okay the story is very good I did enjoy it I also like to plot line I do like the character development as well I do wish it was a lot longer I hope you come back make a part 2 and keep up the good work
Plot/world building is rushed as hell. Like sanin means legendary 3 ninja, there can't be a 4th. And no one sees there best friend's child on the street, says go home, the boy says nah, and then she just adopts him on the spot? I just met this kid, now we leavin for 6 years? Golden goodie twoshoes parents just decide to forget their kid entirely? The writing needs to be slowed down so stuff actually makes sense
Also worth noting that the sannin got the title from a fight with hanzo and not from each of them having summons. I mean by that metric sarutobi, and Itachi would have been sannin
