Okay this story is very good I did enjoy it I do wish it was a lot longer I like the plot line behind it I hope you come back make a part 2 I also like the character development and I also wish it was a lot longer and keep up the good work
57:43 plz don’t make this a harem i am begging who ever wrote this story i haven’t been able to find any interesting and good what ifs that aren’t harems or have weird relationships like kid Naruto and some like kushina or somthing weird that makes no sense like that
