I really like this story a lot it was very well thought out. I also like how Naruto personality was done. I really can’t wait for the next part of this story and I hope it comes out soon. 0:02
I kind of like this and I kind of don't because you're turning Iruka into an enemy when you already had Mizuki. There was no need to do that. Mizuki was bad enough. And another thing were they kind of mess with Hinata's relationship with Naruto. So many of these fan fictions do it. I'm about burned out on Naruto fan fictions and I absolutely love them. I don't know what people's problem is. For the sweet and innocent and truthfully loyal Hinata Turn away from Naruto or he'll turn her away. He gets the chance to have multiple wives and everybody s***Cans the Hinata x Naruto relationship? It's become a cliche at this point.
