minato sealed the yang side of kurama in naruto aka the angry side of kurama and minato sealed the yin side of kurama in himself the nice side of kurama still minato is a good father
I genuinely had a great time listening and watching this what-if. It allows Naruto to be(at least slightly) a smarter protagonist, and the friendship between him and Sasuke to stay there which I just overall agree with and don't know why lol. I also loved the inclusion of a smaller character like Kin who, in the main show, was a side character to the side characters and I simply enjoyed how you added her in here as a sort of love interest for Naruto. I'm excited for the next part into Shippuden.
It really does say something that Sakura can be just cut out of the story and not much is affected. While I do think she is a really strong kunoichi, she was not written to be one. It ended up like she was there because she was in team 7.
Jesus Christ just finished the video and my god it was done beautifully and would be down to see what comes next of it. It’s interesting to see how Naruto and Sasuke would be surprisingly close, along with the meeting of Itachi all three splitting off and on the run from practically all clans.
Neon starts talking about how Neji can no longer be a shinobi. *Me remembering how Dojutsu in Naruto are can just be taken out and popped back in* “Are you sure about that?”
I totally want more of this! Im super excited for this weird relationship between Kin Tsuchi and Naruto to grow despite personally thinking Tayuya would have been better, smh. The story has been amazing so far. And I cant wait for more episodes :), They should totally follow this lengthy vibe tho, I loved laying in my bed listening and imagining the scenarios in my head, keep going!
@@NeonPow np! The only thing I disliked was that Obito broke out of the Tsyukiyomi with will power, and Kisame not joining up with Itachi, atleast not right away, but I understand its not like you could simply kill off the big bad instantly, rest in peace Tayuya 😢
You should make a collab with IBIJ anime it would be amazing you write the story and he could animate it I feel like it would make so much attention to your channel overall and it would be really cool to see your stories animated.
Bro your voice is so therapeutic I have fell asleep to these videos recently and you explain it to simply and basically, you are so underrated man keep up the amazing content
@@NeonPow tbh its less your voice and more your tone for me, if you talked very monotone i wouldn't be able to watch the video. Really good job at narrating tho 👍
A common criticism I’ve seen is killing off Sakura. Fair enough, she could have certainly become something more in this. I ask all of you who have complaints over this to keep in mind that it’s something of a running gag in the channel, and it was done to maintain this. Funny to you or not, potential wasted or not, it was a joke. No one has really been complaining about this, but I have some plans for Neji, so worry not about what’s happened to him. Someone said Sasuke wouldn’t have been able to use the second stage of his curse seal, and I for some reason never really thought about, but it makes sense. I could make some crap up about how the sound four approached sasuke and did the stage 2 awakening thing during that month of training, that wouldn’t be true. Another error such as this was the sand not protecting Gaara when Kin attacked him due to himself being disoriented when that works automatically. No real excuse, and no real way to bullshit my way out of it. Someone else said Gaara shouldn’t have turned good, just the opposite really due to the way that things played out, yeah, that certainly would have made more sense considering his character. They themselves said it’s fine and all because it’s a fan fic anyway, but that doesn’t mean the characters need to act differently from how they would in canon until some change in the story changes them. I appreciate all of your feedback, and while this isn’t the only criticisms that were had, these were the most noteworthy to me. Neon and myself read through these comments looking for ways to improve the story, and while I’m not nearly as active as he is in the comment section, I still do read these comments so as to better my contribution to writing this story and others in the future. For my first major writing project though, I have no regrets for both my accomplishments and my shortcomings. For every error I make, that’s another error I’m less likely to make in the future. If you have any questions, comments, criticisms, or anything else don’t be afraid to put them in the comments. Even the more “Negative” comments are valued.
I don't think that the Jonin in the audience at the exam would have allowed the fight between Neji and Sasuke to continue after the second stage curse mark, seeing as they were able to stop Neji and Gaara during the preliminaries just fine. Also Gaara would have still blocked the attacks from Kin because the sand is automatic, even as a literal infant Gaara could block attacks without seeing them.
I like the whole kimmimaru interaction but considering nagato is an uzumaki and is very proficient with seals I feel he’d have a better time then orochimaru cracking Naruto’s seal which is an uzumaki clan technique
@@NeonPow oh yea I only realized this by finding out the tailed beast sealing technique the akatsuki use was made by nagato so it’s up in the air who’d be better.
"In reality, the young child has a better childhood than if he was in the Leaf Village." I laughed out loud when I heard that. Hiruzen and Iruka really screwed over the poor kid. lol
I mean, Iruka didn’t have much of a hand in how people treated him. He was his teacher, not his father. And the dude was also like 20 when he first met naruto. I’d say he did a lot better than everyone else.
After finishing this video I just gotta say, great job! I love when I can find a creator who really tries to make good content, especially like this, on a weekly basis. Thank you for this amazing video, I'll be waiting for more!
So happy to hear! I hope to get back on the normal schedule once my irl life eases down. For now, please bare with me and I'll get the juicy content back up 😁
One small observation.Seeing as Zaku and Kin became the bodies for the first and second hokage's edo tensei and as Zaku is dead and Kin is still alive afterwards in this timeline,then i presume the fight between Orochimaru and Hiruzen went quite different than in canon
What if Naruto was part Senju? Minato would be a Senju and Minatos mother would be Tsunade, Kushina would stay the same, and Hashirama would be Naruto’s Great Grandpa or something. He would have wood release, Wind, Earth, and Water Style. And since Naruto is part Senju and part Uzumaki, he would have so much chakra to the point where his body would just be physically enhanced, and would have the ability to regenerate quickly even without the help of Kurama. And he would basically have a near infinite amount of chakra. He would basically be kinda broken…
Also pls make it so that hinata will be in team 7, and also make it so that she goes with Naruto and Jiaria so she can meet Tsunade and become her student, also her two Chakra Natures will be water and lightning, and in the War arc, pls make her has the Tenseigan. Imagine hinata with the Tenseigan with its Chakra Cloak with the Byakugo Seal with the gentle fist and Watrt pls Lightinh incorporated into it, she would be BROKEN
I also hope when the continuation comes out that kin comes back to Naruto since she is the clear love interest and would make for a cool Hinata replacement
Only 10 minutes in, but i just wanted to say. I feel like Naruto would honestly dismantle the Akatsuki, like, if he isn't flat out trained/taught to be evil from the get go and he actually gets a better life he'd likely remind Obito so much of his old self that he'd betray Madara's plan well before even capturing Gaara. Nagato would likely be convinced that Naruto would solve the "Peace" thing, likely teaching Naruto the same things Jiraiya taught him
loved how perfectly sakura was depicted (better than the canon 😂) neji was done a lil dirty tho but whatever (couldn't care less bout him tbh) , can't wait to see what course this story takes and how Naruto and Kurama coordinate this time around, keep up the good work g
@_ScrEam_ remember when naruto got kurama extracted from him? Hmm... who helped him stay alive long enough so minato could give him his half of kurama. Ohhh wait that was Sakura who did that
This obviously took a lot of effort, currently 1:14:13 in, and I'm enjoying it a lot, just a few things to note 1. Sasuke can't enter 2nd state yet as he wasn't put in suspended death like he was during the Sasuke retrieval arc Anyway so far its a pretty good video
I thought that Sakura as pink trashcan was going to kill me. But the Chad Naruto drawing for the zabuza part litteraly got me crying. I cant unsee it. The moment i saw it my brain just clicked "Chad Naruto" and thats that. I cant get rid of that
