This is a really good story it’s very well written I like it a lot I like the personalities that was given to all the characters. Hope the story continues and comes out soon. 3:49:21
I like this one but it's really starting to p*** me off how these fan fiction authors want to gloss over the author original author's point of child soldiers you aged him up, you missed the entire point of them being young children fighting. The author specifically tried to draw attention to this. And you guys are ruining that specific point by aging them up. Old enough to kill old enough to drink. That was what he was bringing attention to The fact that throughout history children have been used as tools for their communities or whatever and the author truly wanted to bring attention to this but people ignore that fact in the Naruto stories. They are child soldiers glossing it over or ignoring that it happens in this story is an insult to the original work. It really is. And if you're all wondering why the author insisted upon making them 12 years old at graduation from the Academy and 13 during the exams was that it's happening today. In many countries, children are taught from a young age to be soldier, except it's the loosest Definition of what it is to be a soldier. And another thing is these SJWs are a bit sick in the head. If they think a red-blooded testosterone male is going to not do certain things before they're 18 and you can't cotton coat or Sugar coat the d**n world and make people believe that there's still children at 21. those pricks need to get out of their mother's basements and find a life.
