Two things: 1. The editing here is a bit on the heavy side. Too much editing can degrade a video, especially when the edits do not pertain to the main subject of said video. If the video is showing off your system, try to keep the edits about the system only (different camera angles, close-ups, etc). 2. Since that yours is a newer SAFEPATH, does it still have the classic temporal buzz?
I prefer the old style of system tests as the music ruins the true sound of the alarms and it seems way to dramatic.It was good editing, but not appropriate for this video style.
Firepanel6 thanks, it kinda felt like Premiere Pro, but it could be both to do this editing (but Premiere Pro is cleaner with edits and has a lot more effects).
Like the editing but it looks more like a channel trailer to me rather then a normal system test if I were to rate this video from 1-10 I would give a 7 :-)