@@BabyTaeshi95 When your fiance and his family came to India for Diwali taehyung ff.... author if you can then please make the video length atleast 20 mins
The story was amazing but it just want you yo improve your writing... like first you said my sister's bf then but it was tae and bora pic .. seconds you said he followed taxi then you didn't mention he went back then again how come he speed up his car to her house when he was already there you said he stopped the car and saw the pic Never mentioned he reached his house or way in way .. see this lil mistake make story lil bit confusing and incomplete so please check your work after completing read it you'll make it more good then this .. all the best 💜
@@BabyTaeshi95yes yes dear I know why I said that don't worry about the above story its awesome but just lines Seems lil bit incomplete when you just jumped in another scene without clearly the last one that it ❤
