Remember *if you take a kids parents, you create a hero people want to be* *But if you do the same to the family, you Just create a broken person, which is enough*
I think the terrifying part of that is that a devil dog could last that 200 years and continue living to only see the world he once remembered, burned to ashes
1.A bit off beat 2.The line is a bit distracting 3.looks rushed Tip:Dont rush and put unnecessary things it will look much better (This isn’t hate just giving a tip)