Hey not trying to come off as mean but I am just trying to help give a suggestion, when your recording voice overs like this video, lower the volume on the gameplay as there were some points in the video when it was overtaking your voice, you can also elevate your voiceovers by also adding in some copyright free soundtracks at a low volume, nothing with words just stuff to play in the background, RU-vid offers some tracks but also just with a couple google searches you are able to find even more. I’m not sure what it is that you were recording your audio on but it came through with a lot of background noise(not actual sounds just ambient mic noise) this can be dealt with by recording your audio in box with padding, this could even be a cardboard box with a couple small pillows in it, this helps isolate your voice more so that it comes out more clear and at a higher quality, I’m not an expert but I remember that when I wanted to do youtube(turns out I wanted to be a chef more) these were some of the tips I wish I new when I was getting started, I now just implement these tricks when I’m doing personal videography and photography(something that I enjoyed before wanting to do RU-vid) I think the video was pretty good and you show promise, just little things to improve quality helps with people recognizing your content. Another thing that I think may have helped with the video would be instead of just displaying a sticker of the troop on screen, try cutting to a clip of a chest opening with that troop or even just that troop in the menu screen and then once you are done first showing the troop cut back to the same gameplay from before, an even greater effect could occur if you left the video playing underneath the layer so that they can still hear the gameplay, this would create a nice effect that I think would work well for this style of content.
