Writing Dialogue: 20 Smart Tips

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Here are 20 tips to help you learn to write dialogue and monologue for your series. Enjoy!
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@WhytMangaOdunze 7 лет назад

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@nanyummyify 7 лет назад

Whyt Manga Great tips man you are so skilled and i know you've worked hard to get where you are now. There's no where else to go but up. Keep going :)

@ChaosTool93 6 лет назад

I love movies that explain a plan exactly , but tben everything goes to shit, nothing works as indent but by chance all the steps that were planed still happen for a different reason or by accident, so at the end it leaves people wondering if the person who's plan it was, has alot of pure luck, is awesome at spontaneously adjusting the the current situation or has planned everything all along. Best thing is if the person telling this plan is in prison talking to a guard or surrounded by enemies, talking directly at them. That moment when you are told what is going to happen, and even if you do anything to stop it, you are forced to watch the plan played out as if you are just a chess figure being played without any control over to situation, is one of the most basass scenes for me to watch

@notcringeenough5158 11 месяцев назад

watch reservoir dogs, if you like heist movies, this is gonna surprise you!

@TheToonTwinzShow 7 лет назад

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@sasuke09871 7 лет назад

:O just realized you were at 125k subs, thats awesome! Ive been here since 3k.

@noahsd 3 года назад

almost to 500k

@peco3806 7 лет назад

Whyt you gotta watch Hunter X Hunter (2011), then watch Aleczandxr's videos analysing it. Trust me watching HxH and those videos will improve your story writing, I feel like it's a necessity for anyone trying to make a shounen battle story.

@MrLukabot 7 лет назад

Weeb Indeed, right now, in my opinion, I find his story very boring and his characters also.

@peco3806 7 лет назад

Honestly (just from the first 4 chapters since I'm poor) I agree sorta. I feel like there's just so much that can make this story *A LOT* better. From what he's said and the fact that it's been over a year I feel like volume 2 will be a lot better.

@peco3806 7 лет назад

Oh yeah and read *BERSERK!* Or watch the 1997 anime or Golden Age movies.

@MrLukabot 7 лет назад

Weeb I'm at chapter 147 already in Berserk. Love it and all. But I find the art style stiff a lot. In my opinion I prefer HxH's art style over Berserk.

@MrLukabot 7 лет назад

Let's hope Whyt doesn't plan to create a typical shounen that doesn't change anything.

@allaccordingtoplan5560 7 лет назад

Thanks this will definitely assist me with writing the dialogue for my manga

@arinamday5917 7 лет назад

I could watch your inking for hours, love those clean lines god bless

@duskyer2391 4 года назад

11:50 This can be seen as far as Scooby Doo. Whenever Fred explains the trap they make it rarely works vs when he doesn't explain the trap to the audience.

@cabbage790 5 лет назад

Bro I'm litterly write all this down. Seriously ' xd

@MicahBuzanANIMATION 6 лет назад

Your advice is spot on. I've been itching to try comics for awhile, and these videos are super inspiring.

@brandonjohnson9832 7 лет назад

with me being a writer this video is exactly what I needed. you should do more videos for writers, specifically how to overcome writers block.

@galacticbambi949 7 лет назад

im not a pro writer in the least but latching onto characters you develope in a story help when you can flesh them out more. Thats just me maybe. I also take experiences that i do everyday. There was one day o had writers block and while i was making tea in the morning i was thinking how cool it'd be if someone had some capability that was comparable to a kettle. Like if there blood boiled and there bones whistled, or if they had some ability to boil there blood and like have excessive scebts within it to captivate people or maybe poison people. I linda scrapped the idea, but point being Life is a great writers block block xD. Thats just me maybe

@theultimatenarutofanboy2345 7 лет назад

I love your work! Keep it up!

@knightofthewind1000 7 лет назад

How did you know? I was just struggling over this issue when you posted this, you mad man!

@cosmicroar1277 4 года назад

Thanks for the tips, WhytManga.

@laurafaes9014 7 лет назад

Thank you so much! you got the best manga-making tips :D

@artknight9921 7 лет назад

Thanks for the tips!!!

@heliosrevenant6599 7 лет назад

Awesome vid. The Tipps are really helpfull

@harrythecat8198 6 лет назад

You have talent bro !!

@elo6126 7 лет назад

here since 34k keep growing bro! make your comics to a show!

@freeyahmean 7 лет назад

Nice tips .... really helpful

@VRXconnect 5 лет назад

Great video bro, these tips helped me make a scene waay better

@blobmaster118 7 лет назад

bruh im early as shit, also cant wait for Vol.2

@drawingstuff6660 7 лет назад

I Love your channel

@harshalkolase9249 2 года назад

Dude, thanks a lot

@randoqiqks 7 лет назад

Noti squad💯💯

@spiritlesswolf2029 7 лет назад

Do you have a video on planning out a script for a manga book?

@curtisdrago 6 лет назад

You have a nice voice. I'm not a mangaka, but definitely a writer. Everything you talked about got me excited to write, but sadly, it's late and I'm tired.

@joshualadner6096 7 лет назад

I can't wait for volume 2

@galacticbambi949 7 лет назад

thanks for the tips :D

@kawaiiotakuttv9447 7 лет назад

When is the exact date when Vol. 2 is coming out!? T^T (Can't wait)

@arc3243 7 лет назад

this helped a bunch, thanks for the info

@arc3243 7 лет назад

subscribed lol

@Jack-xf3ge 7 лет назад

What type of paper do you use for your comics? I'm new to this

@WhytMangaOdunze 5 лет назад

Deleter type B B4 paper.

@king.2597 3 года назад

I think Isayama is the master of dialogue, worldbuilding, character development, and especially foreshadowing The guy is 20 steps ahead of most mangakas

@harshalkolase9249 2 года назад

Hard agree bro

@joshualadner6096 7 лет назад

The plan part about making the audience think it didn't go to plan when it did is like in Now You See Me 2 with the plane and it was all set up!

@TheHaakii 7 лет назад

Just ordered a copy of vol 1

@daevionking5469 7 лет назад

Hey Whyt Manga can you do a tutorial on how to draw different body types?

@ignaciocardoza307 Год назад

I'm sketching as a watch this. When he said Sometimes silence can be the best response... that hit hard for me lol

@leenewey4683 6 лет назад

So the speech bubbles are drawn and the text is done on the computer ? what program is it you use ?

@tristanclendenen6621 2 года назад

Really helped me out but slow down a lil dawg lol u jus rattle off like 16 things at once but when I got use to that u really helped me out

@anirudhshokhanda863 6 лет назад

Hi I run a manga myself and I want to thank you whyte manga as I didn't know how to do it you helped me to make the manga in which I am the typesetter and it helped me very much thank you whyte manga

@eri-hn2er 4 года назад

I know I'm like really late but can you tell me the name of your manga I would like to read it 😁🙃

@phapmai7294 7 лет назад

thank you whyt maga .I drawre you

@katarzynadolegowski1485 3 года назад

Grimmjow!!

@fennecfox7172 7 лет назад

can you make manga hairstyles that are close to the present one? like 2017 hairstyles

@eclair1998 6 лет назад

How do you write dialogue when someone is speaking a different language?

@wiggie666 5 лет назад

im guessing thats the interface of manga studio 5 . yes i think I got this stuff down , thx. do you go to comic con at all ?

@io-qg8ur 5 лет назад

*foreshadow with swag*

@igrgic1 5 лет назад

do you use any specific font of some kind or do you to the writing yourself?

@something298 7 лет назад

Thanks!

@something298 7 лет назад

Amazing tips!

@something298 7 лет назад

Cant believe i was first!

@frostegames836 2 года назад

Do you also wanna make manga? :)

@shilforiakaptaper2088 7 лет назад

im crying i love your vids

@shilforiakaptaper2088 7 лет назад

like plz whyt manga

@MrJerkdude1 7 лет назад

Wow crazy fan alert XD

@michellenguyen7152 7 лет назад

May I ask what kind of paper is best for line art?

@Creeperboy099 4 года назад

I keep feeling like my story has some holes in it

@jloveseveryone2253 7 лет назад

Whyt manga can do a video how to draw a manga cover plz

@tarunryadav5471 6 лет назад

Whyt Manga akibento is not available for India and I'm from India

@nephtaliejalbert 7 лет назад

If you can make a video of why do mangaka in Japan have phrases on their covers like in Bleach volume 1 it's titled Death and the Strawberry. Is there a reason for that?

@alexark4893 6 лет назад

Nephtalie Albert it's the name of the volume

@nephtaliejalbert 6 лет назад

Crimson Creeper oh okay. Is it necessary to have it? Is what I'm asking.

@alexark4893 6 лет назад

Nephtalie Albert Not Really, seeing as the volume name is actually in the book, but I can guess it can be nice for decoration

@jdhdragon12 7 лет назад

can you push for a SAHD:AM app?

@joiizzal 7 лет назад

did you suspend the drawing of original characters

@itzjdn8048 7 лет назад

When the hell do we get a paperback volume 2 on Apple black

@taozuki 4 года назад

@BigMamaPizza_ 5 лет назад

Which kind of program do you use in this video

@theinsanebeam2097 6 лет назад

How many pages do you prefer for a chapter

@sticki8862 6 лет назад

800th Like

@wehateven 7 лет назад

Hi guys

@nazgul4228 6 лет назад

OMG my charachter is soo similar!

@jloveseveryone2253 7 лет назад

Shoutout to the early squad

@saisumitpatnaik7886 4 года назад

Which application is that

@blobmaster118 7 лет назад

i did the survey and i love the poster man! Also i hope i win a subscription, goodluck to everyone else who entered. :)

@rocketmanart7964 6 лет назад

When I come up with characters I put myself into the character

@BigBoyNoel01 7 лет назад

FIRST boi

@tomgipps2478 3 года назад

Rethorical questions...

@harrythecat8198 6 лет назад

Its you draw this pages of manga ???

@WhytMangaOdunze 6 лет назад

yeah

@redpanda8814 Год назад

Who's deku?

@archangelwing 7 лет назад

I've been wondering how to pronouce Fattimunga's name for the longest time lol. I've been pronouncing it in my head "Fatty munga" lol i'm so sorry Wait, SANO'S A GIRL????