Nice job on the cover, but it's not perfect, I can see and hear that this cover was a tad bit hard for you bcs of its tempo and fast fills, your hands messed up some fills and couldn't execute them rhythmically, my peace of advice would be to practice more with your hands, playing 16th notes, trying to learn the accented 8th note groove with your right hand and try to learn this track at a slower tempo, slow it down till you feel comfortable with the fills and different grooves, play it till you can play it near perfect several times, then just increase the tempo by 5 and try to perfect that and so on till you reach the original tempo, remember to take breaks, you don't want to overwork the small muscles in your hands and just practice practice and more practice. You're doing a great job! EDIT: Metronome is key, always if u practice some grooves or fills, turn that thing on and play along it.
Thanks for the advice! I will work on it on my free time so that I can improve my drumming skills. Also I appreciate that you even watched and commented on my video!