This is pretty good for your first AMV. My first edit of an AMV was for an anime called Blue Drop. It's a good yuri anime but quite underrated and is not well noticed. I made an AMV of blue drop just a few days ago, I was wounding if you would like to take a look at it maybe ^^ if not that's fine too
I don't think I will ever find a GL as good as Bloom into you. I appreciate the aroace representation with Maki and the demiromantic/demisexual representation with Yuu so much. Plus, the characters are so good, I bought the manga, the spin-off light novels written by the same person who wrote Adachi and Shimamura, and the two anthology manga. I wish the anime could get a second season to finish the story though.