YAIRA #1 Review: The  

First review I've seen. This was great. From the little I've seen on the pages, the book looks good. Well done to Debora Carita.

Goodyng is coming out next month. You won’t have to wait

This is the most honest review I have scene. I can't argue with any of your points. There were a couple of pages where I wasn't sure i was reading the panels in the right order. The overall story was good and I will definitely get #2

The fight scenes felt disjointed to me. When they started popping in and out of the lab…I thought I missed a page.

I enjoyed the art more than the previous books, but I still don't like the buildings, each artist should have a different and look when it comes to drawing builds, but it looks the same as the previous books. The dialogue was the weaker than the other books. Too much monologuing from both antagonists and protagonists. Like it was trying to use up pages to fit in the 90 or 100 pages.

I must admit I hae a problem with Graphic Novels. Nothing to do with (often amazing) artwork, or the writing. I'm old, nearing 70 now, and I did collect DC and Marvel and Dark Horse in my younger days, but I've always been a reader and appreciate the author letting my build my own images of peole and places. I think that's why I love Peter Jackson's LotR films.. the images very closely resemble what I imagined when first reading it. Immense respect for the vision of the people who made those films. Another book series recommendation. I'm currently about half way through Steven Erikson's Malazan series. This is a 10-book (currently) series, each a little shorter than Wheel of Time books). Erikson makes a point in the first book - This is somewhat difficult to read, but perseverence pays off. Nothing wrong with the prose itself. It's very evocative. It also can be disorienting, switching characters, sometimes several times in a page. The charactewrs themselves are beautifully written. The series also jumps between different times so the books aren't linear. BUT the world is explained in context so that's not bad.

Panels are cluttered and the story lacked flow, in my opinion. I enjoyed Von’s Haunted Castle review of this book. He pretty much hit the nail on the head.

Alphacore was the best, Isom2 then Isom i loved the artwork on Yaira but i didnt like Yaira story or the action it didnt flow right to me and it felt all over the place

Weaker than Isom...boy.