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The main thing I took away from this video was to be extremely specific and avoid vague language. I've definitely been working on that more than anything with my own essay but hearing it again (along with an example of what not to do) was a good reminder to read everything line by line again. Quick question though, have you ever read a true 10/10, or is that more of a "unicorn tier"?
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I have a question. I have seen all these essays you've read and noticed that alot of them have a part where they make a point about some organization or something they've done the recent years. My essay doesn't have that, is it like super important to talk about an accomplishment that probably will already be in my activities section or maybe in a supplemental essay?
from what i have noticed, these accomplishments arent based on some organization or something, these are "self-accomplishments" - what they learnt, what they became and using such organisations they are describing or illustrating " how they accomplished certain values ". So yeah my take from this is that, present a moment from your life, point out what happened, how it happened, and what impact it had on u followed by how that event shaped you. Like mentioned in the video, using non--cliche words for values will be better than typical ones -"determination, work ethic, and etc" .
Probably because he was reviewing the essays that have been previously sent ..i appreciate that he is helping people ☺️ surely wouldn't be able to review all ..but still helping many through these vids
