[YTP] Spingebill and RickPat Go To Jail After Illegally Obtaining A Xbox Series X 

You’re editing and subtle jokes are getting better. I actually laughed out loud a few times

“QUIDWAAARD needs to be locked up forever!” 😆

I love how the jokes help adding to the story it’s trying to tell

0:15 Squidward needs to be locked up forever

This was pretty funny. I appreciated the ho-oh reference and for some reason Patrick in GameStop hit me funny.

The Halo Infinite joke is the funniest joke lmao

Spingebill: uh oh, I'm broke too *shows Joseph Stalin* 🤣

My mom is sleeping I tried not to laugh 😂

This is Underrated this deserves more views

Got this in my recommended, I am not disappointed

Pretty good vid, I left a like. The main thing I would recommend is just polishing the pacing a bit more and trimming unnecessary bits that don't really add anything (keep in mind poopisms/random edits like 2:07 aren't just filler, they really help with the pacing of your video and can be funny - by unnecessary parts I mean trimming unedited segments and the ends of jokes to make them flow together better) 0:36 the "alright then" could probably be shortened 1:10 is pretty funny 1:15-1:26 is just one joke, which is kinda slow imo... I do like the idea of longer continuous jokes/sections but I find they work better when there are multiple jokes shorter jokes being made at the same time the longer one is going on 1:44 it's a little awkward how the earrape audio cuts out before other sound starts 1:46 I can understand what patrick says here, but try to make the pitch and volume more even across the sentence mix. dw too much, L's are annoying (for your own sanity, try to avoid having to sentence mix a word containing "rl" like "girl," "curl," or "world," it is the most obnoxious combination of letters I've ever had to deal with by far) 1:47 sounds like "and ing is okay as long as we bring it back" 1:52 doesn't make much sense at first (which is completely fine, it's a YTP... it would prob be funny if the screen went black and they just started screaming for no reason in the middle of another scene) but then when you see them at 1:55 it just sorta feels like a copout 2:00 really good transition to another episode, the only reason I even realized was because the quality of the video drops slightly at 2:03 2:03-2:07 is a little long for an unedited section that not building up to a more major joke... that being said, 2:07-2:12 is one of my favorite parts (and would be even funnier with better pacing) so good job there 2:08 black bars come in the sides during the "uhh" part, which was a little distracting. Also, I think if the space between the bank teller finishing speaking and the audio of the "uhh" starting was just slightly shorter, it would be way funnier. Still, pretty good joke as is 2:19 the longer unedited section here (the "a balance of zero dollars and zero cents" ) before the "now get out" actually works fine, but it may be better if you cut it off at "a balance of zero dollars." This was prob one of my favorite jokes in the vid 2:29 probably start the audio a little later here, also police car lights aren't strobe lights 2:34 this may be my favorite joke in the video, it's sorta obvious in the original source but that doesn't matter, you made it work well not a big fan of object labelling (like at 3:22) in videos but that's just personal preference. 3:47 BIG missed opportunity for a callback joke to 2:22, would work even better if you made Mr. Krabs say that somewhere near the beginning

The Sonic X reference was unexpected but appreciated.

3:18 now I'm gonna S T A R V E !!!!!!!!!

0:26 ok that’s it if I ever own a barrel I am brandishing it with that text

1:07 National Bank of Russia lol

Thank you for warning us about the earrape ahead of time! :D

That Stalin joke was gold

Words to live by: "If you can't do the crime, don't do the time."

''We just steal the Xbox''

Squidward needs to be locked up forever

And I lost my last braincells 🤣

Amazing job on this RU-vid poop!

Im just a broken man.,

I love this thank you for making that😂

I loved the Hershey's candy bars joke! 😂 #Hersheysbarswithalmonds

They threw Squidward in jail for wanton ugliness

I love how he made Patrick say Ho-Oh

Okay, this is epic

Spongebob ytps just hit different

This was pretty good, not overly gross either

2:29 S E S

I love the Capital One joke

McDonald's Gamespot Meet Spingebill and RickPat

Lags too bad and I love it

It's really good keep up the good work cuz we need more ytp spongebob videos like this, and besides practice makes perfect

It’s funny

Epic video

I noticed some good sentence mixing like with the word Russia and Hershey's, keep working at it, there's always an audience for this.

Spongebob is big jill confirmed

2:46, forget about the fanboys, you missed the chance to burn the Switch lite

1:46 sounded like he said stewie

1:23 Well.... that certainly turned out to be a relevant joke again.

It's like 2010 all over again. (even though i was born since 2011 and watch YTPs in 2018)

This title is gold

1:01 You know Patrick’s navel is a black hole when you see a f*cking Olive Garden 🤣🤣

YES YTPS ARE STILL A TGING

Best YTP Video Ever.

0:55 windows xp media center startup sound

"ehcks-BOKS"

Squidward needs a full face mask

Surprisingly relatable

Nice work lol

Video idea Patrick play cyberpunk 2077

"now im gonna S T A R V E"

hey, not bad! This was pretty good, keep it up, please make more spingebill ytp's

1:20 not- so russian bank

Life Of Crime

Patrick can't steel are Xboxes!!!

Nice video might check out some of your other videos and subscribe

Ima PlayStation person I don’t believe in console wars

😊 speaking of Xboxes I have one. Well my brother has one she you put that the thing that I have in your video

0:28 That's an iPhone X. Get it right, Spinge.

This is awesome 😂

2:46 lol

0:55

2:45 patrick stole the xbox

😃

Dude. If you make another YTP you can use one of my videos for a clip o a the YTP! And if you wanna I can make you a intro.

What the bill this is more like mad at Disney

Someone needs to remind me, and nothing at all against the guy who made this. But didn’t someone else also make that same joke at 0:07 by using the Mermaid Man and Barnacle Boy clip in place of what was on the TV originally?

Ses 💀💀

But funny and cool

What episode does this take place in?

Lol

jesus wtf is with the flashing at 2:31

6666 EVIL VIEWS

1:22 Unfunny, should have been capitalism instead.

Not funny