You are on the right track with the last third of this song, chopping it and playing with those loops more giving it your touch will sound dope, the first 2/3 just feels like an overlay its no life how the two worlds blend.... Ur great fairy mix is amazing. Im not a "non-hiphop trap" fan tho im a fan of great production. Keep it going.
SECRET: open this in an free audio editing program called "Audacity" and "Hit Ctrl + A to select all then go to....Effect> Change Speed> Set Speed to 2.0 or 3.0" (dont go to Speed 2x on youtube's video play, follow the instructions and see if you're hearing what Im hearing, reply to this comment if you've done so)
You measures start on the offbeat instead of the beat for the Light World Dungeon. It's ok, though. I've done the same thing with other songs like the X-Files theme and a song from the opening of King's Quest 6. I can't hear them any other way.