Ok I think I get it after this guy went on his rampage killing 9 people he jump infront of her car and committed suicide. at least that’s what it looked like towards the end with the flashback. I just assumed in the beginning of the film it was a hit and run. But the ending looked like in flashbacks that he jumped in front of her car on purpose but the last shot of the film where she is laughing and cracking up I didn’t exactly get.
Even in the silence, you kept the tension alive! If you love being immersed in horror films, my latest short Coming From The Room 2 is right up your alley. Would love to hear what you think!
Hi, I loved this short film, actress acting was really great, the cinematography and color grading are just so beautiful, and the ending plot in that red room showed versatility and creativity. Well done!
@@2100films I could see darkness on the wall from someone standing there. Also the reflection in the glass. If that scene were clipped just a second later in the beginning it would appear more naturally to me. Right now it looks like this is take #5 and he's waiting for "action" lol :p
I totally felt this!! i do wonder how it would have played without just the “uncanny valley music.” sound design is such an important part of especially horror movies. the way something like a soft, minor, soundtrack during the alley scenes and changing as he’s running away or something would have skyrocketed the short film to new scary heights! i get being on a budget, but even though i’m personally not an expert, for horror-type things in the future, it could be beneficial to even get someone who plays violin/piano to play something copyright free softly in a minor key! and as cheesy as it is, having the sudden notes to almost indicate a jump scare can elevate the perception of the fear the main character is feeling and give it to the audience! just the main thing i observed ❤ it was amazing! I also do believe that part of “predictability” may have been leaving a lot of natural sounds for the clips without adding those little minor-key notes that can make a world of difference! bringing the audience out of their mind and into the moment of the film!
Wow!!! Now THIS is a comment. Thank you thank you thank you. We’ll definitely take this feedback and apply it to our next one. Thank you for being immersed and taking the time to let us know what would work better for the general audience 🖤
Yes I agree with this! Sound can really help With a building in Suspense! Most common example is In Jaws, When the sound plays it has this effect on the mind when you know something bad is gonna happen and you’re waiting for it- even adding it faintly can show great results in the internal fear.
