I think you could make it more interesting by adding more harmonic rhythm. You should start by using diatonic chords (chords that belong to the key). Once you're familiar with it, you could try to use chords that aren't in the key. I highly suggest you watch the "Music Matters" channel and his playlist, "Best chords to follow." And others. He explain everything very clearly :)
I apologize that I didn't comment on your pieces for a long time because I was reading for my exam and doing homework. I did listen to some of your new pieces before, but I didn't comment because I wanted to type something that might actually help you improve your composition. For this piece, I really like the fun and playful marching rhythm.
@@datepikduk3267Well, a prelude is an introductory performance of almost free form (otherwise it would become a fantasy), and it precedes or prepares for the principal or a more important matter, like a fugue or rest of a suite (as sarabande, courante, minuet I & II, gigue, passepied or any combination of those according a tradicional order). Preludes are mostly baroque while this one looks like one of Mozart's easiest sonatas for piano. The absence of polyphony, the fact that it is meant for piano, not a mysterious or complex opening, the attempt of a galant style with an easy bass and melody with short notes ornamented, make me judge it like a sonata, although it's true sonatas have in general 3 movements.
Thanks for your opinion. 😁 It’s true that I compose this and meant it to be a first movement of a sonata but I wanted to do a specific study on 3 periods of classical music and try to do some exercise on each period as a prelude. I know that I don’t always name and write the music correctly but I do get som tips on comments like you do. Thanks for listening anyway. ❤
I think I like the energetic atmosphere of this piece and the nice use of the chromatic scale at 1:23. For further improvement, I would suggest you compose a piece based on your improvisation. It's really important to remember that trusting your ears is fundamental to composing, not music theory or musical technique. Improvisation allows you to play the piece by yourself and makes a musical phrase sound more natural and have better harmony. I hope you will have an amazing composing journey :)
Wow!,I really appreciate for the feedback! You really looked through my music and know that I tried to use a lot of theory in this piece 😅. I’m a little bit burnt out on writing music lately, but you cheered my up and would love to continue composing ❤. Also you are my first comment in this channel, I hope you also compose a lot of great master piece and be famous from your work ❤❤.
@@SKVMGallery This is the channel where I post my own compositions. That one is for commenting on RU-vid. I'm glad to know that my words cheered you up. Also, thank you for your kind words. I know that my music isn't very well known, but I'm still happy to express my story and emotions in the form of art that I love. I know exactly what it's like when you have no one to give you constructive comments when you need them the most. It can make you feel like you have lost track of your progress. I suggest you try experimenting and playing with different types of music from different musical periods, like baroque, classical, romantic, Impressionism, etc. Remember that when it comes to any form of art, the message is the most important thing, and embellishments should not take over the message you try to express to the audience. I'm sure that I'm going to comment more on your pieces in the future :D
