I think I like the energetic atmosphere of this piece and the nice use of the chromatic scale at 1:23. For further improvement, I would suggest you compose a piece based on your improvisation. It's really important to remember that trusting your ears is fundamental to composing, not music theory or musical technique. Improvisation allows you to play the piece by yourself and makes a musical phrase sound more natural and have better harmony. I hope you will have an amazing composing journey :)
Wow!,I really appreciate for the feedback! You really looked through my music and know that I tried to use a lot of theory in this piece 😅. I’m a little bit burnt out on writing music lately, but you cheered my up and would love to continue composing ❤. Also you are my first comment in this channel, I hope you also compose a lot of great master piece and be famous from your work ❤❤.
@@SKVMGallery This is the channel where I post my own compositions. That one is for commenting on RU-vid. I'm glad to know that my words cheered you up. Also, thank you for your kind words. I know that my music isn't very well known, but I'm still happy to express my story and emotions in the form of art that I love. I know exactly what it's like when you have no one to give you constructive comments when you need them the most. It can make you feel like you have lost track of your progress. I suggest you try experimenting and playing with different types of music from different musical periods, like baroque, classical, romantic, Impressionism, etc. Remember that when it comes to any form of art, the message is the most important thing, and embellishments should not take over the message you try to express to the audience. I'm sure that I'm going to comment more on your pieces in the future :D
