@@Aremih-C u welcome, i'm hearing this type of genre for inspo, cause im making a 2nd instrumental álbum for fun (hobby) and honestly disco for me its a little bit difficult, cause i love tons of details from electronic music. And disco is more simple at details.
Hey boy be careful what wish for you said you wanted more well im here on the floor when my hips move its a new wave hitting you heart against the rocky shore give me all you got Mr. sweet Mr. lover touch my soul that's a million colors is this what they like to call surrending to the heart's wild calls When we touch I am flame to his fire When he feels what I feel heaven is so near If this is love pour me another one I'm dancing with my inner child dancing like shiva with a third eye be my king be my chance and my jupiter
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It's a good beat and vibe blew my mind. But as a suggestion i think you should diversify more in terms of chord progressions and elements. It's very hard for a songwriter to keep hearing the same sounds and chords and come up with a hit song. The song must vary a little bit more, keep you on your toes all the time. Otherwise it's just another beat, another lyrics, nothing special
are you the one? are you my sun, my moon and my eternity? call you my hun but that don't mean there is no bitter to my sweet how can the lace be white if the hearts still black I like em strong, fun I like them bad come lay on my lap one tear drop is all I got I was phenomix in my past life And when i burn into ashes in your fire im a flawless diamond never look back always on track so sweet but always colder to the touch
are you happy? now that you’ve painted me as the bad guy i should’ve seen it coming but i was too caught up loving every inch of you while you’ve been stripping away every inch of me what should i do
Hi, I love your music! If I am gonna ever to be brave enough to publish my songs I would definitely use your beats. Keep going and developing that talent! Best regards
(Verse 1) In a summer of melancholy, Where love and dreams turn cold, Ulises and Morena, lost souls, In a tale yet to be told. (Pre-Chorus) They danced beneath the twilight, A whirlwind of passion in their eyes, But the grip of darkness took hold, And whispered painful goodbyes. (Chorus) Oh, the summer we can't forget, joy turned to regret, Lost in the haze of drugs and despair, Suicide in the name of love, so unfair. (Verse 2) Through the haze of smoke and, They searched for solace in vain, The pain unbearable, their hearts shattered, Their love consumed by the strain. (Pre-Chorus) They longed for a love everlasting, found only fleeting moments of bliss, Their souls intertwined, yet broken, Lost in a melancholic abyss. (Chorus) Oh, the summer we can't forget, Where joy turned regret, Lost in the haze of drugs and despair, Suicide in the name of love, so unfair. (Bridge) But hope never truly disappears, Even in the darkest of nightsA glimmer of light breaks through, Guiding them towards new heights. (Verse 3) From the ashes of their broken hearts, They found strength to carry on, United in pain and scars, Together they'd find a new dawn. (Pre-Chorus) No longer lost in the depths of sorrow, They embraced the beauty of life, Choosing love and healing despair, Their spirits determined to thrive. (Chorus) Oh, the summer we can't forget, Where joy turned to regret, Lost in the haze of drugs and despair, Su in the name of love, so unfair. (Outro) In the end, love triumphs over pain, Ulises and Morena found their way, Through the darkness and theThey discovered a brighter day.
