hi i’m yuno! :) (she/her) i don’t have much going on here since i’m most active on my instagram, @yunopinguuu, but this channel is basically for whenever i feel like making a video and posting it!
bro i absolutely love the way your story is going!!! ur redesigns are sooo pretty too, love all your little ideas for the characters and BRO I JS LOVE THIS SM
Ur art is sooo pretty <3 !! I also don't know if this was intentional or not, but I love how the shading in Ryoba's hair somewhat resembles devil horns !
6:30 about honami she actually loves occultism and they are some theorys that she was or is occultist and cause she gaves senpai as a present book about occultism....she is very suspicious
Your Soko makes me want a game, book, manga, or series about a detective girl that looks just like them with that exact concept. They have to pretend to love the main guy in order to lure out the killer, however along the way as she's spending more time with him, both characters actually do fall for each other.
I liked the concept you had in mind for the characters, but Ryoba's redesign didn't convince me, her design made her look like another character. I know it's an Au. In any case, I would have made the protagonist retain certain features that make her see that she is Ryoba.
i definitely see your points thank you! i should’ve made her little horns on the top of her head more prominent since that was what i was going for, plus a subtle background character look. but my grown up design of her looks alot more similar to her original design!🩵🩵
Now that I look at it, Alex loves to have the same body type for every girl and also the short skirt is something that people get dress coded for in school.
I mean it's unity model and there probems with anims only female characters who doesn't have short skirts is delinquents girls so it's possible to do longer skirts then I think he could make shy characters have long skirts
This is the only thing he got correct , in Japan it's short skirt supremacy not like in other countries , rolling your skirt so it can appear shorter is very popular too , remember we are in Japan not America ! But for the 80s it's true that they had longer skirts at a certain time
BTW I LOVE YOUR ART! below is me criticizing storytelling and leaving my own opinion so beware [which is just mine for anyone who reads this im not saying it has to be like this lol] im the only one who hates the idea of the jokichi thing,,,, i personally find it to be an unnecessary addition [and i think if you want evil, or psychological theres a ton of more ways you’d go about that since that doesn’t scratch the surface really? she kidnaps him regardless and manipulates him so they’re not going to be his genuine feelings anyhow, sexuality wouldn’t be a plot point i’d personally consider here if i wanted *dark*. i mean you don’t even have to make him gay for this [for the record im not saying this out of homophobia, im literally queer] so it does feel like its just a way to make him gay. a way you could go about that i suppose though is considering it is the 80s you can make him deathly afraid of someone finding out he’s gay, and she can use this to manipulate him, threatening his secret and could be used for a mind break route. although i personally still don’t love that i don’t think it’d be the worst storytelling! personally i think a way to go about that instead of that is instead of him slowly just getting depressed because of his friends dying, it could be used to make him anxious instead. she could leave hints, make it specific points where it has to be “his fault” he no longer feels like he can speak to anyone and begins to self isolate. this is when she can pick him up from his troubles, while now being closer to manipulate him even more. for the plot point of their marriage being darker, i think by this point he’s already going to have a clear idea of what his wife really is [since…she kidnaps him originally.] his feelings never mattered in this however, only the ideal of their relationship. mind break would be a huge thing for this plot point i feel and especially since they’d need to portray themselves perfectly fine infront of ayano, since i dont think ryoba would want her daughter to necessarily be introduced to their dynamic [and this is also the basis for her to continue the cycle, not see the behind the scenes]
i absolutely adore this rewrite its so creative, the changes to jokichi’s character make so much sense for the story & the points you made i love them so much, tysm for taking the time to write this aswell!🩵
@@yunopinguuu the male rival introduction has much more attention than the female rival lol xD I would TOTALLY love to see them in your art style, but of course, take your time. <333
the way your tone COMPLETELY changed once you hit jokichi i’m here for it tho 😭😭😭😭 his design was supposed to be like ‘an average boy’ but that’s not average that’s raggedy
It has nothing to do but Its actually canon that sonoko KNOWS that ryoba is a killer, But didn’t said anything out of fear that Ryoba would harm her (because she knew ryoba is capable of hurting her and getting away with it) Because canonically ryoba did enter in the asylum, and after the trial Sonoko and ryoba NEVER talked again
Hey there! I really enjoyed your redesign, your art style is simply wonderful. But there was something that made me a bit uncomfortable with, how you include Ghost Girl ADHD. While I appreciate the attempt to portray a character with ADHD, I noticed that her bad grades were attributed to it, which felt a bit off. It's crucial to acknowledge that ADHD manifests differently for everyone, and using it as a justification might inadvertently reinforce stereotypes. As someone who has lived with ADHD all my life, I've encountered the misconception that having good grades means you don't have ADHD. However, ADHD can also manifest in hyperfocus, leading to forgetting basic needs like eating. I understand you didn't intend any harm, but I'd suggest researching ADHD a bit more. Consider portraying neurodivergent characters without attaching specific reasons or justifications to their traits. Keep up the great work!
this is a really good and important topic thank you for taking the time to write this and i totally agree, i didn’t put too much thought into her disability since she is a very minor character but i should’ve stated your point in the video!! i also have adhd and did terribly in school so i tried to relate my experiences with hers but i understand its different for everyone :) i 100% did not mean any harm but i’ll take this feedback into consideration when writing something similar to this in the future🩵🩵
