Good work but remember you are translating the actual. Translation lot of knowledge lost. It's done in kalyug and of ignorance. God gives esoteric meaning so not easy to understand. It's not literal translation.
Dvaita and advait are same. Till no creation advait. Creation dvait but every thing as essence of the one so really no difference. It's like taking pot of water it has different shape but the essence it has water.
