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@katsarelas1947 10 месяцев назад

Yoooou might wanna brighten the “s” on the thumbnail 😅

@ultimaweapon6 10 месяцев назад

Bro same

@Ratking_Actual 10 месяцев назад

I came here only to say this, because of how dark the S is I read cumbags and was like wat

@allorab7356 10 месяцев назад

And you have me who was thinking the last letter s not the first smh and when I saw it…finally I was like ohhhhh😮😮😮 and then 😂😂😂

@sh0wtime1 10 месяцев назад

😂

@TheErikjsm 10 месяцев назад

omg yes i only came here to say that lmao

@TWGrim 10 месяцев назад

Aside from the slight mishap with the thumbnail (lol) this was an EXCELLENT reading of my story. In my opinion, MCP is one of the best voice actors in the RU-vid narrating community. A good reading can elevate a mediocre story, but even a top-tier work cannot rise above a mediocre reading. You're a treasure, MCP. Stay well and keep hitting it out of the park, sir! 🎉💪

@Nikotov3 10 месяцев назад

The way you write is so awesome to me. Everything you write has meaning and everything is in so great detail I can image the whole scene playing out as a movie. Absolutely incredible writing.

@TWGrim 10 месяцев назад

@@Nikotov3Thank you, I appreciate that 🙏

@jerrythecartoonist 10 месяцев назад

I enjoyed the hell out of this story! It's so well paced; it feels like it could've been a movie itself. I liked how real the characters felt, very flawed, but in a good way. You should write audio dramas, no cap. This was very cinematic.

@TWGrim 10 месяцев назад

@jerrythecartoonist Thank you. If you haven't already heard it, you might also like my story "Echoes," which explores the subject of PTSD, war, and intergenerational trauma. MCP did a great job on it!

@jerrythecartoonist 10 месяцев назад

@@TWGrim I haven't heard it. I'll be sure to check it out!

@Bluesit32 10 месяцев назад

You know...I kinda get it. It wasn't about the money or anything. It was about achieving a dream. He had it right in front of him and it was taken away. A chance to hear his story, see his characters on screen and know that he made it happen. And if he got money out of it, he could buy an award for himself. Nothing as tacky as a golden statue, but just a reminded that sometimes, if only briefly, a dream can come true. Ten pages telling him what his dreams were worth. What's he got left?

@p1car0_redbeard99 10 месяцев назад

I love how the police are killing and maiming some of the hostages themselves 🤣🤣👊👊

@TiffanyStarrxxx 10 месяцев назад

They're use to that

@Bluesit32 10 месяцев назад

No maim. Just killing.

@p1car0_redbeard99 10 месяцев назад

@@TiffanyStarrxxx 🤣🤣

@BreakingNVain 10 месяцев назад

I love it when they throw in some random realism in these stories

@authorauthority7193 9 месяцев назад

Thats conspiracy theory, the police report says they were killed by the criminal

@nancyallen603 10 месяцев назад

I say leave the S just the way it is. And even tho you, Sir, are not aware, we have spent many many hours together in the last few years. I have truly enjoyed each and every story. Thank you so very much. As always..... I'll be listening and impatiently waiting for the next one. Be safe.....Be happy.

@creepyangelhair 10 месяцев назад

Ohhhh stalkerrrr. Hahaha 😂😂😂 she said, "You may not know it, but we have spent many many hours together in the last few years." Like girl what?! 😂😂 I'm jk honestly same. ❤

@KBdaFranchize-mk8gx 10 месяцев назад

I agree

@tylerkehoe3901 10 месяцев назад

9U,X 58:00 BY 58:00 G hi u5k

@kevinfox500 10 месяцев назад

Same here. A good fit for a distraction from my phantom pain, And itch. The reason I can't sleep for now.

@TheBaconStrip 10 месяцев назад

Ahh yes, more TW Grim. One of my absolute favorite authors in the business. I've never heard nor read one of his stories that I didn't like.

@doctornagalli3321 10 месяцев назад

This story does something to a person. It divides them, at least for me it did. Because on one hand, when the antagonist explained his side, I totally get where he is coming from, since I am an aspiring musician working at a dead-end job, trying to write masterpieces. So I REALLY rooted for him when the lawyer, director, and others that knew him were killed. BUT when the actress and the rest were dropping the facts of how the entertainment world is cold and will capitalize on anyones hard work if it's within the confines of the law, and he just had to get over it and move forward to make something new, I understood those points, but I also felt like what they said was uncalled for. So I was hoping he'd end up sparing them UNTIL they just straight started calling him a loser. This is an amazing story, standing ovation to this author, and standing ovation to Mr Creepypasta for this amazing narration! (I also have a soft spot for "And Then There Were None". So I started making the connections well before it was referenced)

@personman8734 19 дней назад

The Intruder’s motivations are really beautifully written. It’s clear that he never wanted money or success. He wanted the recognition that something he made could be great but he was denied that. He kills Carmine on the spot because after everything he still only sees this as a problem because of money. You look at it like that you really start to realize why their attempts to calm him down, only sent him over the edge because it only validates that none of them are at the top because they care about art. They’re at the top because they were ruthless, selfish and money grubbing. They only see art in the bounds of how successful it can make them. He only spares Carla because she’s a lot like he was before he was robbed. She’s working a job going nowhere, and just wants her chance on the big screen.

@daydrip 10 месяцев назад

You know I’m kind of on the antagonist side in this story 😂

@lesliewolfe7643 10 месяцев назад

Me too. Glad I'm not the only one 🙂

@akirra92 10 месяцев назад

He's the protagonist since the story is about him

@LSB44446 10 месяцев назад

I think everyone is. Hollywood types don't have a lot of humanity to them

@akirra92 10 месяцев назад

Carla was protagonistic, but that's about it.

@daydrip 10 месяцев назад

@@LSB44446 if any stories of the Hollywood parties have even a little merit to them. Then ya these people are quite the degens

@nodokaxnegi4ever 10 месяцев назад

Dude was true to his word, he allowed the only innocent one to survive. Tho, honestly, if I was the intruder in this exact scenario, I would've probably escorted her to a different room as to not traumatize her as much.

@thehyenamakeupslayer3819 10 месяцев назад

My God imma bad person! 😢 ida shot her ass too 🥺🥺

@chilledyeti116 10 месяцев назад

You know, this was one of the first stories that brought out a genuine guttural reaction from me. I’m not saying it’s bad, it was actually quite well written. What I’m talking about is that as the story unfolded, I just felt this growing sickening feeling in my stomach. Like even tho the character’s weren’t the most ‘innocent’ people, the story made it seem like there was no hope for anyone. A theoretical and actual slaughter. Ig it was the human aspect of the story. Like none of the actions could be blamed on a fantastical monster. The story was all about just pure human madness and depravity.

@doctornagalli3321 10 месяцев назад

It's kinda like the 2019 Joker film. It makes you feel for a villain. To quote Jeremy Jahns in his review of that movie, "OH SHIT, I UNDERSTAND HIM! oh shit, i understand him."

@raymondmckinney1565 10 месяцев назад

This was one of the best longer stories I have heard in awhile great job Mr Creepy Pasta

@heatherangel7703 10 месяцев назад

This would be a perfect movie!!! Any one else agree?!

@MathewSteeleAtheology 10 месяцев назад

Samuel L. Jackson for the intruder.

@LSB44446 10 месяцев назад

Don't take this writer's work without crediting him!

@mikeyputnam4299 10 месяцев назад

@@LSB44446was literally about to say that 😂😂

@acechoice45 10 месяцев назад

yes

@Cynthiathecowardlyperra 10 месяцев назад

This story reminds me of when Creepsmcpasta had his story taken and made into a movie, without any credit to him. I think I remember the movie being Lights Out. I always felt bad for him after it :(

@Robjec53 10 месяцев назад

I'd never heard of this before, and this comment made me look into it. Ot really seems like he just had a few similar ideas.

@darthderek 10 месяцев назад

"Say my name." "You're Heisenberg." "You're goddamn right."

@MelniaShadow 10 месяцев назад

Love that 2 victims got kill by the rescuer lol

@crazybieberchic 10 месяцев назад

Thats my favorite part too lol

@colesate6086 10 месяцев назад

It’s fitting that Carla escapes. The intruder wins in the end, in some twisted way. He got what he wanted. The lawyer who threatened him. Dead. The movie people that stole from him. Dead. Elizabeth, who failed to call out everyone else, despite knowing it was shitty? Dead. In the end, the only one who escaped was the only one who did nothing to him, to anybody. An outsider just like him who was dragged into a shitty situation by everyone else. But it can’t be said that she won. The trauma will haunt her forever. The nightmares. The memories. The guilt of being the only one left. The only one who didn’t die deserves it as a mercy

@Uniquely-Unoriginal 10 месяцев назад

Awesomely narrated! Love the different voices and the emotion in your voice(s). T.W. Grim wrote a great story in this one; really enjoyed it!

@maggieorellana2 10 месяцев назад

This is the single best narration I’ve heard you do yet The story is incredible. Real feels absolutely possible put me in the room. I got pissed off for him. It’s just absolutely bat. Shit crazy cool thank you.

@jendubay3782 10 месяцев назад

I love that concussive grenade sound effect 👍

@alexandriav3956 Месяц назад

Holy effing moly!! That was such a good fucking story!! I was on the edge of my seat literally the entire time.

@mattym4451 10 месяцев назад

The most realistic part is the zealot cops offing all the innocents, lol

@iantaran2843 10 месяцев назад

All kinds of vindication listening to this one 🤣

@rashadhoward3903 10 месяцев назад

This one was deep Nothin supernatural just a man with nothing to lose and nothing to gain… That is truly terrifying

@dantekinkade8765 10 месяцев назад

Most of the time when they make tv versions or movies of Ten Little Indians they just call it And Then There Where None, but they do change up the ending now and then (Agatha is one of the few people ok with people changing the ending of her works because she said it would surprise people who read the book)

@gurbindersekhon8240 10 месяцев назад

Is this based on that?? I read that as a kid..the original title is offensive now(it wasnt back then)

@Bluesit32 10 месяцев назад

I believe they changed it to Ten Little Sailors at one point. There was a game on the Wii... called "Then There Were None", but the victims were represented by small figurines of sailors.

@dantekinkade8765 10 месяцев назад

@@gurbindersekhon8240 I still don't get why ten little indians was deemed offensive when it had to do with the poem and the boat on the table. But there has also been a version set during an African safari. It probably is in my top 5 versions. (has a earn your happy ending unlike most versions) But this one does go for the same, everyone involved is kind of horrible and kill them all and let god sort them out, minus the best part aka the mystery.

@dantekinkade8765 10 месяцев назад

@@Bluesit32 Oh yeah I remember that now, there are so many interesting versions of it and most of them are quite well done. the best in my opinion is a mini series that came out a few years ago, then they also made another mini series based on another one of her books.

@gurbindersekhon8240 10 месяцев назад

@@dantekinkade8765 it was not indians at first...it was ten little N word

@fredbarrows65 10 месяцев назад

Bro is only one person. I truly appreciate his talent

@NeoClassicalnewb 10 месяцев назад

Is it bad that this video was cathartic for me because my exs name was Elizabeth and she goes by liz? Lol was a great listen!

@thehyenamakeupslayer3819 10 месяцев назад

She should have gotten it the worst.. her mouth showed she was a nasty piece of work..

@wayside9493 10 месяцев назад

Ya know- a large part of my pre teen and early teenage years were spent with this channel on in the background. Im 23 now and have swung back by to check on things and for the last week or so ive been binging. Its just as good as I remeber- hell even better, one hell of a narrator and im happy you're still around.

@wolfetteplays8894 17 дней назад

sameeeee

@TheJasonx7 10 месяцев назад

Man I rooted for the intruder the whole time,damn good story shame he didn't get the last one really,but I mean I guess living with something like that everyday must be pure hell. Damn good story.

@kevinfox500 10 месяцев назад

If it's anything like I feel, after getting to his house late, the day he died, I don't have to. Died from a negligent discharge, 4 days before Christmas, my senior year. A close friend shot him. Live with that, as has the other friend almost 31 years. Made peace with it, and stopped trying to drown my demons, 25 years ago. Still miss him dearly, as we were as close as brothers, the three of us. Still hurts like hell. Had a triple whammy that holiday season, mom's heart attack, Frank's passing, and an accident involving a drunk driver, that took my girl and her unborn child. Bright side though. Got another decade with mom, I survived and recovered, and o married my closest friend 17 years ago. Raised her daughter as my own, and tried my best to be a good husband and dad. And at least I know that I pretty much can't have a worse one, without the apocalypse coming.

@victorhurwitz5559 9 месяцев назад

@@kevinfox500 it's not easy coexisting with your demons but it's not impossible. You've just gotta keep going even on the bad days.

@kevinfox500 9 месяцев назад

@@victorhurwitz5559 I know. Have to focus on the good memories. Not always easy, snd not a day goes by that I don't think of them. I try to focus on the last interaction with Frank. Him pulling me adide for an update pn mom, and how we made plans to see her that Saturday. She would have passed hom3off as her son. 10 hours later you know the rest. It was the loss of my girlfriend that almost did me in, but also saved me. Met a few of the recipients, as she was an organ donor. Knowing part of her lives on gave me a reason to keep going. After 5 years, neck deep on the bottle, I got sober. She and my wife were close. We all met at the same place, and had mutual friends. She and I go to her grave on her birthday, and then go to a placd she loved, and talk about her. Also dealing wifh the loss of a limb the last 2 years. Not easy, but I didn't let it break me. And I had an, incident?, in the ICU. A visitor early one moring. Blonde woman in her mid twenties, with a 5 yesr old blonde girl on her lap, in the visitor's chair by my bed. They looked over and snilled, the woman pointed to me, and whispered something to the girl, who then smiled and waved to me. Then they vanished. Night nurse also saw them, and last I checked the pain meds I was on don't cause a person to hallucinate. I see it as them saying, we're waiting, and will see you in time. Don't rush. Years for you are but a moment where we are. I've had a feeling of peace ever since.

@victorhurwitz5559 9 месяцев назад

@@kevinfox500 eeeeeeeeee

@victorhurwitz5559 9 месяцев назад

@@kevinfox500 self love and kindness helps you go a long way a very long way.

@deacondawg1416 10 месяцев назад

That was supremely most excellent.

@haroldp.sadwood1181 10 месяцев назад

46:27 Props for the delivery of that line. Absolutely made my day.

@kentworch 10 месяцев назад

Thank you MrCreepypasta for the awesome pasta. I definitely loved this one 🖤🖤🖤🖤

@punkyreggaeparty8786 10 месяцев назад

Fantastically told! Truly enjoyed this one. The sound effects were a welcome addition also. Thank you so much, MCP. Stay well.

@Devious_din 10 месяцев назад

This was probably the best one I hurt this year. Well done and more stories like this please

@lorijean1641 4 месяца назад

Holyyyyy sh@t !! Seriously good story , I’m looking up everything else you’ve authored!! As always impeccably narrated as well!! Perfect collab!!

@Milo-frog-boi 10 месяцев назад

Thanks to your amazing narrations, I found out I one day want to become a narrator too. I've listened to your narrations for years now, and they still make me as happy as the day I found your channel. So, thank you and please never stop being the best rolemodel ever

@Uniquely-Unoriginal 10 месяцев назад

As promised and because I really want to hear it in full, time to immediately re-watch/listen!

@lavasharkandboygirl9716 10 месяцев назад

One of the best stories you’ve covered in a while!!

@allanm3797 10 месяцев назад

Awesome story!! Great plot and delivery!

@Killacodycollects 10 месяцев назад

Sooooo dope I cannot wait for October thanks for always making such awesome content!

@ZAZADIABLO 10 месяцев назад

Petition for the next part of Bonesaw Vics cryptozoological garden🙋🏽‍♂️

@Roma-rusk 10 месяцев назад

Here here

@raymondmckinney1565 10 месяцев назад

That would be great

@rescuehamster1734 10 месяцев назад

Agreed.

@tuckerstoneburner151 Месяц назад

Agreed!

@steviegiammarino4150 10 месяцев назад

Another great story excellently narrated!

@DaniBoy92 10 месяцев назад

WELL THAT'S HOLLYWOOD FOR YOU..... SAD BUT TRUE STORY & IT'S ONLY ONE CIRCUMSTANCE, WHILE THERE ARE SO MUCH DARKER ONES

@rmtheg234 10 месяцев назад

One of the best stories I gave ever heard, bravo!

@mrlume9475 10 месяцев назад

Fantastic story and narration from start to end.

@afrostypolarbear2540 10 месяцев назад

Solid tale. And the reading. Killed it man

@leekendall7155 10 месяцев назад

Holy Crap! That was freaking epic! Cheers Mrc Lee

@alonzoc23 7 месяцев назад

Amazing Story!!!

@roninblack3324 Месяц назад

New to your channel. You do a hell of a job with your narration. Keep up the good work

@phildicarlo2526 10 месяцев назад

Holy shit now I got sick, that was quite different! Great job brother! Great job.

@NossDDoss 9 месяцев назад

Out of all the stories you well narrated, this one sounds the best.

@podoke 10 месяцев назад

so well written and so well performed:0 wowowow

@realtalkwithj-man5195 4 месяца назад

This was prob one of the best narrations I've heard from you and thats saying something. I couldn't help but be on the protagonist side I would have prob done the same thing . This would make an epic movie just make sure you give the writer credit for it lol .

@liahlong8823 10 месяцев назад

I v much read the title wrong MCP lol. But am excited regardless!

@Peter75C 10 месяцев назад

The S should be a bit more visible, eh? 😂

@ObsidianFallen 10 месяцев назад

The thumbnail caught me off guard the s is almost invisible will low brightness

@AmericanBulldog-kx1fz 10 месяцев назад

Been listening awhile now. Enjoy content very much. And I'm a "boomer". Thanks

@t.a.hargrove1212 10 месяцев назад

TW grim is great. He needs to finish a few of his loose stories though….

@jamesthornton3570 3 месяца назад

Freakin Awesome !!!

@SrVerataro 10 месяцев назад

Now that's a title for ya

@carolduvall111 10 месяцев назад

Wow holy shit!!!!! This was so awesome i enjoyed that story immensely. 😊

@judy6150 10 месяцев назад

You're an amazing and unique narrator. ❤️

@aspen-rose 10 месяцев назад

THE VOICE ACTING

@lisasummer701 10 месяцев назад

It’s been years since I’ve seen your videos… I missed it so much

@alexanderslemp4855 10 месяцев назад

Damnit that was intense.

@eviegracehopkinson6864 10 месяцев назад

I need a shower now but, ty.. ❤😮😢😊.. good as usual..

@GodOfChicken 10 месяцев назад

YES! I finally found you again. Love your voice

@sh0wtime1 10 месяцев назад

another masterpiece

@idolhandz3946 10 месяцев назад

Nicely done!

@Midway_CV-41 10 месяцев назад

Man reminds me of the Rikers from Tom Clancy's the Division in how ruthless this guy is. I love it

@droid2645 10 месяцев назад

OMG. THE BEST I'VE EVER HEARD. BRAVO. I WAS ROOTING FOR THEY GUY!!😊

@InvasionAnimation 9 месяцев назад

Epic Story!

@lil-tater Месяц назад

1:15:53 the counterstrike flashbang bounces... this is why MCP #1

@kimberlypierce3986 10 месяцев назад

That was the BEST Creepy Pasta Ive heard. I love listening to cp but this one ....... The narration was absolutely great. 👏👏👏 Thank you listening from Othello Wa 4:22 am Sept. 17 2023 BRAVO

@jerrycooperman7309 10 месяцев назад

I agree its a good one, but Heads up, never abbreviate something when the abbreviation would be cp

@shenronsamma4650 10 месяцев назад

this story had me sucked in from the start loved it!

@DiscipleOfHeavyMeta1 10 месяцев назад

Fantastic pasta. Way better than any lame ghost/demon story out there.

@flavoracid 10 месяцев назад

sheeeeeit, this one was great

@thedevilofmetal5335 10 месяцев назад

This was a great story. I think I’m gonna make a movie about this XD

@jerichohill487 10 месяцев назад

Great story

@beeninjenek8851 10 месяцев назад

1h20m oooh nice, been waiting for the longer ones

@nakishamanning8336 10 месяцев назад

I get it. I used to love reading Agatha Christie.

@tjlambaes 10 месяцев назад

I’ve seen that darkness. It is cold. It’s lonely. And sometimes it’s hard to come back to the light.

@victorhurwitz5559 9 месяцев назад

Agreed.

@tisme2888 10 месяцев назад

Awesomeness!!!! 😊

@amyplunkett6208 10 месяцев назад

YOU ARE AWESOME! I CAN'T SLEEP WITHOUT YOU ❤❤❤❤

@KBdaFranchize-mk8gx 10 месяцев назад

Damn this story hit me hard

@lanehaas6530 29 дней назад

Anyone else envision the intruder as Trevor Phillips from GTA V?😂

@hotstepwastaken 10 месяцев назад

Finally. a decent story.

@tyrone1544 10 месяцев назад

Wow!! Hey, hands down the most riveting, the most intriguing story from any of the four Creepies combined. The irony and satire Mr. CreepyPasta provides are thrilling and hilarious at the same time and will hold you spellbound from beginning to end. Enjoy.

@itsschmokey3846 10 месяцев назад

This was badass.

@sgaisar 10 месяцев назад

Holy shit what a story!!! I love it, and i love the ending

@paulross225 10 месяцев назад

One day, I'd like to see you in a film. You're a natural character actor!

@jimmymoore165 10 месяцев назад

This has to be one of the greatest I have ever heard from you and I love the majority of all your stories and I agree with the guy you really should have that sexy handsome face of yours on the big screen or do you know doing one of your parts that you are a natural actor truly I love this love is love this please do some more him it is great love you creepypasta mrcreepypasta😊🎉😂

@hartwellj100 10 месяцев назад

Mr Creepypasta is back!

@BriGuyIL1980 10 месяцев назад

This would make a decent movie.

@heathermoulds73 10 месяцев назад

Oh and the warehouse; Welcome to Amazon where my late husband sadly worked in desperation! Thankfully got something better after 2 months ( although “ better “ wouldn’t be difficult 😡🤬)

@CLCinflorida 10 месяцев назад

Artist are known to be temperamental 😉👍👍👍

@mrslasher1064 10 месяцев назад

The intruder one Even if he didn't get the last one,she'll go to her grave wracked with guilt knowing she survived,however she was the smartest one there,these idiots kept antagonizing a violent man with a gun who they knew was capable of killing every last one of them,at least she was smart enough to keep her mouth shut...

@janeh1431 10 месяцев назад

Wow😮 very intense.

@kimberlypierce3986 10 месяцев назад

That was so good...,i had to comment again🇺🇸

@ferret495 10 месяцев назад

Wow mega depressing, but brilliantly read 🇬🇧❤️

@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 10 месяцев назад

Cool Creepypasta Story title

@sabernightrose3691 10 месяцев назад

I'm high, I be walking around re enacting the bad guy cause I'm like I feel you man, I feel you but on the other hand I can feel the terror the others went through

@cyndytower1263 10 месяцев назад

Excellent.!!!!!!!! No other word for this composition. It stupendous, really captivating incredibly well written and we'll read. I can't say enough good things about this piece of writing. Thank you for 1,1/5 hrs of spine chilling on the edge of your seat story. I've read a lot of books, from Shakespeare to Walden, to Issac Asminov, Heierdahl, King , all the Classics and few have been as entertaining raw and realistic. To the Author Thank You so very much. To our wonderful narrator Bless you for once again delivering the punches exactly on point. Good Work. God Bless