“The Lonesome Ones” Short Film

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Hey everyone! I don’t post on RU-vid at all. But I figured I would post my first short film on here for you to watch and enjoy. It’s only 4 minutes but I believe we put together something very special. Not only because it’s my first short film but because of the hard work that went into with friends and family.
Plot:
Joe and Mark share conversations as they cope with the idea that they are the very last people on earth.
Music at the beginning is “Woods” by Hawkin
I hope you enjoy!

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29 сен 2024

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@kodak_cameron Год назад

For those who aren’t familiar with my name, I am Cameron Kozak 😉

@wrightbritt9515 Год назад

Amazing job! I came from TikTok, and I really love this. It gave me Fight Club vibes, and that’s my favorite film! So seriously great work! I am 13 and am currently working on my first short film, so this gave me a HUGE inspiration boost! I haven’t shot it yet, but I’ve finished writing, and I am getting my camera for Christmas. But really, that was super cool to watch, great writing, camera work, and the acting was phenomenal! Maybe one day we’ll meet in Hollywood! 😃👏🎬

@pandoraskyie5490 Год назад

Are you Polish? You have very Polish surname

@Ellie-Gossett Год назад

This was really awesome Please make a Sequel

@austinkb13 Год назад

This was a good short. Makes me wanna know what happens next

@Grizzlybear6828 Год назад

Japanese Is better

@divyachandra6408 Год назад

Both the leads did a great job in portraying the frustration and fear of the characters, it was really good.✨😀

@kodak_cameron Год назад

Thank you! I’m the one plaid!

@King_mbk Год назад

This is you’re friend bilaller I wanted to say this is so incredible man I’m so proud of you kodak.

@kodak_cameron Год назад

Thanks so much!

@GRNM-ro6hu Год назад

A little constructive critique: You dont need to show 1 Minute of the enviroment at the beginning. 1-2 strong images are totally enough to set up the mood. Focus more on the character introduction at the beginning since its a short film.

@kodak_cameron Год назад

It’s like 30 seconds of imagery but I get what you mean

@RobertoMartinCatoni Год назад

Nice work. The twist at the end was wild. Very fight club. Keep it up. 👍🏻 The bright close up at 3:14 was a nice tough, the following shots after had a sense of dread and danger. At 3:31, the eyes of the actor your turning around are fully white, this added to the overall feeling of dread in the scene and into reveal. The line delivery can come off robotic sometimes. A tripod might be helpful in the opening shots, unless the shaky cam was what you were going for, than it’s ok.

@emilyl3952 Год назад

I’d love to see you do an analysis on this film because I know you added a lot of layers to this that we haven’t picked up on!

@carlaa.3468 28 дней назад

Nice cinematography, if this is a full length film, would def watch it

@spirit8940 Год назад

the conversations are very good and feel realistic, if there would be a camera stand in some places it would be awesome

@dylpickle0874 Год назад

This was honestly really good. Keep up the great work and hopefully you make some more of these.

@birdiesnbogeys7380 Год назад

Not bad but the rocks while walking were way loud

@hamishhailstone9409 Год назад

You Didn’t have a great camera, but in general, that was really good

@psych0naut24 Год назад

Looks interesting! Hope to see more such content in the future.

@ForestEditss Год назад

I got quite place vibes with the train 🚂

@annamarythomas3608 Год назад

I loved it! Was expecting to see something from you... You've contributed the most to my watchlist and you've got great taste so I thought you'd do a great job making films but this was really good!

@carterramos193 Год назад

Death comes closer with this one

@ivanzamora5309 Год назад

I really liked this film Cameron !!!!! Keep it up !!!!! Your running tho was kinda funny lol best 4 mins of my life (:

@Ellie-Gossett 11 месяцев назад

I really like this short film can we please get a sequel

@jaredcarrillofilms6379 Год назад

Loved the opening shots, really built the atmosphere. I think though the second wide frame of the train tracks was unnecessary because I felt like it just did what the previous shot had already accomplished, but that’s minor. I loved the cut to “last night”. Very effective. Felt a little confused towards the end, but im very excited to see more from you!

@kodak_cameron Год назад

The ending was very hard to wrap up considering we had short time constraints for it being a project I needed to turn in for a grade 😢

@jaredcarrillofilms6379 Год назад

@@kodak_cameron even with the ending, you should feel very accomplished this was great. Loved the story. Very original and something I wouldn’t have thought to be in a short film but I absolutely loved your approach

@BRUHHHH_RW Год назад

Quite good 👌☺️

@kodak_cameron Год назад

Thank you ❤

@maemae6034 Год назад

bravo

@mohdabeerali9766 Год назад

The best short film i have ever seen if this was on letterboxd I would have given it a 5/5 for sure

@SilasGeorge730 Год назад

Quite enjoyable. The directing, acting, and writing were by far the best part. Everything else felt very raw, and very much like a short film. As someone who is in the process of developing my own short films, Seeing other people just doing it is a huge inspiration to me. This was very interesting and a good concept. I felt like it really knew its place, and wasn't trying to be anything more than a short film. I give it a 3.6/5. Well done.

@kodak_cameron Год назад

❤️ appreciate the great review

@thay7056 Год назад

It was awesome... this really spoke with my heart! Excited to see more! Sending love from Brazil 🇧🇷

@hozaannn Год назад

SO GOOD

@fatboyjoe3767 Год назад

This is amazing 🎉

@stingsocks3292 Год назад

I love the cinematography and acting In this so much, you did such a good job

@grayson9192 Год назад

Really good job!! Thought the opening credits were kinda fast though which made it hard to read. Also I was thinking change the title to “the lonesome one” I feel like this would make it so that you aren’t sure if the other guy is real or just in the characters head. I really enjoyed it great job!

@kodak_cameron Год назад

I actually thought about that with my friend but we thought it would give away the ending

@grayson9192 Год назад

@@kodak_cameron that’s fair still excellent job!

@mugiwara8952 Год назад

the movie felt so thriller and unique what a good movie keep it up 10/10

@janicegallarday9354 Год назад

Oh wow!!! I wasn’t expecting the ending. Fantastic short film, Cameron. You left me wanting a Part 2 😁 I wanted to go in watching without reading the Description so I could interpret your film in my own way. I thought your character was grieving the loss of his friend/brother, and in the end, he came to terms with the fact that his friend/brother is no longer here. Fantastic short film 👏

@LukeTeel-bl3ee Год назад

WOW! I really fucking liked that. Cameron i've been watching your tiktoks for a while and i love them and seeing this really opens my eyes, as i want to be a future a director and writer. Congrats on this achievement and i can't wait for the next one.

@thenuttyhouse2584 Год назад

Great work on this. I enjoyed the story and the effort put into this a lot! As a filmmaker myself, I know the pain and the grind! You’ve got lots of potential! Keep it up and never quit.

@jhunt5542 Год назад

This is awesome! What was this shot/edited on? Also are u in film school or anything like that?

@kingluke9693 Год назад

Loved it. Would love to see more ❤

@tylerdukevicz353 Год назад

Here from tik tok it’s actually good camera angle speak words 🔥

@jayd1n352 Год назад

Keep doing making these you’ll only get better 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

@tamzonrazon9635 Год назад

This is awesome keep it up its the start of something great. I could never do this for school

@Nosunshinewithoutrain Год назад

Been subscribed to your tiktok for a while. This honestly made me smile because I wanted to be a film major but my school doesn’t offer one. But this is good and you should be proud ✨ Smiling bright, Sunshine