0:06 She sings light it up -> Show light it up text. Syncing the lyrics with what is being said is more pleasing. Think about adding more lyrics to emphasize certain parts of the video. 0:20 Before the drop you could zoom out or fish lens the footage turning it back when the beat drops. 0:24 Just black borders. Either zoom in and tilt or add some color to it. It's well made overall. Just doesn't stand out.
