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In this video, I will show you 2 simple tricks ANYONE can use to write a band 7 IELTS introduction paragraph. These 2 tricks helped me get a Band 7 in my real test. They are super easy to use. You can master them as well.
I will use the writing task 2 questions below to show you what these 2 tricks are and how to use them.
1. Since most information about culture and history can be found on the Internet, museums are not needed anymore. Do you agree or disagree?
2. Some people think that children should be punished if they commit a crime. Other people believe that their parents are the ones that should be punished. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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@kememma 2 года назад

"Around the world there has been increasing cultural similarities in recent times than ever before, this may be because the world is becoming more receptive to different cultures and beliefs. In my opinion this is a positive development"

@girishsai8590 2 года назад

In recent times, there is been a resemblance in cultures from different parts of the world.I believe this is due to advent of technologies and increase in world tourism . It is a positive trend which would help to maintain good relationships.

@jaschoriyev5842 Год назад

You are playing an essential role preparing for our ielts

@sadagnoori1909 Год назад

There are so many similarities can be found all over the world than ever before. I think traveling is the main reason is for this and in this essay i will come up with evidence to support why this is a positive trend.

@LilieIELTS Год назад

Hi, you forgot to mention "culture" in your first sentence. Also, you need to add "that": ... *that* can be found...

@manjeetrajinder7524 3 года назад

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@jayrangani2671 Год назад

The similarities between the cultures around the world is growing more than ever before. The possible reason could be the inclination towards adopting a different culture. To my of thinking, it is a positive change.

@azizshaikhpk 4 года назад

please upload more videos, regarding ideas of writing task two. like your podcast which is very effective. Thanks for your podcast

@LilieIELTS 4 года назад

Thank you, I will do my best!

@palomamartinez5948 3 года назад

There is a tendency around the world to have similarities with each other. This essay might discuss some reasons about the change and why is a positive movement to the earth.

@riyadhussain9019 3 года назад

In recent years, there has been ever increasing cultural similarities among countries relative to the past. This is probably due to the fact that people are more receptive to other cultures’ values and traditions. I hold the view that it is a good development as it will unite the world to form a more meaningful bonding.

@LilieIELTS 3 года назад

You did a good job in terms of paraphrasing. Just delete 'relative to the past'.

@boyunsamana 11 месяцев назад

Thank you for this tips... it helps me understand what paraphrasing is.

@kuldeepsharma-os4ld Год назад

May god bless you for providing such a beautiful information. It will be of great use for most of people that includes me as well. I have been watching your videos for a quite a while now. And i gotta admit, all the videos are so well explained. Thank you so so much for your efforts. Keep up the good work. I sincerely request you to upolad videos on how to group pie data together. I would really appreciate it if you would help us more. Thank you once again. And you have a very beautiful voice.

@LilieIELTS Год назад

Really appreciate the kind words. The next video will be a line graph video. I'll try to make a pie chart video this month.

@kuldeepsharma-os4ld Год назад

@@LilieIELTS Thank you for rectifying my grammatical mistake and accepting my request for making a pie chart video. You are really kind. Looking forward to your next video. God bless you.

@sanjarbeksadriddinov6674 Год назад

@@LilieIELTS Hi! Lilie I've been watching your videos recently My exam is near please help me🤲. Is this paraphrase true down below Children facing academic, social and commercial pressures. Causes and solutions -some academic, social and commercial activities that make children feel pressure. There are some reasons why this is happening and steps to tackle them

@emanandmusic5255 Месяц назад

An increasing similarity between cultures is witnessed these dags across the world

@sss567.. 2 года назад

Cultures around the world seem to become more familiar than ever before.As people travel more and more parts of the world , they get to experience about the cultural aspects of countries all over the globe. It is certainly a positive attitude since people gain more knowledge and can respect each other's religion.

@LilieIELTS 2 года назад

Hi, "familiar" doesn't mean the same as "similar". Try "alike'.

@sss567.. 2 года назад

@@LilieIELTS thank you

@ghoniyyahakintilo2776 Год назад

Around the the world, cultures has now becomed more similar than it was before. Thank you for this video.

@LilieIELTS Год назад

... have now become...

@muhammadmushtaq7908 Год назад

Has now become...Not becomed? Am I correct?

@BigBros123 Год назад

@@muhammadmushtaq7908have*

@luckylaxman4391 9 месяцев назад

In these world cultures have now become more similar than it was long ago

@natasa674 7 месяцев назад

Cultures across the globe starting to look a like which wasn't a case. What is the reason? Do you think whether it is good or bad thing? Can we say it like that?

@vahorasujan5037 Год назад

In the contemporary era,cultural similarities is widely seen in most countries of the world.The reason behind this event has several positive and negatives.This will be explained in further paragraphs

@miriamdiala4149 Год назад

There is cultural similarity around the globe than in the past.

@BigBros123 Год назад

not impressed.that's what 6 bands intro looks alike

@pikotdaluro2317 Год назад

Cultural similarities are becoming more evidently observed around the globe than they were before. Tried applying what’s in the video.❤

@inderjotsingh5868 2 года назад

Nowadays, worldwide similarity between different cultures is increasing. Globalization and rise of internet are most plausible reasons behind this prevailing phenomenon. However, in my perception it has negative consequences,in terms of loss of culture and traditions.

@Se.mu01 Год назад

This is what band 6 looks like. Overcomplicating, I bet you are Hindi.

@ar6487 Год назад

@@Se.mu01what does being a hindi does with that 😂😂 anyways can you pls help me often abt writing if you know much abt it i need a desperate help :(

@Se.mu01 Год назад

@@ar6487 OK give me one of your social media accounts

@rika-a2304 Год назад

@@Se.mu01😮 وش رايك تسحب عليه وتساعدني

@khanjasmin3313 11 месяцев назад

Help me also with writing module

@joggie8720 11 дней назад

In recent years, cultural similarity has been increasingly common all over the globe. This essay will discuss the primary reasons for this trends and state the writer’s opinions about beneficial and detrimental impacts on these belief-- “ Here is my paraphrash of this introduction. Hope it helps a little 😅

@haoheanchan1763 Год назад

So thankful for this video, it has saved me 🙏😭

@minhchautruongvo5697 11 месяцев назад

It is believed that the world cultures share more similarities than they used to be because of the growing of the Internet. I think this wide spread phenomenon would benefit intercultural working environment.

@user-bw5mk3gh4g 6 месяцев назад

The akin between the cultures around the society is increasing than ever before. it is a positive development as it promote peace in the society

@mahdibawazir6503 24 дня назад

Some people believe that cultures worldwide are becoming increasingly similar, and they question the reasons behind this trend. They also debate whether this cultural convergence is a positive or negative development.

@mcfrancisgist Год назад

In recent years, there are similarities among cultures worldwide than has ever been. Reasons for this will be discussed alongside my opinion on whether it's a good practice or not.

@LilieIELTS Год назад

Hi, you forgot the words "more" and "there": There are MORE similarities among cultures worldwide than THERE have ever been.

@rohitparajuli7165 10 месяцев назад

It is universally accepted that the culture seems familiar in all nation nowdays .I strongly believe that it is positive change for the development

@reybadiola4057 6 месяцев назад

Around the globe, there are more similarities in cultural beliefs than ever before. Maybe one of the reasons is that, because of the technologies, for example, social media, we can easily adopt the cultures of other countries by watching them online. I think this is a positive development because we can transmit cultural ideas in just a few minutes of our time.

@PinayInOz Год назад

Hi Lilie, I just stumbled upon this video of yours today. I am so amazed how you explained the process of paraphrasing clearly! Thank you. Compared to the past, there are now increasing similarities among cultures in different parts of the world.

@LilieIELTS Год назад

Hi, there are no errors but 'compared to' may be better than 'compared with' in this context: books.google.com/ngrams/graph?content=compared+to+the+past%2Ccompared+with+the+past%2C&year_start=1800&year_end=2019&corpus=en-2019&smoothing=3

@PinayInOz Год назад

@@LilieIELTS Yes, compared to is more appropriate. Thanks again. You're a blessing to us who are taking IELTS exam. Kudos to making brilliant videos!

@PinayInOz Год назад

@@LilieIELTS By the way, I have read somewhere that 'compared to' is used for dissimilar things while 'compared with' is used for similar things. Wishing you infinite success in your endeavors!

@paulsoneldho6152 19 дней назад

In recent times,culture show many similarities on one another in diffrent corners of the world,because of increase in tourism,and in my opinion it is a positive sign of progress.

@aungkyawzin1240 2 года назад

In recent years, cultural similarities have been increasing in various countries. It is in my opinion that this is a positive development because people are beginning to accept different cultures in their regions.

@LilieIELTS 2 года назад

Hi, "various countries" don't mean the same as "around the world". You don't need to change every single word. If you're not sure how to rewrite a phrase, it's okay to use the original wording.

@user-vm8yn4hb4w Год назад

damn..

@user-vm8yn4hb4w Год назад

Local cultures surrounding us become more globalized and more synchronized with foreign cultures than past. is it better?

@sujangautam1927 Год назад

@@LilieIELTSm

@abukaradenelmi2367 3 месяца назад

There is a growing similarities among diverse cultural values across countries

@berlin4202 4 месяца назад

more and more similarity among the cultures throughout the world are occuring.In this essay i will discuss the reason of it and its relevance.

@badhanpaul9110 5 месяцев назад

Change the form of the verb is the best method, I have ever known.

@leanh524 8 месяцев назад

Cultures of countries around the world are sharing more similarities than ever before. Thanks a lot for your channel. It is a great help for my IELTS test preparation.

@LilieIELTS 8 месяцев назад

Cultures around the world are...

@user-px7xu8wu7p 4 месяца назад

There is a belief that cultural activities are trending to be the same than before. I think this development is occurring because people are imitating other cultures.

@go.nightfury 6 месяцев назад

It is true that there is a growing number of culture in many countries' have been becoming show more similarity than ever before. I personally agree with these due to people are getting more attractive to others culture .

@adityakapil274 Год назад

Nowadays, cultures all over the world are become more similar than never before.The reason behind this event has several postive and negative.

@LilieIELTS Год назад

are becomING

@baihaqi.r.a.7637 3 месяца назад

In recent times, there are more cultural similarities across the world than at any time in history

@bill-kissabdul-razaq621 Год назад

Worldwide cultural activities have become almost the same than it is in the past. I personally believe this is a great change as it will bring more development and cooperation between nations.

@user-hj6vv1mj5k Год назад

Cultures from different Nation has become much similar than it was back then. Which is quite unbelievable because the world is very diverse.

@LilieIELTS Год назад

Cultures of different nations are becoming more alike than they were previously.

@user-hj6vv1mj5k Год назад

@@LilieIELTS Thank you so much miss! Means a lot.))

@chiomauzoechi9893 Месяц назад

Nowadays, similarities among cultures, globally, are significant

@alansaji2107 Год назад

Cultures among the world are becoming more similar ever before.. In my opinion there are people who are trying to adopt others culture... This is the reason for it.................. Lilie mam is there any problem?

@rwiqaref Месяц назад

There is no denying the fact that there is a significant growing in the similarties among the cultures around the world. While it is commonly held belif that it is a negative trend, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider it as an unhelpful trend that may lead to negative consequenses.

@hardeepbajwa1745 Год назад

It is often argued that museums are not required to acquire historical as well as cultural Information as masses can get easily via internet .Co vessels,I opine that unlike places online information is way much better and I will articulate notions in forthcoming paragraphs

@crystalevans510 9 месяцев назад

It is a fact that recently we have been seeing more similarities than ever before among cultures. There are many reasons for this, mainly globalisation. I think this is a negative development for traditions of a culture but a positive one for the unity of humanity

@LilieIELTS 9 месяцев назад

we have been seeing more similarities among world cultures than ever before

@goodstudyqaq Год назад

Compared with the past time, there are more similarities in cultures around the world. thanks for your video. It is really helpful!

@LilieIELTS Год назад

compared with the past (not 'the past time').......among cultures (not 'in'.....)

@goodstudyqaq Год назад

@@LilieIELTS LOL, thanks!

@lanchanalokesh848 3 месяца назад

The cultural diversity around the globe is becoming more identical than in the past.

@kingshah4677 Месяц назад

In present, the entire globe is experiencing a cultural similarities because of easy internet accessibility which connecting people around the world . Adopting a new beliefs means losing ones own tradition, so, i found it as a drawbacks.

@tajulshaheen3706 Месяц назад

There are so many similarities can be found in cultural events around the world, which could not seen before.

@hritikchapagain5382 Год назад

Throughout the world, we find cultures are becoming more similar than in previous years

@LilieIELTS Год назад

Better not use 'we find'.

@MoHdMoId Год назад

There are many cultures around the globe which has now become homogeneous compared to before. In my view, it's a great way of positive growth in people's thoughts.

@dilshatzinurov9093 24 дня назад

There is an increasing cultural similarity between nations of the world. Does it work?

@aadildeva2657 Год назад

It is more often argued that similarities in different cultures are increasing at an alarming rate but in my opinion it is a positive development as advanced technology is getting introduced like Robotics, Machine Learning, Artificial Intelligence, Digital Banking etc. With this development it has changed the life of everyone. Nowadays with the help of AI you can operate a machinery while sitting at your home, you can transfer your money by a single click from your cell phone etc…

@abhilashreddygangadasu5895 Год назад

Off topic

@user-xr6kv2sv8w 5 дней назад

There has been an increasing similarity between cultures across the world, much more than before.

@alchemist3938 6 месяцев назад

Nowadays we can observe the similarities between the cultural believes around the world, which has never seen in past eras. According to my opinion it due to influence of social media and other platforms which has helped traditons to reach to everyone and it is a huge positive for humanity.

@sanzubalami7514 10 месяцев назад

in the contemporary era, the cultural activitis are being alike between the countries from different part of world.

@AayushMahat-jn1yy Месяц назад

It is believed that culture around the globe are becoming more alike than ever before the question is, is it positive or negative development.

@ravioza7100 Год назад

In recent years, there have been more similarities increasing between cultures all around the globe than ever in the past. In my opinion, it is completely a positive development, and its reasons will be articulated in upcoming paragraphs along with the conclusion.

@LilieIELTS Год назад

In recent years, there have been more similarities among cultures around the globe than ever before.

@gfadhilla 2 года назад

Globally, cultures are getting more similar than they used to be. Note: this is my first attempt at paraphrasing lol I'm so struggling

@LilieIELTS 2 года назад

Hi, you did a good job. Alternatively, you can say "are becoming more ALIKE".

@khabibikomilova2150 Год назад

Similarity of cultures increase more and more these days than in the past.

@LilieIELTS Год назад

'Cultural similarities' is better.

@lovedoram5358 Год назад

Nowadays, it is common to witness that similarities between variety of cultures are only increasing. In my opinion, benefits of this process conterbalance the negative sides and in this essay I will explain why.

@LilieIELTS Год назад

Nowadays, it is common to witness that similarities among world cultures are increasing. (I don't think "it is common to witness" is necessary.)

@AcquilasBeula Месяц назад

Thank you for the information it is much helpful! Answer to the task provided: Cultures worldwide are increasingly becoming more alike than they have ever been in the past. What's going on? What is your opinion on whether this is a good or bad change?

@letsbesagacious.3592 Год назад

In the present days the cultural similarities are more than the past days. The reason for this is the people's invention of technology. It is positive for those who love to be the same or similar but for the people who seek and want a variety of spices in their life will take it negatively.

@I-just-post-random-things Год назад

Cultural understanding around the globe are showing vast similarities now a days ,to my view bonding with different culture can lead to better outcome in our society

@hakeemnaa Год назад

in the modern era, it is more prevalent to observe ( see) cultural similarities ( resemblances) worldwide all around the world all across the world in the whole world than it was in earlier times. than in the past than in the previous times.

@MuhammadBilal-ef9yq Месяц назад

All over the world, there can be seen more similarities among different cultures than ever before. Please reply.....

@jasmeenarora8745 Год назад

In recent years, cultural have been changing around the world. The reason behind is that people follow there tradition. According to my view there is caused by positive growth.

@faizaa4859 Год назад

Similarities between cultures of the world are increasing than ever before. Globalization could be the main reason behind this trend since it is the key factor at minimizing the distance between countries. In my opinion, i think it is a positive development because it could bring unity within the people around the globe.

@LilieIELTS Год назад

To use "than", you need to add "more". There are increasingly MORE similarities among world cultures THAN ever before.

@faizaa4859 Год назад

@@LilieIELTS noted. Thanks lilie!

@m.nahidulislam8345 2 месяца назад

Today, similarities are found among cultures all over the world. Do you know the reasons behind this similarity? Give your remarks whether it is fruitful or not.

@jejuhj2110 8 месяцев назад

The similarity of cultures around the world become more obvious compared to the previous time.

@blessinginegbenehi9395 Год назад

Recently, there be similarities in cultural activities around the globe. This era of technology, such as internet contributes to the cultural diversity, am in support of the positivity that this has brought, by creating a bond between developed and undeveloped country.

@LilieIELTS Год назад

Recently, there have been more cultural similarities around the globe.

@nepcad9935 2 года назад

As the whole world is changing into a small global village, there seems to be more similarity in culture all around the world than it was before (Plz rate this miss) .

@LilieIELTS 2 года назад

I don't think u need the first clause.

@dhanrajsingh7778 Год назад

There have been more similarities than ever before in terms of cultres across the globe. I believe that this is a positive advancement

@LilieIELTS Год назад

It's better to be concise. How about: globally, there have been more cultural similarities than ever before?

@khizerghouri Год назад

It is said that Cultures among the globe are becoming same than ever before, in my point of view this is positive development because similar cultures lead to world connected with each other and people understanding norms well if they will go to foreign countries.

@LilieIELTS Год назад

... are becoming MORE ALIKE than....

@johnmichaelmolina9208 Год назад

Nowadays, it is common to see such cultural activities around the globe, than previous years. I my first time.

@LilieIELTS Год назад

It is common to see more cultural similarities around the globe now than previous years.

@07.nguyeninhtuanat42 Год назад

It is acknowledged that there will be have more similarities about cultures among the nations all around the globe than in the past.

@saidmeeryfitness9745 10 месяцев назад

It is believed that the cultural similarities are becoming common among nations. However, in my opinion we better preserve and strengthen our cultures.

@LilieIELTS 10 месяцев назад

cultures around the world are becoming more alike than ever before

@kasuni1988 Год назад

A similar culture is shared globally now unlike the past.

@LilieIELTS Год назад

Similar cultures are ...

@meetvasadiya7097 3 года назад

Since from the last nowadays trends are in all around the world are becoming more common. In this essay we will discuss about the common culture and the environment of the world.

@sudlahuu6293 3 месяца назад

There is a change in culture which become much more similar around the world.

@user-ld8cb6mh2y 5 месяцев назад

Cultural similarities all over the world are increasing each day. It is my first time paraphrasing a sentence and I really need your opinion about it. Moreover, thank you for this video.

@LilieIELTS 5 месяцев назад

Perhaps, not "each day": Cultural similarities all over the world have been increasing.

@pattapusai3647 3 года назад

In recent years , there are so many similarities in cultural activities throughout the world. In my personal view this consequences creating good relationship among the people world wide.

@pattapusai3647 3 года назад

@LilieIELTS 3 года назад

Hi, 'so many' and 'cultural activities' are not accurate paraphrases. There are INCREASING/MORE AND MORE similarities AMONG WORLD CULTURES. Hope it helps.

@Allah_Akbar214 Год назад

The similarity of cultures worldwide has been raised than ever before.

@LilieIELTS Год назад

Cultural similarities worldwide have been increasing in recent years.

@tselmune Месяц назад

Similarity of cultures around nations are increasing rapidly. i wrote it with my own :)

@bruddaboy20 3 месяца назад

There is a similarity of cultures across the world which has become highly common than ever before. Someone tell me if that's correct

@mixedmedia757 8 дней назад

As time passes by, the differences in cultures people follow are disappearing around the globe.

@user-kl3sx6jt5k Год назад

In the contemporary world, the culture widespread similarity becoming more common than in the ancient times

@priyabalraj451 11 месяцев назад

Hi lilie It is irrefutable that these days , cultures are similar and it can be seen more common among people everwhere.This is happening for many reasons , mainly people are curious and have an interest to explore them.However,i strongly believe that seeking abd practising new culture would give a way to unite people.

@natasa674 7 месяцев назад

Cultures across the globe starting to look a like which wasn't a case. What is the reason? Do you think whether it is good or bad thing? Can we say it like that?

@NadiaRobin-cw5vf 3 месяца назад

There are many similarities of the cultural environment today around the world than ever before.

@user-qo8vw7gx4c Год назад

It is currently still becoming more common in cultural stereotypes comparing to previous one.

@wilcorordonez2171 Год назад

A mixture of cultures is becoming a phenomenon nowadays. One reason is due to migration which I believe will have a positive impact on everybody.

@meenakshisharma9632 4 года назад

It is highly witnessed that more similarity is being found in cultural context throughout the world than in the past. I personally opine this trend as a positive development and the prominent reason behind it may be considered advancement in technology.

@LilieIELTS 4 года назад

Hi, your grammar is good. But by using 'cultural context', you changed the meaning of the original sentence. Also, similariTIES.

@RupinderKaur-jn6re 2 года назад

It has recently been observed that there is a similarity of cultures across the globe.I believe fast modes of travel and internet are the two predominant factors behind the cultural homogeneity and certainly it is a negative development as it will adversely affect the tourism and economy of many nations.

@TM-mp6gm Год назад

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@yash1ntjadhav 7 месяцев назад

In these days, Increasing similarity between culture can be seen around the globe.

@Riddleyourmind 8 месяцев назад

Nowadays people are following similar culture throughout the world.what may be the cause?whether this change is causing positive or negative impact?

@relastify6618 Год назад

There is an increasing similarity in cultures around the world than ever before.

@LilieIELTS Год назад

There ARE increasingLY MORE similaritIES AMONG cultures around the world than ever before.

@sakshi1040 Год назад

At around of us, similarity in cluture is increasing globally.This improvement does not seen before.Dut to globalisation it may cause of this similarity,In my opinion this thaught will define as a bright future ahead.

@LilieIELTS Год назад

Cultural similarities are increasing globally.

@rebel0153 25 дней назад

There is been a lot of similarities of cultures around the globe than before.

@amritakaur1585 2 года назад

Technology has had changed our life drastically. It’s undoubtedly believed that internet has abundance of material regarding museums.Some people argue that in reality we no longer needed the physical museum because internet is giving the subject knowledge particularly for history and culture basis.

@manjeetrajinder7524 3 года назад

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