5 Common Mistakes Found in Novel First Drafts (and how to fix them) 

Thanks for the tip on over choreographed action. I literally just wrote a scene like this when my fantasy character pretending to be a human has to find items at a food bank. It helped a lot!

lovely video, nice tips, thanks

These tips made me actually ponder on the common errors I’m guilty of making as a newbie writer😅 Informative Video👍🏼

Thank you for all the tips, Jessica! They helped me a lot to correct some of the mistakes I made in my first draft.

Amazing tips. I also loved reading your Save the Cat Writes a Novel. Game changing! 📚📚❤️

Thanks for all of these tips, Jessica! They've helped me to outline some common mistakes in first drafts, and I hope to apply them to my future works. 🔮❣️📚

Thanks for showing how to improve my writing. I didn’t start reading till late in life. I personally don’t expect the first Chapter to live or die. Readers or Readers. Netflix/Amazon doesn’t steal true reader. In fact the person who’s dumps a book at beginning is the one missing out. The 23 Publishing company that passed Harry Potter, felt that way to. Look what happen. I like to think readers have little more faith, not their for instant thrill

That was helpful, thanks

Awesome video but it is "I couldn't care less" instead of "I could care less".

It’s ‘I couldn’t care less’ if you ‘could care less’ mean that you do care and want to care less than you do now. Good video though.

"I could care less what you think of me" .... OR IS IT "I couldn't care less..." ?