5 tips to improve your writing 1) Don't use Contractions such as; don't, can't, shouldn't use; do not cannot should not 2) Avoid there is/ there are There are many issues that students face at university Students face many issues at university 3) Don't use common words such as; really, very, a lot, so 4) Use active voice instead of passive 5)Use strong verbs
definitely some people do, for example, English learners like me. These tips will be helpful for my writing proficiency test, which I am about to take.
I’ll help you out if you’re taking notes. 0:29 Do not use contractions 1:40 Avoid using there is/there are 3:05 Avoid using really/very/a lot 6:06 Use active voice instead of passive voice 9:00 Use strong verbs
1.do not use contractions ex.don't can't shouldn't 2.avoid there is &there are 3.don't use really ,a lot ,so &very 4.use active voice 5.use strong verbs
Oh my god! I just realized that I might have been making these mistakes all my life. And, all it took was a few minutes of conscious effort and practice. Thanks, this is super useful.
Thank you for helping me because when I checked my grades today, I saw that I had an F in ELA and started crying so I decided to look for videos to help me and this helped me a lot
sebastian cuello I bet money you did not even read the 91$ book, yet you complain how useless the book is. Take the easy route and watch videos, that would help you more than reading a book, you mundane fool.
Whether you prefer watching videos or reading books, continue to practice you writing skills. Finding books your are interested in reading will help your writing improve as well.
my teacher gave me an extension to submit my assessment and im so happy cause she is so nice and i would be sad if i put no effort into something that she gave me extra time to do
Emma, this is great! I am recommending it to my students and have sent the video to colleagues. I've even embedded it in a blog post I wrote on academic or formal writing. Really well done and very enjoyable. Brava!
apparently you DID NOT pay attention that much. She CLEARLY said do not use "THERE ARE". But then again i do not agree with the instructor in alot of things like at 2:11 she should have wrote, Students face many issues at the University or Universities if She didnt want to use "THE" in the sentence. Unless the University is the name of the university but i doubt that, hopefully.
I just wanted to thank you for all that you’re doing. Your teachings helped me big time and I scored 7 bands in Writing. Keep up the good work and wish you all the very best!!
This video really helped me a lot!! Thank you so much! I feel more confident in my essay writing! Can u make videos on how to write different type of middle/high school essays?
Great tips! I also say avoid using phrasal verbs. For example: give up = forfeit; go down = decrease; do over = repeat. This usually improves formality. It also helps shorten sentences, like your tips #2, #4 and #5. Simplicity is key :)
So HELPFUL OMG Tips for writing: 1. Avoid contractions 2. Avoid there is/there are (sentence become stronger to the point) 3.Avoid really, very, a lot, so (weakens writing) Use “many” or “much” ex:Much of the time is wasted 4. Have subject, verb, object 5.Use strong verbs When you see verb and noun (try to use verb) Example 1 : he gave assistance -> He assisted Ex 2: made an objection -> He objected (Does the noun have verb form?)
Wow. I couldnt agree more. Great tips! I am in school for engineering, however, I wanted to make sure that my communication skills were "clean" and powerful. This helped immensely, you are a fantastic teacher.
What she means is that some words or terms we commonly use at home or with friends, are used as colloquialism. And that makes your writing poor and non-professional.
In my experience teachers are sadist f*cks that don't get along with students (even if you think you do, they experts in faking a smile). None of them is consistent so you need to learn each one as like a new cat. Always listen to others who had a previous teacher and their warnings. Teachers don't change, YOU change.
I want to say that word count is a very high/middle school thing. Professional writing and college writing concentrates more on length, like how many pages something needs to be, letter font and size. The only writing that might focus on word count is journalism.
I have been learning English for one year and I always love your videos on RU-vid. I’ve learned many things and today I learn to be a good writer. Thank you for always sharing.
1. Avoid using *contractions* 2. Avoid using *there is/there are* 3. Avoid using *alot, really, very, so* 4. Instead of using *passive voice* use *action voice* ➡️subject, verb then the object 5. Use *strong verbs* Just for easier reference for u guys and myself Don’t need thank me😜 I’m like alr over the age of learning grammar but I’m learning cuz I just got a borderline pass of 50+ for English but I need to get 70+ to graduate my school and get into the school that I want
Thank you. This makes sense. I want to share my writing skill. Someone reply to me any mistakes and give me a rating. Don't use emotion. Use logic. Mark's about to be attacked by a great white. Jack tries throw a rock at the great whites nose to avoid Mark, but failed. Jack tries it second time and hits the great whites nose, but there's a strange difference. The great white does not quit. "Jack!" Mark shouted. "Grab the harpoon! It's right behind you!" Jack takes the harpoon with a grunt. "Throw it to the great white!" He shouted. "I can't!" Jack replied. "Why not?"Mark asked. "It's too heavy!" Jack replied. "Just throw it Jack!" Mark screamed. "This great white is about to shred my life!" Jack throws the harpoon with all of his power. The harpoon did not hit the great whites nose, but it's eye. The great white swam away with blood trails in the sea. Mark swam to the shore safely. "Are you ok Mark? Ow," Jack asked in pain. "Yeah I'm ok," Mark replied. "My arm is sore," said Jack. "Well. It was worth to save a friends life," said Mark. "Yeah,"Jack replied.
There are some quibbles: First of all, your sentences are a teeny bit jittery, they don't have a a constant flow. Try writing sentences of various lengths with a greater use of punctuation ( a coma, dash, semicolon, a pause etc.) "Jack tries throw a rock at the great whites nose to avoid Mark, but failed" Okay..um, what do you mean by "avoid"? Also, since you are narrating the incident in real-time, use present tense Rephrasing the sentence, a better way to write this would be: "Jack hurls a rock at the Great White's nose to free Mark from it's clutches, but fails in the process" Always shift the paragraph when you use a new line of dialogue, I can almost see my English teacher pulling her hair out in agony xD And keep in mind that rich words are essential to a good writing. Instead of using "Throw", use "Hurled" Likewise, use "Moaned" instead of "Asked" and so on. (Though this might depend on the context) ------ All in all, it's good, you'll get there. You have the potential 3.5/5
I may not be the best at writing, but I'll give you my opinion on your writing skill: I like it, but it's a bit on the choppy side. It is nice, but not the best. Please don't get upset if I'm being too blunt. Afterall, you did ask for criticism.
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Thanks I really like your videos, Everything is so helpful, I've been watched your video a few months ago and I think that my knowledge is getting better. Thanks again for everything you have done for all of us around the world.
I'm talking my HiSet testing next week and I have to write a Essay. I've learned a lot from your videos and I hope that it will works in my favor. I'll update you later.
Passed math with a 13, passed social studies with a 15... waiting for my essay and language writing scores. I only have science and language reading left to do next qeek.. Going good so far..
Following up on my prior comment: I passed all of the exams and now in college pursuing my dream of having an Associate's Degree. All is well so far. Those three months of taking the HiSet course was the start of an unlimited amount of positive opportunities for me and my family. If there is anyone who's considering going back to school, my advice is, do it. It's not impossible. My highest grade was 6, I dropped out during the 7th. 20 years later, I graduated on the very first attempt and i have to say, I regret not doing it 10 years ago. Thanks for the wonderful tips.
great tips. really great tips. i tried and used a couple of times this testing and training in writing and my texts began look very different, it looked like some govr statement :) and that was the goal i wanted. thanks for explaination. And guys - just make yourself to train more and more, train writing speaking listenin and reading with your great efforts - its hard and not a lovely doing but do it untill exam and know that after this you will relax as never before :) motivate yourself and know one single main thing - everything will be ALRIGHT !!! Cheers
Thank you very much for these tips! I've been delving into the translation business, and your tips have been of great assistance. I'm especially guilty of (over)using "there is/are ...", so now I look specifically for these two once my drafts are done.
@@thegammaduskit3704 Yes it is the Florida standardized Assessment test. I also will be taking this test in just a couple hours. (Im practicing the use of a more formal voice).
Thank you for your wonderful teaching. I have been learning English for more than an year. My speaking skills got improved. However, I have to improve my writing skills. When I started learning, I came across your videos. When I am looking into your videos, it's becoming more easy for me to correct the mistakes on writing part.
bluecottoncandy2 Yes, I'm sure you can do it if you want to. Just work hard. It's better so you won't be stuck with a job you don't enjoy. It's so much time you spend working, so you gotta enjoy it cuz you gotta enjoy life!! I wish you the best for whatever you decide to do. Believe me, It's never too late for a change. Good luck!
Beto McKnight I know, becoming a lawyer is like selling your soul. Where I live being a doctor/engineer/physicist/lawyer are seen as successful but graphic designers or artists are not "real jobs". If you know what I mean...
who cares what society says about different careers? fuck that, it's your life. go with what your heart is telling you and what feels good. expand your horizons. you don't have to sell your soul to be a lawyer. but you shouldn't pursue this career when you know you will eventually hate it neither. if you want more money then educate yourself to learn how to get more. and this doesn't have to be he good old 'ouh I will pay everything into my retirement fund and live the life i desired when I'm shitty 65 years old'. what about passive income, real estates etc.? live your life unapologetically. you will thank yourself when you're about to die and are looking back at how awesome your life has been.
You have this ability to make me focus on what you're saying. I usually skip 10+seconds forward and I'm suprised I didn't in this video. Anyways, thank you! I learned a lot.
