Dear sir maine aaj hin aapko youtube pe dekha n trust me aapki iss story writing tips se main itna jyada inspire huwa ki maine aapko apne mobile k screen pe hin kiss kr liye n dil se aapke charan sparsh bhi kiya maine. Love you and God bless u sir
Sir.. I am thankful that you are running this channel and sharing important knowledge and information. It is a good idea for making a short film. As you told, I have come up with an idea for its climax. We want to shoot the short film. Do we have the permission to use the idea and shoot it? We will give you the credit for story idea.
INT. Rohit's room (Night) Rohit starts searching for the doll everywhere but couldn't find it. He makes a mess out of his room and lastly gets tired and sits in a corner of the room. We hear the alarm ringing in his mobile phone. The sun has risen up and Rohit couldn't sleep all night. In his depression he gets ready for his office. Ext. Rohit's room (Morning) He keeps the key of his room under the doormat for his maid. Rohit (Thinking to himself): Wait, after me only the maid enters my room. It must be her. She took my Jonaky away from me. Rohit then gets angry and start walking down his building and asks the Guard for his maid's address. He then reaches a nearby slum and finds the maid's house. Ext. Maid's house He's about to knock the door when he sees from the window next to the door, that a small girl is playing with his doll (maid's daughter). She is talking like him to the doll in a very cute way. She is taking care of the doll making her hair, hugging her. Seeing this Rohit stops and leaves with a slight smile on his face. His social life starts improving. He now has a girl friend and also a member of band. This can be shown in montages of Rohit and his colleagues in a restaurant, Rohit leaving his girlfriend home at night, Rohit playing solo guitar in front of a bar audience. Fade to Black INT. Rohit's room (Morning) Rohit is getting ready for the date. He picks up the key from the table where we see a photo frame of Rohit holding the hand of his doll (photo is like Rohit has taken a selfie with his doll) with Quote written on it "A Best friend will always lift you up". Fade to black.
कहानी तो बहुत अच्छी है | सुनते वक्त सब आँखों के सामने हो रहा हो ऐसा लगा | इसके लिए क्लायमेक्स ऐसा हो सकता है की, रोहित अगले दिन फोन पर बात करते वक्त डॉल को कहीं छिपा देता है | वो दिखाना नही है, लेकिन वो जब ढूँढता है तब उसे सब याद आता है, वो फ्लॅश बॅक में दिखाना है |
Sir climax aisa bhi hi sakta hai k Rohit aur Ruhi ka kuch dino baad break up ho hata aur woh bahut tension mein aa jata hai par ab uske paas woh doll bhi nhi hoti jo pehle use tension k waqt madat kiya karti thi. Moral of story = kisi cheez ki keemat uske na hone par hi samajh aati hai .
Superb sir.... You are amazing..... You are my super star...... Thanks for the informations..... Sir climax kahan bhej na hai likh kar.... Aur sir mera last wish hai ki Mujhe budget ke uper video chahiye.. Kiunki har concept Koi content ata hai toh pehle khayal ta hai ki budget kitna hoga.. Wohi budget kese nikala jata hai... Matlab kis kis cheez ko jood kar kis cheez ko lekar budget ki hisaab lagaya jata hai please please sir... Make a video... Please please please ... Thank you
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Hello Sir First thank you very much this wonderful information, I am very grateful to you for your videos about film making, I will definitely try to make short film on this plot with a very emotional climax, bless me...
Good evening sir... Can you explain about the qualities about Oscar award winning films??? Or best Indian award winning films??? Which type of film can nominated for these level??? Plz explain if possible Thank you sir
Hi sir Javid from Karnataka. Sir apki a soch kese athihe take hame video dekte dekte khojate…. Apke bathome kohi magic ho… so nice sir thank you so much……!!!!
Very good information Sir, a lot of thanks. I wish to write a film story on education system in India. Education system has been made of earning money business. A short film can be written on this system.
Rohit room me aata hai...jhonky se baat krne ke liye uske paas jaata hai pr waha wo nhi hoti ..wo use pure room me dhundhta hai fit bhi jhonkey nahi milti ..fir wo pareshan hota hai .. Apni khushi bhulkar wo use dhundhna chahta hai.. Itne prayas ke baad jab wo naa milti to wo sofe pe baith jaata hai aur uske aakho se aansu nikalte hai.. Rohit ko wo sari baate yaad aati h jo usne jhonky se ki thi, apne dukh dard aur sari khushiyan uske sath bati thi.. Har choti baat ko wo chupchap sunti thi Haar baat pe mere sath hoti thi Aur aaj koi nhi h uske paas Rohit: jhonky kaha ho tum , plz wapas aa jao. Tum meri sabse achi dost ho , mai kiske sath baat krunga ,kon sunega mera dard aur kon batega meri khushiya , pls waps aa jao jhonky. Aur Rohit rota rahta hai.... Fir rohit ki girlfriend door khatkatati hai Rohit door kholta hai aur use gale lagata hai..wo sari baat usko batata hai. Rohit ki gf usko shant karti hai aur ek dost ki ahmiyat samjhati hai ..jab tumhare paas koi nahi tha tab jhonky hi tumhari sab kuch thi,wahi tumhari sabse achi dost thi, usse tum sab kuch share kiya krte the but aaj mai aa gyi to tum itni close friend ko kaise bhul sakte ho.... Rohit ko apni galti samjh aati hai aur wo jhonky mujhe maaf kr do bolta hai aur rota hai. .tabhi rohit ki gf apne bag se jhonkey ko nikalti hai aur rohit ko deti hai...aur kahti hai Rohit apno ko kabhi bhulna nhi chaiye jo apne har waqt me saath hote hai... Rohit jhonkey aur gf ke gaale lagata hai... The end🖤
can you give me any story for short film I am going to make short film very soon but It should be in marathi if you have a story please can you share me ??
Sir Apki story bohut hi mast hai or mai aisi hi ek story dhun rha tha I’m a vlogger but i loved to make a short film I’m totally novice Muje kuc b nhi pata hai film making k bare me But mai is short pr short film zarur batauga ek month me Maine ending b soch li hai but mai vo apko shoot kr k batauga sir Thks
When Rohit arrives at home, he does not see his doll. They sit in a corner then suddenly a call for her girlfriend comes and she speaks thanks to giving me such a great gift.
Hi Samar. Thanks for the information. Can you elaborate the POV in film & TV scripts. Is it the same as in Novel Writing? Because I've been developing most of my ideas as 3rd person omni.
Sir please reply me bahot dino se mere dimak me ak jabardast screen play hai wo hai action scene ki or sir itna jabardast hai ki jab wo action scene screen pe aayegi na to duniya dekhe gi ithasik hogi sir bas chans ki jarurat hai par koi deta hi nhi ab to man me than liya hai sir ki jabtak wo scene sabke samne na ladu tab tak chain se baithunga nhi chahe puri jindagi lag Jaye sir waise sir aapki video bahot din se dekh rha hu AAP jab bhi video upload karte ho kuch na kuch jarur sikhate ho thanks sir I'm big fan of you Jai Hind 🙏🙏🙏
Jo. Main. Film. Likh. Raha. Hun. Usme. Aapki. Sahayata. Ki. Zarurat. Hai.. Mujhe. Yakin. Hai. Ki. Meri. Film. Box office. Pe damdaar super duper. Hit. Saabit. Hogi...
Genre:Horror Rohit thinks everything was going well but suddenly the he girlfriend is on video call trying to breakup wid rohit........rohit is crying and by mistake while cutting the call she clicks the flip camera button and we can see the doll with a knife siting on the girlfriend
Thank you so much sir ❤️ Mujhe aapki story bahut pasand aayi and Agar aapki permission ho to mai is short film ko continue kar skta hu please. Ye meri 1 st short film story hogi jiski shuruwat me isi story se karna chahta hu.. sajeev and nirjeev ka connection.. attachment.. etc.
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