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How to Write a Short Film 

Tyler Mowery
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Today I take a deep dive into writing a short film. I reconstruct a short film from the ground up as well as debunk some of the myths surrounding short films.
Story Structure Video: • Using the Story Circle...
Illustrations at 8:44 and 8:46 by Julieta Colás
Check out her work at jujujulieta.com or @jujujulieta on Twitter.
Short Films Used:
Stutterer: • 2016 Oscar-Winning Sho...
The Narrow World: vimeo.com/184896245
We'll Find Something: vimeo.com/143635254
Uncanny Valley: vimeo.com/147365861
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Whiplash: vimeo.com/81863185
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@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 года назад
Get Practical Tools to Write Your Great Screenplay: www.practicalscreenwriting.com
@eatforhappiness6150
@eatforhappiness6150 4 года назад
Hi! I'd like to join the group but somehow can't find the 'join' button. Any chance you know how to assist me with that?
@javiervasquez1876
@javiervasquez1876 4 года назад
Hey, the page doesn't seem to load, is it up?
@antdx316
@antdx316 3 года назад
This whole presentation was an awesome short film.
@drobottv7782
@drobottv7782 2 года назад
MAN....tHANK YOU SO MUCH BRO
@tonysmith9005
@tonysmith9005 2 года назад
My name is evangelist Tony smith happy new year 🎉✨ 🎉✨ 🎉✨♥ 🎉
@ohmyprettygirl
@ohmyprettygirl 4 года назад
My issue is wanting to become a filmmaker but not having ANY friends or contacts who are also into filmmaking or even acting for that matter. :/
@aboyahiasafe6307
@aboyahiasafe6307 3 года назад
iam in your team lets go
@mugiikari1641
@mugiikari1641 3 года назад
You’re also missing the “rich parents” part. So many filmmakers have trust funds to purchase equipment and attend film school, etc. They don’t need investors because they have daddy McMansion
@animatthews4696
@animatthews4696 3 года назад
@@mugiikari1641 TRUUE, but thats when you "start a business" and go ham on tax write-offs.
@majoromrass26
@majoromrass26 3 года назад
While you meet people try doing animation, if you can’t draw maybe try stop motion. You can do it by yourself, even though it is a LOT of work. If you get really, really creative on how to built the set and puppets for stop motion you can even do it in a very low budget.
@BintAbubakr
@BintAbubakr 3 года назад
Maybe starting a film support group of like minded people would be a good idea...if so I'm all in! 😊
@benjaminsarcofilms
@benjaminsarcofilms 4 года назад
I learned more in this 22 min. video than in my 3 years (not finished) on Film School
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 года назад
My film school experience was similar.
@kingkylie9655
@kingkylie9655 4 года назад
@@TylerMowery mine as well
@rhaegosnow1133
@rhaegosnow1133 4 года назад
Back in High School, I wanted to become a filmmaker, I looked up all film school of the country (France) and it was really expansive, at least too much for me, so i didn't even try, thinking you couldn't do anything without going to film school. Now ten years later i'm diving back in that passion, and realizing I never heard about someone who went to film school, and had a good experience about it! Feel free to share the pros and cons that you encountered in film school i'm very curious about your experiences!
@benjaminsarcofilms
@benjaminsarcofilms 4 года назад
​@@rhaegosnow1133 I can't say Film School is useless, but it's not necessary. Cinematography is an art. Everyone has a different path. A piece of paper will not tell you are a good storyteller, your work will do. A lot of directors and people who make the entire world of cinematography a living doesn't have a film school career. In fact, if we think the movie pioneers didn't go to any school, because they didn't exist. To name a few directors: Michel Gondry, Christopher Nolan, Agnés Varda, Julie Tamor, Billy Wilder, Akira Kurosawa, Frank Capra, Kubrick, Terry Gilliam, Herzog, Almodovar, James Cameron, Tarantino, David Sandberg and Robert Rodriguez (you should search some videos of him talking about cinematography) Now imagine if this people who born in a era where the information and movies was so exclusive could do it, why we don't now that information is almost everywhere? Talking about my experience in my film school, here in Argentina it's public (I mean almost free) I realize the best thing in a film school it's the people and connections you get there, friends that I would never met staying in my bedroom all day. I learn something, yes of course, but because of me, in the end of everything it's you learning by doing, making mistakes, staying curious and keep doing. I had a lot of classmates who finished the career but they are doing nothing. Some people doesn't even know how to grab a camera or edit a simple video but it's not the school's fault. Also I will say a lot of film schools are very classic, they are not updated to this era, they will teach you only one way to make cinematography and this era is demonstrating that Cinematography can be applied to almost everything because it's an art, not only an industry. Hope this helps, sorry if I have a bad english, it's not my first language.
@benjaminsarcofilms
@benjaminsarcofilms 4 года назад
search this video: Robert Rodriguez on digital filmmaking
@VELOC1RAPT0R
@VELOC1RAPT0R 4 года назад
The typographer is important! Its a metaphor showing how he struggles to assemble words and statements. He's literally building them letter by letter and he's surrounded by repeated characters! It feels very fitting that he's a typographer
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 года назад
It’s fitting, yet it’s stylistic. It isn’t an element that changes his actions or his beliefs within the story. It’s nice to know and it’s a nice stylistic element. But I don’t consider it “core story.” The story could work if he had a different profession. It’s just nice that he is a typographer. Hopefully that makes sense.
@VELOC1RAPT0R
@VELOC1RAPT0R 4 года назад
@@TylerMowery Yeah I understand that I guess. I have heard from others that every aspect of a movie should in some way revolve around the central idea of it. So in that way it's important that his job represent his central struggle. If he was a barista 'just because', then it would be a waste of run time. But with his job is typography, it makes his struggle tangible in a new way to the audience, even if it's subconscious. I agree it doesn't contribute to the progressing the story. But it's important for building out the universe.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 года назад
that's a good point!
@SamiFilms
@SamiFilms 4 года назад
Doneandgone that’s a very good question at the end
@4GU5t
@4GU5t 4 года назад
@Doneandgone We don´t know that He doesn´t know that. Maybe he knows and that´s the reason why he is learning Sign Language, even if the short makes us believe that he is learning it to overcome his speaking limitations.
@starella.
@starella. 2 года назад
Video Breakdown *Myths:* 0:53 Myth 1: Short Films are too short to be meaningful and dramatic 1:07 Myth 2: there isn't enough time to set up the story 1:35 Myth 3: Stunning cinematography, witty dialogue, and cool concepts will create a good short film even if the story isn't good. 2:20 Stutterer *Structure* 1. 3:11 Finding an Idea (find a concept) 2. 3:36 Building our main character and what they believe (one character will usually push the story more than anyone else, what does the character want, what do they believe, and what is their conflict) Build a philosophical conflict 3. 5:52 Building other characters in the story that also have their own problems 4. 7:32 Narrative Structure 5.7:48 Fundamental Elements of Structure 7:56 Story Circle 12:14 Crafting an ending 14:04 Analysis of the film 17:57 important: (no one will care about simple external obstacles they only care about how your characters beliefs come into conflict in the story so now we go to another scene) 20:15 Climax of the film 21:08 Why Stutterer is a great short film (fantastic short film since it has a strong philosophical conflict good structure and an ending that works perfectly) *NOTES:* a short film needs: - philosophical dilemmas - ethical dilemmas - moral dilemmas *good dramas have characters that* - *a character struggling with their own beliefs as they come into contact with the world* *One of the biggest important elements of a good drama is that characters action must be challenged characters heading towards what they want or getting what they want should always come at a cost this keeps the conflict heightened* hope this helped!
@Rishika2399
@Rishika2399 Год назад
Thank you!
@randomkendrickfan3228
@randomkendrickfan3228 Год назад
literally thank you
@celokuhlesithole2493
@celokuhlesithole2493 Год назад
Thank you so much it helped!❤
@dominiquepocopio777
@dominiquepocopio777 11 месяцев назад
I love you
@salmaelemary454
@salmaelemary454 7 месяцев назад
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!
@ferdumas
@ferdumas 4 года назад
I always say that film schools need to teach this. They give us everything about how to make feature films, but we don't have the money nor the time to make them. SO TEACH HOW TO MAKE SHORT FILMS, at least how to write them, as you did
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 года назад
Yea I agree!
@YRDX
@YRDX 4 года назад
Find a college or university that does creative digital media, it covers short film production and general camera use for all kinds of scenes, and photography too. Also some include advertising and promotion for them when on no or low budget. Very helpful, if your in the UK, Swindon college does a great course on it.
@lairsansen4579
@lairsansen4579 4 года назад
Dude, you can find everything there is to know nowadays without school. Learn to be independent and figure stuff out. You’re not gonna make it in the industry if you aren’t able to hustle and figure things out yourself or if you don’t have any natural talent or common sense.
@maytreemedia
@maytreemedia 4 года назад
@@lairsansen4579 You're exactly right. Getting the gig is all about proving what you're capable of.
@thecookienebula7089
@thecookienebula7089 4 года назад
666 likes i will like your comment later
@jonathancoleman7148
@jonathancoleman7148 4 года назад
I'm a actor I've done a lot of short flim work gonna start writing and acting in my own movies.
@thequinndom6250
@thequinndom6250 4 года назад
good luck with that!
@retrofilmwork
@retrofilmwork 4 года назад
Goodluck!
@quackseries
@quackseries 4 года назад
Jonathan coleman I LOVE THIS
@BtrDaze
@BtrDaze 4 года назад
Send a link
@amarudavis4213
@amarudavis4213 4 года назад
Watched this video for the same reasons. Good luck friend 🤞🏽#createyourownopportunities
@kevinsooextra
@kevinsooextra Год назад
Thanks for this, the explanation made the short film even more beautiful than if I had just watched it
@ImNotOdd
@ImNotOdd 4 года назад
How does this not have so many more views!?
@kktv3498
@kktv3498 4 года назад
I'm Wondering myself
@marie04YT
@marie04YT 4 года назад
Are you kidding this has THOUSANDS of views, ya can’t have EVERYONE being famous from short films otherwise famous people aren’t so special anymore
@dictionaryofwords1108
@dictionaryofwords1108 4 года назад
Because Joseph Campbell exists and there are hundreds of other extremely similar videos discussing his writings.
@moo8698
@moo8698 4 года назад
Half of it is bullshit. And people that want to write won't look on youtube for it, they'll write. He is literally talking about things that a writer doesn't think of. A writer writes and the story going to unfold from his thoughts. That's all. NO WRITER going to think about things, that this guy is talking about. Writing is not something you can learn. And it's a sudden thing. I didn't write anything new for a few months now. But for example once I had a thought about a shot where the paper boat goes down a river and then things come into your mind and I ended up with a boy who lost his brother and still playing with him in his imagination. I'll not talk about how the paperboat comes here but it plays an important part and it is currently in production. What you MUST learn are the rules. Know the f... differences between a shooting and a spec script and don't mix them up. See tons of amateurs with their trash and nobody going to read their "script" as mistakes pop out and you KNOW that it's already bad! Someone who can't write a script properly CAN'T write a good story. They think they can and what they write is good but that's just the Dunning-Kruger effect..
@superodin758
@superodin758 4 года назад
This is priceless information (no doubt about it!), but most people are not interested in creating stories. Generally speaking, the majority of folks are rather more keen on witnessing and enjoying them....
@GoldenSpoon109
@GoldenSpoon109 4 года назад
Thanks for giving Stutterer some recognition, it really deserves it.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 года назад
Yes! It’s a beautiful short.
@ladyburnside1201
@ladyburnside1201 4 года назад
I thoroughly enjoyed the Stutterer!! Well written story that hooked me in immediately
@loveuketoo
@loveuketoo 4 года назад
I mean, it did win an Academy Award!
@loscinemeros6409
@loscinemeros6409 2 года назад
it won the oscar, it got the recognition it deserved
@w4ckezy854
@w4ckezy854 2 года назад
Where I can find ?
@Jabrils
@Jabrils 4 года назад
thanks man. Writing my first short story (game) & your videos have been a lot of help.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 года назад
Glad to hear!
@TheInterestingInformer
@TheInterestingInformer 3 года назад
Cool!
@laalig2989
@laalig2989 3 года назад
You are not cut out for this man , you should choose a blue collar job.
@TheInterestingInformer
@TheInterestingInformer 3 года назад
@@laalig2989 get over yourself and your biases bro. 🤦‍♂️Haters like you only regress society.
@jjones503
@jjones503 3 года назад
Ey, didn't expect to see Jabrils here. Way cool!
@michaeledgerton3508
@michaeledgerton3508 3 года назад
I’m a high school student who has an interest in screenwriting and film making. This was a great video and I feel inspired to start writing.
@dragonfruit6532
@dragonfruit6532 Год назад
Go for it, Michael!!
@AndresSnaps24
@AndresSnaps24 10 месяцев назад
I never thought I would ever write my own short film by myself but I finally did it! I wrote the whole thing on my own and can’t wait to film my scary movie with some friends this summer and share with y’all!
@roli.h9280
@roli.h9280 2 месяца назад
how did it go?
@jacyntaharris6708
@jacyntaharris6708 3 года назад
I used your method to create my short film!! It came out great and has already been accepted into festivals!! Thank you
@codysnecktattoo3340
@codysnecktattoo3340 2 года назад
I just googled your name and saw some of the info on your short film - well done! I can see from the synopsis how you were influenced by this video and by Stutterer, and you took those concepts and used them to tell your own story. That's really cool. I'd love to see Fat Jessie some time (I just googled it and the results were a lot of Pokemon fetish drawings so I had to get out of there). Congratulations on making your movie!
@usamalali4100
@usamalali4100 Год назад
The Stutterer actors on House of the Dragon playing Larys! He made it!
@bosmarley4648
@bosmarley4648 4 года назад
I've never made a movie or even wrote one before in my LIFE!!!! But I have a very very abstract mind topped with brilliant movie ideas just lovely ideas I've never thought about it because I don't know how to this video helped thanks a lot
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 года назад
Glad it was helpful!
@chees434
@chees434 4 года назад
Bos Marley what are some of your ideas?
@diiii_mond
@diiii_mond 4 года назад
You should probably start writing. I wouldn’t start with your dream movies, I’d start with other stuff you come up with, and just start writing. Trust me it helps a lot to just get into the motion of writing.
@mrazza6182
@mrazza6182 4 года назад
Im tryna be an engineer, but filmmaking and movies always had my eye
@renebleu8711
@renebleu8711 4 года назад
Mr Azza do both
@flushfries5633
@flushfries5633 4 года назад
Use that engineer money to make movies
@Talkinbooks
@Talkinbooks 4 года назад
i'm a writer, i want to turn my short stories into short movies, contact me if you are interested
@shekinahcanos43
@shekinahcanos43 3 года назад
I feel you! Film making has always been my passion but engineering gives you a more stable job. It'a hard to choose.
@airindiana
@airindiana 3 года назад
I’m an airline pilot who’s been parked up months due covid. Just been told I’m being parked up for 2 years with a recall due no work. It’s all I’ve known for 20 years. I’ve always loved film and aspired to do it, beit for a pastime or to make some money. I’m finally starting, got a camera, a comp and NLE (which massively confuses me). It might just stop me going insane from the stress about my aviation career whilst sitting in limbo. I need to do something, maybe creativity will help.
@david77826
@david77826 4 года назад
Tyler, man, you did it again. Great essay! I have been thinking of writing a short film these days, and then bam! Here's the perfect video to help my mind get clear.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 года назад
Glad to hear it’s helpful!
@hmvideos3601
@hmvideos3601 4 года назад
how’s the short film coming along?
@osanneart9318
@osanneart9318 4 года назад
I've been trying to write a graphic novel script for about 5 years, together with my brother. It's a hard process especially now that we don't live in the same house anymore and have day jobs and studying that comes first. we were mostly missing the very important middle part of the story, but I really think you flipped a switch in my head thanks to your this video and the one about writing conflict. I guess it finally clicked. I'm gonna present my ideas to him tomorrow, but no matter what my brother thinks of what I just thought off, at least we now have a conflict that we can adjust until we both like it and an actual plot that we can base it off! Thank you so much!
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 года назад
That’s awesome! That’s probably the biggest goal of the videos. To help writers get unstuck. Not to give them formulas to live by.
@wonderstorms4030
@wonderstorms4030 4 года назад
im really curious as to how he reacted to your ideas, mind updating us?
@osanneart9318
@osanneart9318 4 года назад
@@wonderstorms4030 Yeah, we discussed it a bit. our story has three main characters, each with a different goal, but initially they also had different enemies and different conflicts, which made it three different stories, and that's not what we wanted. So basically we changed the story so that the opponent of one character became the main antagonist, but that their actions would create a different conflict for each character to deal with. My brother was still a bit hesitant about rewriting a lot of his characters, but he agreed that something needed to change and that my ideas do in fact solve the issues we were having. We're still looking into if we can keep more of his writing (since I already do 90% of the writing, It's a bit unbalanced to change his writing into mine too), but at least we aren't stuck anymore!
@ebrahimmunsif
@ebrahimmunsif 4 года назад
Osanne Art what have you named your story?
@ender4344
@ender4344 4 года назад
Osanne Art Cool story idea!
@AndrewHarten
@AndrewHarten Год назад
Bro watching this not only did I learn loads but experienced the emotions of the short bringing me near tears
@nctwyd4420
@nctwyd4420 4 года назад
In my film studies course, I have to write a screenplay for a short film, but the teacher hasn't really explained to us how to even begin doing that, so this video helped a lot!
@mochiattoart514
@mochiattoart514 4 года назад
as an experimenting novelist, this is really useful and shows a really interesting way I can write
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 года назад
Glad to hear it!
@teddythebear111
@teddythebear111 4 года назад
writing screenplays & scripts can help improve on dialogue & experimenting in different writing mediums can help you in ways you don’t always realize. go for it!
@Maria-xo6de
@Maria-xo6de 3 года назад
Do tell me, if u want promotions or reviews for ur novel. Ig handle :instagram.com/arcane_reviews
@117_viveksingh8
@117_viveksingh8 4 года назад
Literally the best video I've seen on writing a short film
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 года назад
That’s awesome to hear! Thanks so much!
@DeVantieJohnson
@DeVantieJohnson 4 года назад
This just saved me thousands of dollars in 22 mins🙏🏾
@9yrago253
@9yrago253 4 года назад
I'm here just because i kept telling myself that the scene in my head is good for a movie lol
@noelleh.2374
@noelleh.2374 4 года назад
OMG I LOVE STUTTERER. One of my all-time favourite short films. Thanks so much for this video. This will be very helpful for writing short stories too.
@redgadgetfilms7294
@redgadgetfilms7294 4 года назад
Hi Noelle, are you able to tell me where you saw Stutterer? The link in the description no longer works. Thanks so much :)
@galaxylucia1898
@galaxylucia1898 4 года назад
Same here! It's such a great film.
@withlove5698
@withlove5698 3 года назад
:)
@talifishman618
@talifishman618 7 месяцев назад
I've been wanting to write short films ever since I was 15, and Curfew came out and won the Oscars, and I was just mesmerized by how insanely good the writing was, I wanted to be able to do it myself so badly. Thanks for this video! Brings me one step closer.
@yasso2031
@yasso2031 3 года назад
wow the story circle makes me able to exactly break down movies like sound of metal. incredibly simple yet so complex
@kellycoulet6567
@kellycoulet6567 4 года назад
I went to film school as a movie manager/producer, this was one of the greatest story breakdown, we as small independent creators are easily discouraged when in comes to bringing ideas to life, as it asks to write films with very low to no budget comparing to the blockbusters we study and breakdown in school. This is a great reminder that a great story; doesn't a big budget, but a good sense of writting. Thanks very helpful !
@Jey9A4G
@Jey9A4G 4 года назад
Never wrote a Story or Short Film; but after listening to this Video, The Inspiration and Motivation is Strong! Your Method of Teaching is hands down the Best I've heard thus far. Thanks for this Exceptional Video!
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 года назад
Thanks for the kind words!
@ecobugmel
@ecobugmel 4 года назад
I literally wrote everything that felt so important to me to know on my notebook this video is honestly just incredible.
@bialler_media
@bialler_media 3 года назад
Being a Filmmaker 🎞️ has always been my major Dream. Thanks for this lesson 🙏..
@user-go6uj2jm4t
@user-go6uj2jm4t 3 месяца назад
Currently working on my film for college applications and couldn't be more thankful for finding this video. Thanks!
@Curiouslyone1
@Curiouslyone1 4 года назад
This is an incredibly clear and articulate break down of what it means to tell a story. Thank you so much for putting in your energy to share. Truly grateful : )
@ethanhall208
@ethanhall208 4 года назад
This is invaluable information! Writing is by far the most important part of a film, and I’ve always struggled with trying to write something so short.
@buyandholdbrasil
@buyandholdbrasil 4 года назад
Great video! Congrats!
@HeLLBenDr
@HeLLBenDr 4 года назад
The colour in the short film is so beautiful.
@RozzanoAmandu
@RozzanoAmandu 4 года назад
I have learned so much and I am going to apply this to my passion and love for film making
@malenelund7504
@malenelund7504 4 года назад
Out of all the guides, essays, interviews, breakdowns, how-to’s, etc., this is the video that have taught me the most! This is a super effective way to teach how to write! I would like to see more videos like this one if you have examples of films where they might have had a different approach/process/method for writing the film. Like maybe it was an aestethic or something Else that was the starting idea, so how would you then go about from there, etc. You are a really really great teacher!
@ItsArmanLopez
@ItsArmanLopez 4 года назад
This video was immensely helpful. I've been stuck on trying to write a new script/story for a long time now and didn't know where to start. Thank you!
@Hexspa
@Hexspa 4 года назад
The great quality of this essay is how it focuses on the inner plot. Most other resources seem to mostly emphasize the outer. This has me thinking about how the two inform one another. Excellently delivered.
@d.j.manjares9830
@d.j.manjares9830 4 года назад
Your video popped up on my feed, turns out you are real helpful in screenwriting. Great job, man. Subbed.
@dakshhaldhar9815
@dakshhaldhar9815 4 года назад
Extremely grateful for this Video!
@IAmLukarumodoshi
@IAmLukarumodoshi Год назад
I love how every character shown has some level of depth to them, even if not having the same amount of screen time as Greenwood. Man, I love this video so much. It was very informative. Thanks a lot.
@pourusbhatt
@pourusbhatt 4 года назад
You've presented a detailed analysis of a process, most of the major filmmakers fail to explain in simple language. Thank you Tyler.
@DaikhoDominic
@DaikhoDominic 3 года назад
I gone through many story writing class..so many short film tips..and I have learnt so much more in this 22 minutes then anything else. Thank you my brother.
@FuzzySoulTiger
@FuzzySoulTiger 3 года назад
This was sooooo much more comprehensive than following the older models that binds & constrains you to have actions take place within so many pages. Thank you for this wonderful intro to writing a short film 🐯
@lucasandre8260
@lucasandre8260 3 года назад
I have no words to say how great this video is. It helped me to come back to my short film script after a mental block and I hope start shooting this soon. I just found your channel and it's amazing. Thank you, man!
@Abdulaziz2003
@Abdulaziz2003 4 года назад
I've watched this short film a long time ago by sheer coincidence and really enjoyed it. Now that I'm really into making videos and want to start making short films, watching you analyze this adds a whole another layer of understanding to the short, at the time I was a bit young and didn't really understand it that well. Thank you for that! I'll go watch the short again 😆
@tg3470
@tg3470 2 года назад
I have a vision in my head of how my first short film will look like. I have been struggling to let it out because the process was not clear to me before watching the video. I was confused because I wanted to start “building” step 20 without starting on step 1 or really step ‘0’ really. This framework seems to be the key for my particular situation so I am going to give it a try. I work in analytics and I have no video/film experience whatsoever. This video is pure gold. Thank you for sharing the content with humanity.
@selvaganams5666
@selvaganams5666 4 года назад
This is what I wanted for writing my first shot film. This is mind-blowing analysis... Hats off to you. You earned a student!
@jefflep1
@jefflep1 2 года назад
Tyler, I know you did this a couple of years ago but I am overwhelmed with gratitude for how amazing this info is! Thank you!
@rayongracer
@rayongracer 3 года назад
Thank you for making this incredible easy to comprehend guide. Got super inspired to write my own shorts.
@Sammy315Gaming
@Sammy315Gaming 4 года назад
I will attempt to my first short film in a few weeks from now. I am taking just a bit of a different approach to the circle formula and see if it'll work out. Good luck to those of you starting off or doing other films! Much love!
@rish3891
@rish3891 Год назад
I want to know if you did it ?
@j.m.weaver
@j.m.weaver 4 года назад
I want to like this video more than once! Thanks, man really great. So many ideas going round in my head already.
@owenc1530
@owenc1530 4 года назад
Can’t thank you enough this has legitimately been the most informative video on filmmaking and writing I have ever seen
@Sixgirlss
@Sixgirlss 2 года назад
this video is a couple years old but i just wanted to say how helpful it was, i think most of this might seem like its obvious to most people but seeing it written down and organized the way you did it, made it very easy for me to remember and think about everything you said. definitely saving this video to my film playlist to rewatch!
@chackojohn6117
@chackojohn6117 4 года назад
Hi.Your teaching just saved my script.
@hengyan512fly
@hengyan512fly 4 года назад
love the video. please make more!!! thank you for the great content!
@CadenO356
@CadenO356 Год назад
I've been watching several videos about writing. This is by far the most helpful video. Thanks so much for making it.
@BeyMediaVids
@BeyMediaVids 3 года назад
Your video has really helped a lot in the writing process. You don't see many film tutorials with this level of confidence. I understood what was going on and was not confused in any way shape or form. Your video has helped many writers like myself, you should be proud.
@Kamil-B
@Kamil-B 4 года назад
Such a good video! I never actually knew how to use a story circle in writing. Great video! Thanks! :D
@calvinwongmedia
@calvinwongmedia 4 года назад
instantly subbed!!! i learned so much in 20 minutes. thank you so much!!!!!! :D
@hearsae
@hearsae 3 года назад
we watched stutterer in my screenwriting class today so it was perfect that this video popped up on my recommended tab! this was extremely helpful, i'll make sure to apply what i've learned when i write my screenplay!
@Eden-xy7gk
@Eden-xy7gk 4 года назад
THANK YOU, I've been writing and shooting cruddy shorts and films for about a year now. This video really helped me make my first "good" short.
@sidharthben
@sidharthben 4 года назад
Thanks for this wonderful essay ❣️
@aquanautorange885
@aquanautorange885 3 года назад
I'm in a 48 hour film competition over the weekend (and writing is not my strong suit). I've been watching your videos all week. Thanks so much for all the tips, dude!
@blank2541
@blank2541 Год назад
Story circle for tragedies: character -> desire and fatal flaw -> new environment -> rising action -> attempt to achieve goal/achieve it -> change of fortune & character self awareness -> character is broken
@noahtokarski4516
@noahtokarski4516 2 года назад
My Filmmaking 1 professor is assigning us to watch this video for homework. You are making an impact!
@CreativeFlowExplorer
@CreativeFlowExplorer 4 года назад
This is really good! I'm inspired. Thank you.
@nauticalthoughtsmedia4442
@nauticalthoughtsmedia4442 4 года назад
Informative and to the point. Thank you for the awesome tips, I'm going to look further into your channel!
@MattFaris
@MattFaris 4 года назад
This is such a great tutorial. Thank you so much. Just off the back of a couple of projects and struggling to find what to work on next. As someone who writes, directs and acts this has actually helped me in all three areas. MASSIVE APPRECIATION FOR THIS!!!!! THANK YOU
@DanielTroutmanblog
@DanielTroutmanblog 3 года назад
This was fantastic analysis. This is one of the best works on story that I've seen on RU-vid. Keep up the great work
@lamodification
@lamodification 3 года назад
In Stutterers Story Circle point 5-7 (Tyler) is basically synonymous. Point 8 is not proactive, but merely an observation, which is basically OK, but not pushing dramatic boundaries. The Karthasis is also morally pretty questionable, bcoz the subtext is literally: "Disabled people can only engegage among their peers", which is a weak message (in Se7en the st is: "The world is not a fine place, but worth fighting for"). An ironic plot device (designing principle) would have been if the Love Interest was a successful TED Speaker i.e. Also the Father figure could have been used to more potential not by reflecting the Love Interests believe (accept urself) but to be the one who discourages the stutterer by reminding him how he failed each time he tried to overcome his obstacle, which makes for a more nuanced moral web. But all in all, an inspiring video essay.
@davidlyttle1919
@davidlyttle1919 3 года назад
I am glad to see this comment. Everyone else is gushing about how great the story is but to me it is lazy writing. . the solution is Ta Da the girl is deaf? Where is the struggle the stutterer had to mount? The girl was not honest for she did not reveal she was deaf at the beginning. I would have had stutterer fall in love at the beginning with a girl who is an excellent speaker so he does all he can to overcome his impediment. tension rises as each thing he tries fails until he forces himself to try the impossible, a debate which turns out to be against a rival who also wants the girl on a topic he cares deeply enough to give it his all. At first he is losing but then he reaches deep inside and remembers the childhood trauma that caused his stuttering and he forces himself to break thru the protective cocoon his stuttering was to win the debate and the love he thought was at the center of his being, but now he has grown to a new level of self understanding and he gains a higher degree of confidence and freedom from self doubt.
@davidlyttle1919
@davidlyttle1919 3 года назад
Also I would have the father be ashamed of his son thus becoming another obstacle to overcome and when the stutterer wins, he apologizes for not being a better influence...missed opportunity for drama, forgiveness and redemption
@lamodification
@lamodification 3 года назад
@@davidlyttle1919 one hundred percent right.
@lamodification
@lamodification 3 года назад
@@davidlyttle1919 There are those two types of successful writers: One who's a working writer and the other who teaches writing theories.
@htspencer9084
@htspencer9084 Год назад
Yeah not a huge fan of the problematic implication of the resolution of this short film.
@deliriousmeatball6855
@deliriousmeatball6855 4 года назад
The work that goes into ur videos is genuinely inspiring. I’m constantly looking for new channels dissecting my favourite thing (film) and i get so happy when I find gems like ur channel
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 года назад
Glad you’re enjoying the videos!
@sarthkapil254
@sarthkapil254 Год назад
Really liked how the tutorial and the film build up to end and revealing the twist. It was beautiful
@itsstaylorhall
@itsstaylorhall 2 года назад
Amazing job! The clear points made were very helpful.
@zafirisvideography
@zafirisvideography 4 года назад
Perfect! Thank you for sharing your knowledge with us.
@YxungHermes
@YxungHermes 4 года назад
Thank you Tyler, this was great. Forever grateful 🙏🏽. Can't wait to tune in to more of your work!
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 года назад
Glad it was helpful!
@SuperBagMan217
@SuperBagMan217 2 года назад
This might be my favorite randomly recommended video ever! Great content!
@JurijFedorov
@JurijFedorov 4 года назад
Also, one thing I noticed in the short film. It's about a date. There are some topics you will see so much in short films that you will get tired of them. Both in films and in scripts. Dates are overdone. Some of the best short films are about dates for sure because they create short and to the point drama, but they are in fact overdone. Unless you can make it great it will just disappear among the thousands of movies about the same topic. I often see people just write in some gags in a date and call it a day. Please don't. Unless it's so funny that I laugh or smile all the way you need to make it funnier. Some other topics I try to avoid are: waking up in the morning as the first scene, drug abuse as the main topic, LGBT, suicide, depression, one single apartment room only, lead that doesn't talk, mystery that is not clear from page 1. You may think that you have a great idea in one of these topics, but I see 99 overdone ideas in these topics for every 1 good idea. And chances are if you don't even know what topics are overdone you probably need to read 100-200 screenplays and watch as many short films. You will see what works and doesn't work.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 года назад
Yea there’s definitely a lot of overdone short film topics
@kevincarvalho5054
@kevincarvalho5054 4 года назад
Oh my God man, this video is great. Thank you for sharing the knowledge
@HaiTomVlog
@HaiTomVlog 2 года назад
This was really helpful and informative! I got a lot out of it - thanks for creating it!
@donmiko345
@donmiko345 2 года назад
I love it, thank you so much! I needed to know how to start my scenario, and that's a thing that I didn't see well explained in books I read. This is great! I will definitely come back to this video many times.
@aqgidadu
@aqgidadu 2 года назад
Thank you for you videos. I learn every time I watch one. May you have success in all of your endeavors!
@QuinnYouTube
@QuinnYouTube 4 года назад
Thanks again writer man
@anaestrellarbg
@anaestrellarbg 4 года назад
This is an amazing video!!! I´ve read a lot of books about screenplay but no one ever had explained it to me that way! congrats!! keep the good work
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 года назад
Glad it was helpful!
@jjmboston5832
@jjmboston5832 Год назад
it is one of my favorite short films. Thanks for analyzing it.
@user-nd1zr3fj7i
@user-nd1zr3fj7i 3 года назад
I can't emphasize enough how helpful this is.
@ieLindy
@ieLindy 4 года назад
This was SO GOOD. I learned so much just from this video and you put words to things I understood about story and made it so much clearer. I was having a crappy moment before finding your video and I feel a lot more equipped to carry through with my idea cause of you. Thanks for the hours of effort you put into this bro 🙏🏻
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 года назад
I’m glad it was helpful!!
@vinkarume6205
@vinkarume6205 4 года назад
This is the most brilliant video I have seen today! I always learn a new concept with every watch! Thank you
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 года назад
Thanks for the kind words!
@Zeangjpn
@Zeangjpn 3 года назад
Super helpful - THANK YOU TYLER - this really helped me nail down my theme and articulate the things that I knew I was struggling with in my story.
@Safar.369
@Safar.369 Год назад
I appreciate your way of analyzing and breakdown processes.
@ricardomiranda7737
@ricardomiranda7737 4 года назад
Wow, this is very helpful. Definitely will check out the FB Group. Thank you.
@skyy_nautique
@skyy_nautique 2 года назад
Thanks for your help man, I'm currently writing movies about Marvel and DC Comics and you've really helped me understand how do write a good script.
@whatthefox6303
@whatthefox6303 7 месяцев назад
You have no idea how much I needed the algorithm to randomly suggest this video right now. Trying to get my filmmaking vibe back and just can't make any scripts work despite once being the top graded writer at film school. Thank you for uploading this.
@ssrpic
@ssrpic 4 года назад
wow! Tyler this is amazing. I watch a lot of youtube videos don't know why I never came across your channel. For few months I was learning everything about filmmaking, so it feels as if universe was conspiring to recommend your video to me.
@TylerMowery
@TylerMowery 4 года назад
I’m glad you’re enjoying my videos!
@sujithvenkatesh3305
@sujithvenkatesh3305 4 года назад
Thanks for your informative videos. You're breathtaking!
@mindsetofanathlete
@mindsetofanathlete 3 года назад
This is a beautiful way to showcase how to make a short film! Thanks for sharing!
@patrickpfeiffer944
@patrickpfeiffer944 2 года назад
Thank you. This was brilliant, especially in the use of beliefs as the lens for seeing the structure of the story. Haven’t ever heard of it like that before. Nailed it 🔨👏🏻🎬
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