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5 Uncommon POETRY TIPS to Instantly Write BETTER POEMS 

Nikita Shorikov
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So you want to write better poems, huh? Well, good; these 5 uncommon poetry tips will help you improve your poems instantly. Get comfy and learn how to write good poetry by using some less known poetry techniques from masters like Matsuo Basho, William Carlos Williams, and T.S. Eliot.
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@LucasRodmo
@LucasRodmo 9 месяцев назад
My process and suggestions: 1. Write, write, write and write. Eventually will be instinctive and you will feel the need to write. 2. Don't overthink, just write 3. Don't bother with rules and rhymes, just improve de text later 4. Don't judge your quality. Sure you will write bad or boring stuff, but the gems will appear. Poetry it's mining, metal smithing, wood carving, sculpturing, painting. 5. Don't expect to be inspired. Deep inspiration it's rare, but great things can come from the ordinary. Specially inspiration itself.
@jacobparsons2544
@jacobparsons2544 4 года назад
In my opinion, the best way to write poetry, don’t think at first, just start writing, an emotion or feeling will uncover itself and then you can hone in on that feeling or emotion. Never say the emotion you’re thinking about, you can say something like “the birds sing their sorrowful tune”, but never ever state what feeling you have while writing the poem, it constricts it and most of the time it will cause people to not think for themselves and develop their own emotions about the poem. I always write on paper with a trusted fountain pen because that feels the best, but that’s a personal preference. You can write however you like, but I always prefer to have a physical copy in my hand before I put it into an online document. Another thing, it’s a personal preference; however, I prefer not to rhyme and keep it without any given classical format, keep it without rhymes and free form, in my opinion, rhyming every end of every line is rather childish, but to each his own.
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 4 года назад
Great summary of a solid approach towards the idea of "show, don't tell"! The others are definitely personal preference, so it's good to try everything until you find what feels right for you. I mostly write digitally, but have been experimenting with pen and paper recently as well. Rhymes are definitely something I had the same view on before, but I've been warming up to them as I've experimented over the past few years. There's some fantastic free verse and some fantastic rhyming poetry, both old and new.
@piyalichhajed6009
@piyalichhajed6009 3 года назад
Rhyming is fun! :-) for me ofc, to each their own!
@daviemerim3002
@daviemerim3002 3 года назад
This method is similat to the surrealist process of painting, where the subject becomes what comes to mind.
@soulful_music007
@soulful_music007 3 года назад
If u think rhyming is childish than you are wrong read some poems by great english poets who had used rhyming schemes in their poems that make their poems ever better than a non rhyming poem or a blank verse!!!!! You should know that rhyming poems makes you flow with the things mentioned in the poems and make you understand the content in the poem better than a blank verse or a non rhyming poem !!!!!!
@daviemerim3002
@daviemerim3002 3 года назад
I believe he didn't really mean it, he just don't like rhyming. I do use rhymes, and I'm not offended; rich rhymes (not poor rhymes) give rhythm to the poem, make it fun to read. The absence of rhyme makes the poem more serious, because there are times when you just don't feel like listening to music at all.
@CrazyMuffin997
@CrazyMuffin997 5 лет назад
As soon as you said illuminati I know you're watching I subscribed
@miriamd5250
@miriamd5250 5 лет назад
Same I subscribe the moment he said that
@ronathebear
@ronathebear 5 лет назад
Same
@legen_d789
@legen_d789 4 года назад
right when i heard him say that i subbed
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 4 года назад
Dear Illuminati overlords, I am pleased to know I have appeased you for today. Your support is much appreciated.
@axyiusx
@axyiusx 4 года назад
@@NikitaShorikov hi
@sarahig3563
@sarahig3563 4 года назад
As the sun sets And as flowers bloom As the winds blow Set a time for doom Things may be bright Yet again who knows The brightest angels Have bitter flaws As fire spreads And as volcanoes erupt As the ravens scream This love may not corrupt Not a single wicked scheme Has ever been seen In the hearts of most wicked Love has been I don't even know about this poem i wrote
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 4 года назад
There's a lot there! Nice use of rhyme, powerful imagery (volcanoes erupt, ravens scream, etc.), good progression. Good areas to focus on would be poetic meter and editing down some of the unrelated excess to really hone in on one specific part that feels most important and powerful to you. Keep at it! :)
@glamorousarts2291
@glamorousarts2291 2 года назад
All I could say of it is that it's really nice! And you're very imaginative at some places here. But..... Just it's somewhat unclear what you're focusing on ( it's what seems to me 🙄). But nice use of tension and rhyming.
@diamondgaming4113
@diamondgaming4113 2 года назад
Copy write
@bryanadeepakraj5620
@bryanadeepakraj5620 Год назад
Nice poem
@tigerwolf9565
@tigerwolf9565 Год назад
God bless you and Jesus loves you! ❤️🙏✝️💖👑
@poiseblemiramoon6992
@poiseblemiramoon6992 3 года назад
A little acrostic poem (raindrop): Resting on a leaf And going on its final water-slide ride Into the abyss of air. Never saved, never interjected; Doomed, oblivious to doom. Rescued by a thought: Over there will stretch a twig Pulling me up again.
@bryanadeepakraj5620
@bryanadeepakraj5620 Год назад
Really nice
@aleczen6973
@aleczen6973 Год назад
love the simplicity of it, well chosen words
@ciofloyd886
@ciofloyd886 Год назад
Amazing 😁🔥
@vampyfvr
@vampyfvr 3 года назад
I wouldn't mind having him as my English teacher.
@Lulu-Journey
@Lulu-Journey 3 года назад
Same
@cries3136
@cries3136 3 года назад
69 likes
@pumpkinieepwp6644
@pumpkinieepwp6644 3 года назад
@@cries3136 ughh u criedd and it becamee 73😂😂
@cries3136
@cries3136 3 года назад
@@pumpkinieepwp6644 yes 😢
@M4Xine-Gamer
@M4Xine-Gamer 3 года назад
y e p s a m e
@RashmikaLikesBooks
@RashmikaLikesBooks 5 лет назад
To add to your first point, poems that have many images and ideas can synthesise it all together to have one cohesive main idea. For example, roads, cars, spaceships and stars to illustrate the idea of aimlessness: travel without a destination. Although there are many images, they're not in isolation.
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 4 года назад
Yes, definitely! That would be one of the approaches for keeping more images in, though I think that makes things a bit more complicated simply by virtue of the elements being worked with. Less is easier to start, but eventually more and more can be integrated and meaningfully connected without going overboard.
@AutumnSchuerger-uy7ux
@AutumnSchuerger-uy7ux 11 месяцев назад
Raindrops on a window seal A library at night I yearn for what once was And fear what might I stumble and stutter Trance-like down the hall Led by the candle's light And the voices? They squall. With a feeling inside me, I can't help but wonder Who else might be with me Feeling this thunder? It comes like a wave It roars and it wanes It's no ordinary feeling It's a most desperate pain. It yearns and it hungers For even a piece of that day A day that is perfect In every way. I know that this day can't happen again, But I yearn for it anew Like a chick for it's hen. If ever there was a joy, So terrible, so far It's the joy of hiraeth, As you remember what's gone
@frostdeath2956
@frostdeath2956 3 года назад
I'm 16 and I write poetry started at age 9 till now I'm still going Imma publish a book one day My advice is just take a pen and paper no need to think nature will do the rest
@natukundadorothy2895
@natukundadorothy2895 Год назад
You may not see my lips move Yet I almost scream my heart out Yelling & longing to be heard Yet yielding no audience at all Not that my voice wasn't Loud enough; Just that it was all an act in my mind. Yours truly, Me!
@nickjensen2002
@nickjensen2002 6 лет назад
I almost never comment on videos but I want to say that you did a great job and I can't wait to see new stuff!
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 6 лет назад
Thank you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to let me know you enjoyed it. More on the way soon!
@pedrosolorio8243
@pedrosolorio8243 5 лет назад
I've been writing love and sad poems since like the 8th grade. I'm 23 years now and I still have the tendency to go off topic and make it suuuuper long. I should've taken a creative writing class 😔
@AdamGaryPoetry
@AdamGaryPoetry 4 года назад
@@notsure8433 That's awesome!
@AdamGaryPoetry
@AdamGaryPoetry 4 года назад
I was actually the opposite. I hated it in school, then I turned 21 and haven't looked back since!
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 4 года назад
Completely normal! Don't beat yourself up over it. If you have a lot to say and it just needs to come out, it's totally possible that the building up approach isn't for you. I was in your boat before too and learned how to cut the extraneous bits in editing over time and how to work intuitively to minimize completely random stuff. Just keep writing and revising! The journey is the destination :)
@tinahochstetler2189
@tinahochstetler2189 3 года назад
If your writing wanders off too long and off topic, you can probably get two or three separate pieces out of the original free flowing piece. I would just go with it and follow it where ever it leads. And then see what you can pick out to work with. Keep the original draft. You might be able to pick something else out of it as well.
@jamerlybob28
@jamerlybob28 6 лет назад
Incredibly watchable video... Easy on the eyes, easy on the ears, but HARD ON KNOWLEDGE. I like it. One thing however is that good poetry can exist without tension. In those cases the iceberg ratios are flipped, but the words need to be so on point that they can support the poem on their own, either through humour or sexiness. I would've liked to see the Volta talked about, or "the turn" as some call it... The point in a poem that indicates a dramatic shift in theme E.G happy to sad or perhaps a stark revelation. This adds dimension to the poem, and goes hand in hand with tension. Great work
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 6 лет назад
Thanks for the kind words and positive feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed the video :) You're right on both fronts, in terms of the flipped iceberg and the Volta. No time to give most of these topics the time they truly deserve, unfortunately. But I'll make a note of those ideas to return to in future videos. Cheers!
@jamerlybob28
@jamerlybob28 5 лет назад
@@NikitaShorikov Looking forward to it!
@tigerwolf9565
@tigerwolf9565 Год назад
God bless you and Jesus loves you! ❤️🙏✝️💖👑
@tigerwolf9565
@tigerwolf9565 Год назад
@@NikitaShorikov God bless you and Jesus loves you! ❤️🙏✝️💖👑
@tigerwolf9565
@tigerwolf9565 Год назад
@@NikitaShorikov God bless, and Jesus loves everyone! God sent his Son to die on the cross for us all to save us all from our sins! We have all sinned. :( 😞 😓 He saved us! Hallelujah! Praise his name, for he is the greatest! Check out John 3:16 in the Holy Bible! ❤️🙏✝️💖👑 I love you, Jesus Christ, our Lord and Savior! I love you God!
@crestfallenpoetess6307
@crestfallenpoetess6307 5 лет назад
❝Dejected❞ Isolated. Maybe I was born to be alone. To be in a corner in which I call home. Dark as it may seem, it feels so comforting. The remedy of my illness is unknown, I'm still searching. I feel no sadness, no emotions inside. My heart seems to be void with feelings aside. Isolated. I stay. I sit on my bed while my mind is astray. My notions are on a sick twist, you don't need to know. The things I have in mind is more vigorous than horror shows. Its eating me up, it can never be full. Not until it gnaws my being as a whole. Demons? They ain't real. Just a bunch of delusions. Though I believe the real demon is inside me, causing illusions. Isolated. Yes, that's what I feel. That's what I am, that's how I had lived. Soon I won't be, ain't gonna be lonely. For in the grave, thousands of bones are beside me. Happy, yes you will be soon. If I rest for eternity, I'd escape all the gloom. Crestfallen being, that's how I was known. Might as well also accept if I die in forlorn.
@Chitranshchitt
@Chitranshchitt 2 года назад
This is good 👍🏻
@aanyabhardwaj7167
@aanyabhardwaj7167 2 года назад
This was so good!!!!!!
@elllearn9679
@elllearn9679 4 года назад
Been writting poems since I was a kid and learned these things from reading published poets. Well I've been published but nothing major. This is great information.
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 4 года назад
Thank you for the kind words! Glad you're enjoying the content.
@brie5070
@brie5070 2 года назад
what poems have you had published id love to read some of them?
@luismaverick9352
@luismaverick9352 4 года назад
Where has this channel been in my life
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 4 года назад
You flatter me :) Very grateful for the kind words and support. More finally coming in the next few weeks so stay tuned!
@alexhiggs7057
@alexhiggs7057 3 года назад
A million A million reactions A million thoughts A million aches A million questions A million emotions A million sensations A million pains A minute in my head has a million thoughts
@Doomergedon
@Doomergedon Год назад
This comment didn’t get a million reactions 😟 So I’ll get the ball rolling 🙂🙃🙂 I love the enumeration which at first I thought was a bit tedious but the end explains why it was necessary and it’s beautiful 🤩 However, in my opinion, perhaps you should reconsider the “A million thoughts” as you have repeated the same thing in the last verse 🤷‍♂️ then again I’m not exactly a poet, at least not yet 😂
@BurgundyRoseStudios
@BurgundyRoseStudios 2 месяца назад
Beautiful and I so relate. But yes, I agree with @Doomergedon. Take out a million thoughts
@niklitis
@niklitis 2 года назад
I only started writing poetry seriously last august when I started my first college poetry course and immediately switched my major (from just fiction to poetry so not a huge jump) when I found how much I loved it. I would sometimes write poems to vent, but the class I took allowed me to see how I could make those into something actually worth a read (by someone other than myself). Bc enrollment is down, they’ve cut the class I would be taking in the fall (so I have to do it in the spring) so I’ve been trying to find ways to continue to grow my skill. I think this was really helpful! It reminded me of some tactics I know but still need to practice and gave me new ones! Thanks so much!
@meowsof
@meowsof 3 года назад
Ive been starting out with poetry lately but Ive always had a way with words ever since and I just needed uncommon ideas and tips to help me write better and this is exactly the what I need!!!
@RedCreates
@RedCreates 4 года назад
Hi there! I am a Filipino Poet by Heart and starting my career in making Spoken Word Poetries. This video is very helpful to me and I learned a lot from this even in a short period of time. Imitation, Adaptation to Transformation but we should still be the Original. Thank you so much for this video. :)
@rinac885
@rinac885 5 лет назад
My God. The amount of effort and thought put into this video for a concise explaination is ASTOUNDING. Thank you so much! How does this have so few liikes?
@AdamGaryPoetry
@AdamGaryPoetry 4 года назад
Like spike?!
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 4 года назад
I'm very happy you found it helpful! Thank you so much for the kind words. I really appreciate them :)
@VVesteria
@VVesteria Год назад
I can be quite cringe sometimes ( I’m terrible with words)so I took up drawing , that way I don’t have to talk to express sometimes it can be liked through how good it looks. But goddammit poetry looks are sounds so damn cool I have a lot of appreciation for you poets
@rawrhymes7677
@rawrhymes7677 3 года назад
I have been writing poetry for some time. I am finally putting them out there. Wish me luck! This video is very informative. I definitely took notes.
@HueSmittenStudio
@HueSmittenStudio 2 года назад
Thank you! I was struggling finishing a poem, decided to remove all the verses except one and now it’s perfect
@Anthony-gq7dk
@Anthony-gq7dk 2 года назад
Wonderful tips and advice and so well delivered too, it opens up a lot of avenues not signposted, especially living off the crumbs of the masters. Now for the wedding cake !
@florencekirsch
@florencekirsch 9 месяцев назад
I’m so glad for this site. So much poetry out there but so hard to know if you’re any good. I really appreciate your advice about mixing metaphors and also cliches
@roryb.378
@roryb.378 11 месяцев назад
poetry is really my passion and the last part of this video really resonated with me - i often feel as though my poetry isn't good enough and can't compare to that which i read, but i love the idea of having freedom to copy the poetry that i admire in order to improve my own
@soulful_music007
@soulful_music007 3 года назад
I am a poet and i am 16 years old . I think the best ways to write a poem are 1. Freely Writing without thinking whatever comes in your mind about someone or something Then adding line breaks in them !! 2.You can also use this one reading more and more poetry by different poets and taking a particular theme and crafting it into a poem. THAT'S EASY!!!!! isn't it?
@chooky7568
@chooky7568 4 года назад
This video was so helpful, and just what I needed. Thank you
@oldladyPajamas
@oldladyPajamas 2 года назад
These were great tips! Thank you!
@Ash-up9gl
@Ash-up9gl 5 лет назад
this is so good, thank you! Oh my goodness you need more people, this is such great content
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 4 года назад
Thank you very much for the kind words!! :)
@RashmikaLikesBooks
@RashmikaLikesBooks 5 лет назад
You're so hilarious! I hope to promote your channel in future so that more people can appreciate you for your wonderful delivery style!
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 4 года назад
Thank you very much for the kind words and support! I'm glad you enjoyed the video :)
@ShaeMacMillan
@ShaeMacMillan 6 лет назад
great job guiding us towards better poems! Glad I found your resource
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 4 года назад
Thank you very much! I'm glad that you found it helpful!
@s0urp0wer5
@s0urp0wer5 Месяц назад
Really great tips in here. I will continue to revisit this
@ab562
@ab562 Год назад
Great piece of advice! Thanks!
@qasimkhan7180
@qasimkhan7180 3 года назад
Thank you so much for tips💛
@smellydonut5088
@smellydonut5088 4 года назад
Tysm! This was very helpful :)
@mafaldaa
@mafaldaa 6 лет назад
this is the first video that i saw in your channel.... I LOVE IT! You are amazing!
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 4 года назад
Thank you very much for the kind words! I appreciate it a lot :)
@CalliAMusic
@CalliAMusic 3 года назад
Best poetry advice out there.
@fatezuwena5404
@fatezuwena5404 3 года назад
Very useful skills I'm learning as a writer, the tension part makes sense.
@cupofteawithpoetry
@cupofteawithpoetry 2 года назад
This is really helpful, thank you!
@madhatteradvocate1656
@madhatteradvocate1656 3 года назад
Wow! Thank you! This really helped ☺
@cynthiagrenyion5357
@cynthiagrenyion5357 3 года назад
Love the information here.As a poet myself I am getting information to improve .
@nethla314
@nethla314 Год назад
So looking forwards to a deep-dive on tension! :D wonderful video and most helpful I've ever come across (and funny too)
@gxretrance
@gxretrance 3 года назад
nikitas still replying after 3 years 👑
@amaya3270
@amaya3270 3 года назад
Thank you, i'm just watching to better my craft!!
@anamikasscribbles8618
@anamikasscribbles8618 3 года назад
Thank you! This is very helpful. I wrote a poem write after and I love it. ❤
@emilyeshraghi8197
@emilyeshraghi8197 3 месяца назад
Really helpful, thank you! :)
@prachikarocks
@prachikarocks Год назад
This is damn helpful. The first tip caught me in the net because we tend to catch a person or an image and forget that the Essence of a poetry is "impact"
@witchofthestorm
@witchofthestorm 3 года назад
I have began Intro to Creative Writing in college and we are focusing on poetry aka something that I struggle terrible with. You, my friend, just helped me out a lot and may comment with some poetry I write later on. The teacher asked us to listen to a poet's writing strategy/process, so guess who I'm going to be writing about that helped me out? Thank you again!
@benjaminkings8699
@benjaminkings8699 5 лет назад
this was so helpful. thanks man.
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 4 года назад
My pleasure! Happy to help :)
@rizwanbutt4625
@rizwanbutt4625 4 года назад
You have contributed to make me a good poet in future, awesome stuff, really wonderful effort.
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 4 года назад
Thanks for the kind words :) Happy I could help!
@bunker8575
@bunker8575 4 года назад
Man, what great info. Very nice. Thank you.
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 4 года назад
Happy to help! Thanks for watching :)
@gladstonelesliesamuel5316
@gladstonelesliesamuel5316 4 года назад
Hey Nikita. I really liked your tips and tricks. Thanks for sharing.
@natalieferrero3773
@natalieferrero3773 3 года назад
This is the only good advice on poetry I’ve ever heard
@danielkibira4064
@danielkibira4064 Год назад
🤯 Oooh ! That has been a mesmerising😵‍💫 journey of Un-learning the obsolete and rediscovery of poetry. Thanks 💯Man 👍🏾
@malakinginaka
@malakinginaka 4 года назад
As someone that raps, vids like this really broaden your horizon ngl
@roszayanah8647
@roszayanah8647 3 года назад
I found your video by chance (just made a random Google search) and I must say I'm glad to have stumbled upon it! ❤️ Will keep these tips in mind.
@Younas7991
@Younas7991 5 лет назад
What a great way to start off a video! 🤣♥️ loves it.
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 4 года назад
Thank you!
@cagedgreed
@cagedgreed 2 года назад
Circulation slowed by piano stool edge, Feet tingling as ears are soothed by rhythmic chanting of a pleasant voice. Excellent lesson. Subscribed, despite the lateness of my action.
@bertiemasson
@bertiemasson Год назад
Excellent post, thanks.
@luca-ql4xf
@luca-ql4xf 4 года назад
I would just like to publicly thank T. S. Elliot for making me feel like A Good Poet™ with that last quote
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 4 года назад
Don't worry, you're killing it! Keep writing my friend :)
@lolapulatova8978
@lolapulatova8978 6 лет назад
very informative! never knew this! 😊
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 6 лет назад
Thank you! Glad you liked it! :)
@xdSKALITON
@xdSKALITON 4 года назад
Dude this guy is so helpful
@lilpoetsuganda4318
@lilpoetsuganda4318 Год назад
Thank you, this is helpful
@cs1-59indulekham.r.4
@cs1-59indulekham.r.4 5 лет назад
Extremely useful.A great job. Tnx for putting this up.
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 4 года назад
My pleasure! Glad that you found it helpful :)
@cs1-59indulekham.r.4
@cs1-59indulekham.r.4 4 года назад
@@NikitaShorikov it did help me write better instantly ;)
@plswatchinfinitytrain
@plswatchinfinitytrain 8 месяцев назад
Literally best writing advice I ever got
@poeticnux
@poeticnux 7 месяцев назад
Me personally I write for 10 mins straight to an instrumental when I have writers block. I go back after a few hours and read highlight certain lines if it seems conceptual
@goujmark
@goujmark 9 месяцев назад
Thank you for inspiring my poem titled Tension!
@ruslanpulatov6499
@ruslanpulatov6499 6 лет назад
thanks for the tips~
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 6 лет назад
My pleasure~
@mr.p1759
@mr.p1759 2 года назад
Thank you for helping me in my summer vacation home work
@miriamangel215
@miriamangel215 3 года назад
This is the best advice and I love this video and actually made me laugh thank u!!
@pologiprabhakar1370
@pologiprabhakar1370 2 года назад
Nature-unexplained experience! It is heart to world , But baby to my heart. Miracle to my eyes, Joy to my feelings, Cleansing to my body, Vibration to my soul, Soothing to my mind, Wings to my self, And totally a connection of long...
@stephanieghanney9493
@stephanieghanney9493 3 года назад
What makes me love this video is the easy to understand examples
@stephanieghanney9493
@stephanieghanney9493 3 года назад
These tips are the best, I now have a broad mind as to how to become a better poet!
@stephanieghanney9493
@stephanieghanney9493 3 года назад
It's amazing how I already had this tips at hand naturally
@mbe67
@mbe67 3 года назад
Ta very much! Hope this helps me for a competition
@crestfallenpoetess6307
@crestfallenpoetess6307 5 лет назад
Thank you for the tip.
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 4 года назад
My pleasure!
@evaperrinfontana8086
@evaperrinfontana8086 4 года назад
Amazing! Great video and also lowkey hilarious :)
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 4 года назад
Thanks for the kind words! Glad you enjoyed it :)
@drnykterstein_
@drnykterstein_ 3 года назад
Amazing !
@HANDSSSS
@HANDSSSS 3 года назад
You're amazing! I'll get all of my entourage just to support and make you fame.
@HenryTheCrook
@HenryTheCrook 4 года назад
I took notes through this video. I'm lazy, I never take notes. 10/10 new subscriber.
@rossigie
@rossigie Год назад
This makes poetry so much easier and better i am only new to poetry but this helps so much as the sealine swims we all stand in desipar there is nothing better the a sealine in despair
@musolzangana8222
@musolzangana8222 4 года назад
Can someone critique this poem I made but keep in mind it’s the first poem I’ve made As I wash my hands from the black blood from my lovers heart I just broke, I try to end this chapter and move on. But when I walk on the entrance of shame with a shovel I just buried his body with, I see him standing there with a halo shining brighter than the sun above his head. So beautiful and pristine, perfectly straight white teeth like his sexuality, I had so many questions but nothing came out. He rises before the world in the sunrise sweet silence. I could hear his voice speaking to me in that silence. I was an addict of his dark raspy voice. So every night I felt lonely I numbed my pain with his voice. I mean what is even so special about him? There’s plenty other people to love, and plenty of drugs to try so who cares? I realized I needed him for my sanity I realized I loved him for his insanity
@novepipps
@novepipps 2 года назад
Super helpful, thank you. Am subbed. 🌞
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 2 года назад
Happy I could help! Thank you for the kind words :)
@stephanieghanney9493
@stephanieghanney9493 3 года назад
The fifth tip was my first step and now I'm able to make original poems
@kelceyfirth
@kelceyfirth 2 года назад
It's kinda cringe but I tried to use the tips in editing the poem to make it more concise and emotive he holds a thorn to his fingertip cheeks glow crimson with an aching grin a pain so great, a boy so fragile he is so thin, a boy with paper bones and a grave he dug himself. standing, rose in hand at the edge on the brink he is alone, empty yet he grins. a wide, joyous grin on a cold, fragile boy blood drips from his fingertip a rose, wilting, thorns and all.
@nicepoetry5859
@nicepoetry5859 3 года назад
Your thought is Good, Thank you I will try on my Poetry
@slappy8able
@slappy8able 4 года назад
Heeh this is really good Also I subbed
@robbiespellman7366
@robbiespellman7366 6 лет назад
I look foreword to more videos, very informative :)
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 6 лет назад
Thank you! More on the way soon :)
@julesclarkful
@julesclarkful 2 года назад
Very good tips thank you
@chequemated
@chequemated 5 лет назад
Really good stuff.. thanks
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 4 года назад
My pleasure! Thanks for watching :)
@sannansaleh_
@sannansaleh_ 5 лет назад
really well taught!
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 4 года назад
Thank you!
@jiraffejimmy2159
@jiraffejimmy2159 3 года назад
The first ten seconds of this video is amazing
@sgt.boneface7467
@sgt.boneface7467 2 года назад
Well, I've seen all & non' Seen flowers bloom And the hook reeled back, gone I've seen the empty room Lit only by her bottled sun And if you had asked me once more I'd say there's only I & the horizon beyond She was a muse of the stars Wholly of Mars She was an unending night sky Her love, a series of light, on & on With everything, she had me along Thought she was mine but she was her's I had nothing but only the horizon beyond So I sail my mortal realm By sea, by helm, From time to time again & again I see her across the sky For a moment she's there, & she's gone I wish to have her i wish to so much as try But for now I've me & the horizon beyond If you cant tell im really influenced by Bob dylan. Tell me what you guys thinks :)
@EMPANAO321
@EMPANAO321 2 года назад
I like it and I even made a translation of it lol (I know, terrible translation sorry, I just like to translate stuff lol) He visto todo y nada He visto flores florecer Y el anzuelo retrocedió, y se fué, He visto la habitación vacía Iluminada solo por su sol en una botella Y si me hubieras preguntado una vez Yo diría que solo estoy yo y el horizonte más allá Ella era la musa de las estrellas Sagrada en Marte Ella era un interminable cielo de noche Su amor, una ráfaga de luz infinita Con todo, ella me tenía Pensé que era mía pero era de ella No tenía nada, solo al horizonte más allá Así que navego mi reino mortal Por el mar, por el timón De vez en cuando, una y otra vez La veo a través del cielo Por un momento ella está allí, y se ha ido Deseo tenerla, deseo tanto como puedo Pero ahora me tengo a mí y al horizonte más allá
@alfogel3298
@alfogel3298 3 года назад
Here’s a good example of a creative poem from simply observing a dove or doves supposedly the birds of peace but the hunters could care less because to them they were just a dinner meal. These are probably the thoughts that ended up in the following poem by my favorite poet, who also painted as evidenced by his original paintings he did in his limited edition poetry books. Here’s the poem: PEACE I thought the dove was the bird of peace but here they were shooting them out of the brush and climbing up the sides of mountains and banging them down; and everywhere the doves went there were the hunters blasting and beaming and blasting, and one man who didn't in the slightest resemble a dove was shot in the shoulder; and there were many complaints that the doves were smaller and scarcer than last year, but the way they fell through the air when you stung the life out of them was the same; and I was there too but I couldn't shoot anything with a paintbrush; and a couple of them came over to my canvas and stood and stood and stood until I finally said, for God's sake go look at Picasso and Rembrandt, go look at Klee and Gauguin, listen to a symphony by Mahler, and if you get anything out of that come back and stare at my canvas! what the hell's wrong with him? the one guy said. he's nuts. they're all nuts, the other guy said. anyhow, I got my 10 doves. me too, his buddy said, let's go home: we can have them in the pan by 2:30. -Charles Bukowski
@janetmanyeh383
@janetmanyeh383 5 лет назад
Thank you 😊
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 4 года назад
My pleasure! Thanks for watching :)
@aibha1525
@aibha1525 3 года назад
here's something i wrote for my creative writing class- The sailor's tale: the temper of creatures such as her is unpredictable, of this i was warned. however, seeing her there among the waves, at peace with the sea foam, she looks like art. her voice is comparable, to the song of a dove, as she hums a soothing melody for the weary sailor. her white dress is long, and had been weathered by the mighty ocean. but it somehow remained pristine, and flowing like a sail with the wind. her eyes reflect the sun’s bright glare, ocean blue spheres staring straight at our ship. and her hair, golden blonde. its silhouette is waist length and wavy. i feel in my soul, that if i were to touch it, it would be as soft as the cotton clouds dotted throughout the baby blue sky. the legends were true after all, you fair temptress, Aphrodite.
@datonedude6487
@datonedude6487 3 года назад
u good if I steel this for ma reading class?
@shalinibiswas2781
@shalinibiswas2781 3 года назад
This is so beautiful :')
@miriamwanja4081
@miriamwanja4081 3 года назад
Wooooooow!! Beautiful piece
@FPeege
@FPeege Год назад
What grade did you get? :)
@addibbaaj2
@addibbaaj2 Год назад
this is beautiful!
@anjalikumar1818
@anjalikumar1818 4 года назад
Thanks it helps me much becoz I writes poem and it help me in write many other poems
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 4 года назад
Thank you for watching! Happy to help :)
@TheAmena
@TheAmena 3 года назад
i really enjoyed this
@andrewhoulihan7940
@andrewhoulihan7940 4 года назад
Great video!!
@NikitaShorikov
@NikitaShorikov 4 года назад
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it :)
@joshbongalos213
@joshbongalos213 Год назад
The editing is styled so old, it's so good and nostalgic.
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