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500,000 Years After Humans Disappeared, We Woke From Cryo Sleep 

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@myraecheberry807
@myraecheberry807 2 дня назад
Liked the story. I just wish it did not rushed. Am looking forward for more.
@amieadkins2343
@amieadkins2343 3 дня назад
Granted the pronunciation needs some work on certain words. However, the overall cadence is well done. Enjoyed the story.
@jamesaaron1533
@jamesaaron1533 Месяц назад
There it is. The jaw set with grim determination. At least they aren't zorgons.
@davidcollins2993
@davidcollins2993 Месяц назад
Not yet
@muzzaresarf5038
@muzzaresarf5038 Месяц назад
I thoroughly enjoyed this story and look forward to hearing many more, thanks 👍🇦🇺
@redakroma1
@redakroma1 28 дней назад
Decent enough story, I liked it. That being said, the author needs to work on keeping track of deaths of characters and other plot holes.
@guyvalentine7258
@guyvalentine7258 Месяц назад
How many Times can you bring One person back to life.
@daleraney9456
@daleraney9456 Месяц назад
Seems to be a recurring theme with these stories read by this AI voice. The antagonist is vaporized/atomized annnnnnd 5 minutes later they are fighting them again. And again.
@daleraney9456
@daleraney9456 Месяц назад
Oh and regardless of who the original attackers are, it always boils down to 'The Void in one form or another that is the ultimate antagonist
@Red-Raider
@Red-Raider 29 дней назад
Corvis is quite resilient!😂😂🤣🥲
@bobmiller7502
@bobmiller7502 25 дней назад
@@daleraney9456 the void is the arbitrator of the force (Tao/Dao) where true contentment and unconditional love lives
@davidbancroft2478
@davidbancroft2478 10 дней назад
@@daleraney9456 AI written rubbish
@D1craigRob
@D1craigRob 22 дня назад
Did the Edenites really make an alliance with 3 earth humans and let them almost run/control the alliance?
@rurirotaru516
@rurirotaru516 Месяц назад
There is no continuity. The big bad warlord got vaporized and then was leading an attack 2 minutes later on new edan.... a girl who does a suicide mission and the main protagonist ran off without her suddenly had her in his arm and taking her to safety to be saved from her injuries. Out of all this the most unbeleiavble thing was that changing the fuel a machine uses suddenly gave the machine reality changing effects....... Either this is a fever dream of a 14 year old. Or some lefy leaning college student who doesn't think continuity matters as long as they can use as many words as possiable to try and sound smart.
@fookyuunsa678
@fookyuunsa678 26 дней назад
It's ai written genius
@rurirotaru516
@rurirotaru516 26 дней назад
@@fookyuunsa678 and how does that change anything or that it's continuity is bad? Or that due to that the story is bad? How does your comment and attempted at an failed insult change these facts since what you said was obvious and doesn't just make you come off looking like a complete dumb ass?
@84kirbphillas
@84kirbphillas 6 дней назад
You're possiably right.
@jerm7096
@jerm7096 Месяц назад
Wait just a few minutes back corvus was atomized how did he spring a trap
@Gracee40
@Gracee40 29 дней назад
It started off okay but when you got to the leviathan... nope. I'm done.
@BobbyCochran-yk2eg
@BobbyCochran-yk2eg 21 день назад
Great story loved it
@timblack6422
@timblack6422 18 дней назад
Interesting… I’ve given this a listen.. now I’ll go back to reading Heinlein and Asimov
@DownhillAllTheWay
@DownhillAllTheWay 15 дней назад
Wow! Such an endorsement!
@marwerno
@marwerno 18 дней назад
Good story, but it leaves some points open, what happened with Earth any ancestors left (other than from the Prometheus)? How has Corvus been revived?
@daleraney9456
@daleraney9456 Месяц назад
How the Hell is Corvus still alive after the Quantum Forge atomized him?
@JackT1961
@JackT1961 Месяц назад
Remember Battlestar Galactica. But I don't know about you. But firing on an energy source that registers off the scale, not a bright idea
@Red-Raider
@Red-Raider 29 дней назад
He was resurrected from a knife to the eye through the brain
@sondgerothja
@sondgerothja День назад
They lost me on his third death and saying how he was somehow at a camp when he’d been on the ground fighting…but also in the fleet…and atomized…again.
@defenderoftheway
@defenderoftheway Месяц назад
Nice story. ty
@user-og3ji3cb3p
@user-og3ji3cb3p Месяц назад
19 minutes in and they have been attacked and found more humans also in stasis along with the ability to defeat the shields of a war class ship with a transport ship. Also the moon had no air yet the dead ship had enough air to bring people out of stasis.
@junehartley2770
@junehartley2770 Месяц назад
I really enjoyed this story thank you
@andrew4882
@andrew4882 13 дней назад
Commercial every 60 seconds
@greanstreak04
@greanstreak04 Месяц назад
I liked the story.
@qvazarqvaz9050
@qvazarqvaz9050 4 дня назад
Thanks for story!
@gregoryshaw3790
@gregoryshaw3790 19 дней назад
Thank, thank you. I enjoyed that
@mstone1212
@mstone1212 Месяц назад
Like the story well done ❤
@babarama283
@babarama283 21 день назад
500,000 years REALLY!
@ObesePuppies
@ObesePuppies 12 дней назад
Would’ve been more believable if it was 499.003
@stephenkessell2854
@stephenkessell2854 15 дней назад
Wait up didn't corvis get vaporised in the forge room and then reappear later or was that just my imagination?
@tonydabaloney
@tonydabaloney 2 дня назад
Small pet peeve, you can't call any other planetary system a solar system, because our sun is technically called Sol, as in The Solar System and when the guy in the book is fighting the alien the book says they were rolling around in the lunar dust! No! Only the dust on our moon,Luna, can be called Lunar dust. Andromedan system is correct term and the dust would be moon dust until named. Peace out,ya'll!😂😂
@shanebraden8482
@shanebraden8482 Месяц назад
Again STOP! 500K years and just as they wake up it so happens mow the humans are noticed? Sigh...
@NoahFentz976
@NoahFentz976 Месяц назад
And the alien commander had a name tag spelled in English.
@mechag9499
@mechag9499 26 дней назад
And all the human tech worked normally. .. after 500K years. And the aliens who wanted to kill them boarded instead of just destroying the ship.
@Gollammeister
@Gollammeister 28 дней назад
Was rather good I enjoyed listening
@thelinuxlearningcurve5394
@thelinuxlearningcurve5394 Месяц назад
another storie out of sequence - please fix this
@jamestrowbridge8646
@jamestrowbridge8646 24 дня назад
Great story
@rustyrichardson1242
@rustyrichardson1242 Месяц назад
Nice. Needs to be longer so you can realy connect with the characters
@eurorpeen
@eurorpeen Месяц назад
So after 500000 years you can read the name Corvus on a suit ???? And he steaks english ???? Bullshit
@gravseyfam9627
@gravseyfam9627 17 дней назад
No it speaks English not sure how you would steak it
@latedecember2805
@latedecember2805 28 дней назад
Wow this one alien just won't die. I know they killed him twice and yet he comes back again and again. In other words the book sucks.
@Red-Raider
@Red-Raider 29 дней назад
The quantum forge is a behemoth yet they can move it in a shuttle
@jasonhays6793
@jasonhays6793 16 дней назад
Ridiculous number of commercials.
@visnuexe
@visnuexe Месяц назад
This is almost religious in nature. It's a story that gives obstacles just like the story encounters adversaries. Plot repetition, same phrases rearranged on a plane of story narrative with a smattering of bright story resolutions.
@clintdodson44
@clintdodson44 23 дня назад
I like the story keep it up
@davidcollins2993
@davidcollins2993 Месяц назад
Why is everyone named Hawkins
@ianhampton6856
@ianhampton6856 27 дней назад
I advert started advert listening advert but advert too many advert adverts. Advert every advert 3-4 advert minutes advert.
@JackT1961
@JackT1961 Месяц назад
love the story
@larvinthompson2286
@larvinthompson2286 Месяц назад
I like the story
@berges104
@berges104 Месяц назад
Basically a Mass Effect Andromeda rehash
@escapefelicity2913
@escapefelicity2913 25 дней назад
the only thing more boring than reading an action story is listening to somebody else reading one
@fckimmel
@fckimmel Месяц назад
How many times does Corvis have to be killed? Not to mention Zephir.
@art.is.life.eternal
@art.is.life.eternal 20 дней назад
No different from every major Sci Fi franchise or movie, be it the Marvel characters, both good guys and bad guys, Star Wars, ditto, and on and on and on. It’s a holdover plot device from the early Saturday theater Movie Matinées where they showed serial Buck Rogers and many other 'cliffhanger' serial 'movie comics,' and you'd have to come to next week's matinée, to see your heroes brought back.
@tinlizziedl001
@tinlizziedl001 16 дней назад
There's some logical inconsistencies in it, and a few glaring chain-of-events mixups, but overall a decent story. If you use 1.25 playback speed, it flows better too.
@Pete-lx2eg
@Pete-lx2eg 16 дней назад
That 1.25x..... Genius. Crazy how much of a difference it makes to how tense the story becomes.
@kurtnewyork9374
@kurtnewyork9374 26 дней назад
Omg, slow down with all the advertising. Ridiculous.
@MISTSHIFTGaming
@MISTSHIFTGaming 26 дней назад
? I didn't have a single one here
@MuminahBlanks-S.E.H.D
@MuminahBlanks-S.E.H.D 29 дней назад
movie name please
@danielyacob8353
@danielyacob8353 6 дней назад
i lyk da story
@Amoth_oth_ras_shash
@Amoth_oth_ras_shash 25 дней назад
nice with the humans not being silly op at the start , though... last ditch hoppe for a whole civilization.. yee , that cargo hold would have hade not just purpose built hardware and heaps of compacted just ..junk.. for raw resource or 'scrap low tech improvisation' , but also what ever could been crammed in so.. nice plasma guns , here is my panther with excessive ablative heat shielding covering it and some nice uranium enhanced 'dumb' munitions , then agen the tech to make that kind of cryo tech.. the ark ship should have hade a nasty drone swarm hiding in the dark that sweep in the moment boarding ships nocked out the arks power wich actually not would have needed to been built at launch either , the ship should been told to snatch what astroids it could on the way in to enlarge material stores not to mention spending half a million years stable in system should have hade automated systems expand those basic resource redundancy and security efforts
@shadedlightdigital
@shadedlightdigital Месяц назад
The air erupted on an airless moon?
@RodMaster-qy3zc
@RodMaster-qy3zc 25 дней назад
What's the title?
@angelwild5665
@angelwild5665 23 дня назад
Too many frequent interruptions! Outta here
@DownhillAllTheWay
@DownhillAllTheWay 15 дней назад
Who reads it? From the outset, it sounds like an AI - in which case, I won't bother.
@nancybrewer8494
@nancybrewer8494 Месяц назад
Please proofread. Many words sound almost alike.
@achuris77
@achuris77 Месяц назад
I'm not sure where to start with this story's stupidity. Or even the shit that doesn't make sense. And don't get me started with the stupid characters making even stupider decisions...
@stargatetitanx
@stargatetitanx Месяц назад
This needs to be a full length series of books
@bobmiller7502
@bobmiller7502 25 дней назад
2 ADDS EVERY 6 minutes spoiled it BIG TIME for me had to keep clicking them off there's MAKING A LIVING and taking the PISH greedy greedy piggywiggy bad NO SUB from me no i don't want add blocker,,you ever read the small print,, bummer
@user-ky7cz8gn9c
@user-ky7cz8gn9c 20 дней назад
Excessive amounts of advertisements which broke up the story far more than necessary. AI voice cold and detracts from the story causing me to "zone out"
@nwnmiria
@nwnmiria Месяц назад
Sorry I'm going to be a downer here, I stopped at 40 minutes. First if you go 500,000 years into the future, you are not going to run into a ship that launched 100 years before you who just so happened to also had a system failure and no one woke up for a long time. This has to be an AI base, and if you are going to do that you MUST edit it carefully. Promethius which launched 100 years before had more advanced weapons? What the hell is a colony ship doing with weapons in the first place? Fix the things that make no sense then record it using a humans voice, the AI voice is ok, but it stumbles in its pronunciation of words.
@chrisrancat2808
@chrisrancat2808 22 дня назад
Good grief youtube! Every two minutes an add. This sucks.
@JoshuaCushing
@JoshuaCushing 6 дней назад
Man this is poorly written. They jump around to different setting with no explanation on how they got there, introduce equipment with no in depth description of what it is or where it came from. The story line has potential but the story has gaps bigger than the grand canyon
@guyvalentine7258
@guyvalentine7258 Месяц назад
I despise this thing that this author has for bring dead people back to life. It happens almost every story I read by this author it's ridiculous and asinine.
@omc2629
@omc2629 Месяц назад
It's AI generated I think.
@jeffslusher1973
@jeffslusher1973 Месяц назад
Tired 😢of his AI voice ruining every story.
@Lumberjack_king
@Lumberjack_king 24 дня назад
It’s not that bad
@bannor_murphy369
@bannor_murphy369 24 дня назад
Not ai
@richardhampshire8443
@richardhampshire8443 22 дня назад
Always one who has to moan grow up and f**k off this is a brilliant audiobook
@napster3456
@napster3456 22 дня назад
May be ai voice that's mono tone. But it's still a good listen
@bullshtman447
@bullshtman447 22 дня назад
I like it
@MrAabbccddeeffgg
@MrAabbccddeeffgg 6 дней назад
Utter nonsense.
@edwardm141
@edwardm141 12 дней назад
Doom and gloom tripe. The person surely is a card carrying democrat. Excessive
@HughJassol-ed3bq
@HughJassol-ed3bq 4 дня назад
Lots of diversity characters in this story. It’s kind of a turn off. I’d prefer to just hear normal names…
@DevilDogDevinPHH
@DevilDogDevinPHH 21 день назад
This is very poorly written
@SacredCovenant4ever
@SacredCovenant4ever 20 дней назад
I cannot stand AI voices... Ruins everything
@ohioborn9929
@ohioborn9929 26 дней назад
The battle was won... but the ....is far from over. Im done. Same story over and ever!
@DoraDuncan
@DoraDuncan Месяц назад
Narrartor is pathetic. Mispronounces simple words. Story is dull and to mired in cliches. Gads it's bad.
@davidburgess6128
@davidburgess6128 Месяц назад
I like the storie love syfi
@bannor_murphy369
@bannor_murphy369 24 дня назад
Far too many ads to enjoy 👎
@scottfraser-lp9ss
@scottfraser-lp9ss Месяц назад
I like the story
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