Hey Jessica! This video is really great, but I recommend avoiding phrases like "10 more days is my brother's birthday", "yes, I have." and "just like Father." People don't actually talk like that. It's more correct to say "In 10 days is my brother's birthday" or "My brother's birthday is also in 10 days." It's also better to say "Yes, I do!" or "Yes, I have a brother" and "Just like my dad" or "Just like our father." Also your recording doesn't always match the words you present which can make it confusing for listeners. I love the animation in this video and the topic of conversation, it just needs a few adjustments. Thanks for making videos!!