Main thing I'll say is that you're keeping your upper body open n slightly leaning back a bit witch look as that kinda rotates you're shoulders slightly try staying very straight with the nose while sliding your front foot
Knees to your chest kid knees to the chest!!! Keep at it tho man. Wait til you start getting into skating both stances and finding equilibrium between both legs! You’ll annihilate all your friends in SKATE
You can do it! I’ve only been skating for like a month and just started practicing my ollies the past week and they are hard but I have already done some ollies they are just not very good because I’m not leveling out very well yet. This video is simply showing how he improved his Ollie over 7 months of practice 👍👍