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A Diamond Yet to Shine│Spoken Word Poetry 

Mel's Thoughts
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Комментарии : 44   
@itsallaboutpoetry3386
@itsallaboutpoetry3386 2 года назад
I am in love with your writing, truly each word touches!💝💝💝💝💝...
@melindapemberton999
@melindapemberton999 3 года назад
I FEEL LIKE THAT AT TIMES THEN I GO BACK AND I LOOK AT EVERYTHING I BEEN THROUGH I REALIZE I TO AM A DIAMOND THAT SHINES I JUST DIDNT KNOW THAT THAT TIME UNTIL NOW THANKS MEL FOR THIS POEM TO OPEN MY EYES SO I COULD SEE WHAT I WAS ALL ALONG A DIAMOND THAT SHINED WHEN I LOOKED AT MYSELF AGAIN SO THANKS AGAIN MEL
@da1911
@da1911 3 года назад
Wow Thanks Mel
@firstinpoetry
@firstinpoetry 3 года назад
Yeah been there and the feeling 😭 Great piece ❣️❣️❣️❣️
@Jennifer-hv2bc
@Jennifer-hv2bc 3 года назад
Beautiful words!!! A lot of us feel that way. But you can put your thoughts into words. That's special and thank you for doing so. ❣️❣️❣️❣️
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 3 года назад
Thank you so much!
@Jennifer-hv2bc
@Jennifer-hv2bc 3 года назад
Hello Mel, I more than understand your thoughts I've told you this before and I'll say it again if I think you need to hear it again. But not tonight this is more of my thoughts for you. There's so much pain going on right now in most people's lives. So... please think about this. Take a look around your life everybody's life in fact. You are a story teller so I think you are more than capable of taking everything you see that's negative and write all the negative into positive words. It's gonna take your generation to fix and save and change things. My generation failed to do so. Everything I have said to you comes from my heart. So please give it some thought 💖🙏💖🙏
@karanj7791
@karanj7791 3 года назад
❤️
@sierradavenport4056
@sierradavenport4056 3 года назад
I also just have to say that I'm so glad that we have 0 dislikes
@vain7889
@vain7889 3 года назад
What pain.. you lifted me up and gave me a black eye...
@NicoleMae
@NicoleMae 3 года назад
absolutely beautiful
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 3 года назад
Thank you!
@mathurinmikehandy8657
@mathurinmikehandy8657 3 года назад
Yes you are a diamond,my precious diamond.
@ellespoetry9060
@ellespoetry9060 3 года назад
Love it💜
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 3 года назад
@Karth1kNN
@Karth1kNN 3 года назад
Nice Mel! 😀👍🏾
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 3 года назад
Thank you 😁
@NicholasDemski
@NicholasDemski 3 года назад
I can really feel your pain bleed through your poetry. I hope it's a healing process for you like it is for me (though a painful one).
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 3 года назад
Yes, it's definitely a process towards healing, a very painful one with many slip ups, but I'm not giving up
@NicholasDemski
@NicholasDemski 3 года назад
@@MelsThoughts never should, poetry is a gift. thanks for sharing your process with us :)
@sierradavenport4056
@sierradavenport4056 3 года назад
So great ! : ( : )
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 3 года назад
Thank you!
@sushmitamoon5712
@sushmitamoon5712 3 года назад
Awesome..❤️ beautiful ❤️😘 stay blessed
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 3 года назад
Thank you so much 😊
@elishapandey5298
@elishapandey5298 3 года назад
Wow Mel great I love it Love from Nepal❤ I love your poem and I can relate to it Mel you are doing fav
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 3 года назад
Thank you so much 😀
@elishapandey5298
@elishapandey5298 3 года назад
@@MelsThoughts Welcome 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚
@adamfarfan6237
@adamfarfan6237 3 года назад
THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH
@yasserkhalif6586
@yasserkhalif6586 3 года назад
I love, 🥀
@sharonpiccone9094
@sharonpiccone9094 3 года назад
"YOU 'ARE' 'DIAMOND' THAT 'SHINES', & I'VE 'BEEN 'GOING THROUGH', THE 'EXACT' SAME 'THING'S, 'ISSUES', DEALING WITH 'SAME' THING'S,- BEEN 'WONDERING WHEN I GO TO 'SLEEP' AT 'NIGHT', IF I JUST 'DIDN'T 'WAKE' UP, HOW 'BETTER' THE 'WORLD' WOULD BE 'WITHOUT', ME, & 'DEALING WITH THE 'SAME' ISSUES, & NOT HAVING THE 'ENERGY' TO 'TALK' TO PEOPLE, BECAUSE YOU ARE 'TOO 'SAD',& IN 'TOO 'MUCH PAIN', IT 'LITERALLY' BECOMES SOO 'PAINFUL', I CAN'T 'EAT', I 'STILL HAVEN'T 'EATEN' YET, BUT SINCE I'VE 'BEEN 'TALKING TO YOU NOW', I 'FEEL' LITTLE BETTER, & THINK I CAN 'EAT' NOW!!!.. "THANKYOU", AGAIN AS 'ALWAYS', -"I'LL TRY AGAIN LATER, IF THERE'S A 'LAPSE' IN TIME, FOR WHEN I TALK TO YOU, IT'S 'BECAUSE I GET 'VERRY 😥 SAD', WHEN I'M IN AN 'AVALANCE OF SADNESS',& IT'S 'CRUSHING ME', IF THERE'S A 'LAPSE', IT'S ME, 'DEALING' WITH THIS 'AVALANCE OF SADNESS', THAT'S 'CRUSHING' ME, IT'S 'NEVER' YOU, IT'S 'MY 'SADNESS', 'LACK OF 'ENERGY', FEELING SICK, TO I CAN'T 'EAT', & THE 'PHYSICAL MANIFESTATIONS OF THE 'SADNESS', -"WHY CAN'T I JUST BE 'NORMAL', BUT THEN,-"WHAT IS 'NORMAL'????...☺😊😚😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍🎇🌆🎆🌅🌄🌃
@meryemada9992
@meryemada9992 3 года назад
nothing feels same anymore.
@SaranKumar-ro1ne
@SaranKumar-ro1ne 3 года назад
Super teaching teacher ❤😍😍👌 but your feelings i understand 😟😟
@roselinelucienbethel896
@roselinelucienbethel896 3 года назад
yh
@worthyg7701
@worthyg7701 3 года назад
Thanks Be To YHWH We All can Shine
@hyde4780
@hyde4780 3 года назад
why all your content doesn't have adsense?
@bhaskargautam
@bhaskargautam 3 года назад
PRETENDING TO BE A WOMEN My body grew faster than I did And you think I am now a women No I had to grow into My body Had to grow into the curves that arrived too early I filled the extra space with masked confidence and fake intellect so that I maybe fit to be called a "women" The rest of me struggles To met the approving nods God forbid they approch and start a conversation My studder , My lack of sophisticated words Would have them looking down at me in less than a second So I try my best Not to acquaint myself My phisque reached its pick Before I could reach my mid-point They look at me with satisfaction in their eyes I must no longer look like a girl Cause they didn't use to look at me like that Back when I was Dancing in mud puddles And playing silly games Back when I didnt wear heals That made me wish I had no legs Back when I didn't feel the need To fake laugh at pointless jokes Back when norms were something I could break without consequences Back when I could avoid stressful talks Cause I was told I wasn't old enough Back when I could sleep The minute my head meets my pillow They didn't look at me like that But now Now that I can entertain The old men with full pockets That scavage through the room Like it's a super market And leave with the one they want Or two if they desired I am considered .......valuable So I Put on a dress they tell me a women wears Feeling uncomfortable Showing more skin than cloth I find a sit far back Hoping no one sees me go I Practise the few lines I learned Sweet and slow The way they told me I should I shiver Wanting to go back to my bed And hide beneath the covers I used to know Before they find out I'm putting on a show Before the temprature drops as their eyes turn cold I shiver Paranoid Looking around to see if anyone has noticed that I was just a girl pretending to be a women ( DO support her) 🌙❤️
@jesuanthoniyammal2832
@jesuanthoniyammal2832 2 года назад
I love you
@elmermagbanua8275
@elmermagbanua8275 3 года назад
hi...!! have a poem for 18th birthday or debute
@jesuanthoniyammal2832
@jesuanthoniyammal2832 3 года назад
Yeppa, God saved me from going to your house , this type of people living there now only I came to know
@jesuanthoniyammal2832
@jesuanthoniyammal2832 2 года назад
who is crying, why should have been I not to see you , don't worry,
@jesuanthoniyammal2832
@jesuanthoniyammal2832 2 года назад
what is hiding you from me,there's a lot of days I had been waiting for you and your letter , but till now I got no answer
@vimalamala7658
@vimalamala7658 3 года назад
Some thing wrong person disturb me forever I know ready how long how many years going to play game with me I am waiting consider fast answer me if not what my answer you don't know. OK bye
@jesuanthoniyammal2832
@jesuanthoniyammal2832 2 года назад
you are not true
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