A Stop At Alden's | Queer Short Film Drama | We Are Pride 

Interesting ideas but the script is a mess

Huh? I like the style, vibe and all..but, what just happened ?

Not good. This thing needed a real script, an experienced audio person, and a strong editor. It meanders like an acting 101 improv exercise. I’m sorry I spent the time to watch the whole thing thinking that it would pull together. It didn’t.