wow if this is a work in progress, can't wait to hear the entire thing, you're doing great keep it up although idk what it's supposed to sound like but i feel like it sounds a little stiff and aggressive, no hate please just take it as constructive criticism, otherwise it sounds beautiful
thanks :) Parts of this piece (especially the start) are supposed to sound quite harsh and aggressive - so I've got feedback now that it is coming across 🤣🤣 I used to play it much gentler but it didn't convey the nature of the piece as effectively! I do agree with you that it does sound a bit stiff which is something I'm still working on :)
