And here it is, the 38th page of me and @HoodiewearingOpp’s rewrite of Soeing Broken, as you can see, I changed Moxxie and Millie’s cut back, and added some context as to what happened to them after the kill montage. Also, I removed MnM’s massacre, because that’s contradictory to this version of the couple’s remorse for killing humans. That goes for Millie’s dialogue as well. And speaking of her, next page, well, let’s just say that when we see what happens to her, it will be a bit, embarrassing to say the least
25 июн 2024