This is good content... however it could be enhanced significantly by: 1. recording without the children speaking in the background 2. less uncertainty in the voice of the speaker 3. graphics that can actually be read by the viewer (eg 1:35)... hope this helps
Am I missing something with the video structure. A lot of your videos have part 1 but there isn't a part 2, or vice versa. Are those upcoming videos or are they on another channel somewhere