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11:15 - They both have the same layout so I'm guessing the difference is on the left page, the first panel is an establishing shot, and the page has a more dynamic camera view, and more character emotion with the mother and even in the speech bubble! But the one I'm stuck on is on the left page, we see the Father noticing the argument in the 3rd panel making it natural for him to be in the last panel asking his wife what's going on, and we see more of the sad emotion on the kid's face running away. But on the right page, I also like him abruptly opening the door and seeing what's happening, that feels more natural than randomly peaking over his wife's shoulders. But looking at that last right panel we don't see the emotion on the kid's face though, but it feels less crowded than the last panel on the left. - All the while, I feel like I should like the left page more - with better differences - the right page ain't so bad either! Could be wrong though. Welp, let's continue the video! Edit - Oh! The difference is Eye Line & Page Flow!
You actually really don’t need to join the program. They give you really helpful advice on here already. Which is honestly surprising. It’s just a plus to join and you probably get connections. I’ve only ever read aot. And i don’t mean to toot my own horn but I think I have some decent panel structure. Just practice making like one or two page one shots that’s what I do it’s honestly very fun but for me always takes along time to finish. I do it traditionally but never have used screen tones.
11:15 - the placement and view of the characters on the left feels more cinematic/professional, the first panel looks like an establishing shot, makes it feel like the right one is aimelessly throwing the reader into the situation while the left one is easing the reader into the argument. after that it seems like information is just more intelligently distributed and portrays the feeling of the scene better: 2nd panel makes the power dynamic more evident than on the right since you're looking down at the girl like the mother is and the speech bubble over the girl and not the mother, the third panel feeling like the POV of the girl conveys the mother's authority better, and having the father behind her sets up the fourth panel much better, having the mother face the same direction on the third and fourth panel feels more natural than her looking opposite ways like on the right, that feels a bit jarring.
This helps me out so much. Thankfully with my second fan made crossover manga i used different panel sizes so Thankfully i got the basics of panel layout and pacing of how a scene flows. This will help me do it better and when i join the course ill be prepared.
Do you have an idea When’s the next term after this gonna be ? I don’t think i’ll be able to join this term but i want to be prepared to join next term
In the dark ages or known as total black ages is a world filled with war after the master of darkness (also a scientist)set the forbidden demons free with dark magic , since then world has been in an endless war but an odd boy with an odd name and odd tattoos will stop the and become the powerful person in the world Edited
I use to wont to give up but then i saw a cool anuma called One Piece, Naruto, and My hero and i realized that they had something incomin the mane charuters never gave up on there dreams no matter what hapind so i wont ether and i hope that ether's will do the same to
I wish I could afford to join the upcoming class... but thanks so much for these free resources, your resources are huge for my upcoming project!!! 🙏😁❤️
11:20 - it's the arrangement of characters and other elements, hiding anything interesting behind speech bubbles HURTS TO SEE!!! So to avoid this you should evenly space out everything if they're separate
11:21 First one only the first panel seems kind of off, like it should have been more dynamic and by the second one, the balloon order really hits me that my take, will watch the video furter and then conclude in a comment/edit
I have a question, is it possible to make your manga and submit it to something like shonen jump, even if you live outside of japan. If it is, like whats the process? Is it more difficult than if you were to live inside japan?
Same bro , I have the same question as you . I think you need ridiculously good amount of story and art to be able to get published in shonen jump if you are outside japan
If I had to guess students below age 18 are still in high school so they won't have time to take this course due to school work, projects. Not to mention there is a good chance they won't take it seriously because they will most likely get distracted so adults that are a good fit are able to join.
Yeah. Think of One who made one punch man and mob psycho 100. If you can storytell well enough with what art skills you have, it’s not like you need to be a master to create a good work.
