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@daledrakewriter4912 3 года назад

I want to dedicate this series to my wife Becky. She edits all my work God bless her the constant litany of for the love of God please use a full stop is a source of constant amusement.

@cincylaw14 3 года назад

Great work, Dale!! Hope to hear more soon!

@daledrakewriter4912 3 года назад

@@cincylaw14 Thanks should be ready with something else by the end of the month. God knows what lol.

@cincylaw14 3 года назад

@@daledrakewriter4912 more of this story? (If so, the “God knows what” line was a great pun! haha)

@daledrakewriter4912 3 года назад

@@cincylaw14 Christianity and God run through most of my stories so a great pun indeed lol.

@Legendary____ 3 года назад

Is there more to this story????

@jakemerchant950 3 года назад

Broken Messiah sounds like a metal band.

@tabithabauserman6997 3 года назад

Hold on- making a metal band now.🤭

@ssnakebbite. 3 года назад

a rlly bad one

@Tohfool 3 года назад

Boutta make death metal band outta that one

@houstonshannon7661 3 года назад

Definitely lol

@jonathancramer4176 3 года назад

It really does

@NeoDarkling 3 года назад

Damn, this one started at 100 MPH.

@JustAnElderscroll 3 года назад

Seriously though

@davidmorningway6025 3 года назад

Real quick lol 😈😎😇

@YenYen-in8wr 3 года назад

I said the SAME THING JUST NOW 😂😂😂😂

@TheDeath7ofsb 3 года назад

later while johnny is living with his uncle under the staircase Hagrid: "johnny, your a wizard" Johnny: "I'm a what?"

@TheDeath7ofsb 3 года назад

werewolf*

@daledrakewriter4912 3 года назад

Johnny Masterson is the great, great, great grandson of Jacob from Hell's Creek.

@popevimtoripkeefhappysackXXX 3 года назад

Should have kept that for a big reveal !

@popevimtoripkeefhappysackXXX 3 года назад

This is heller good

@cloverassassinscreed 3 года назад

ENCORE, ENCORE!!!

@papermoon5 3 года назад

Dale your stories are crazy good!

@JackofBlades-zs4cj 3 года назад

Your stories are fantastic sir, just wanted to express my praises.

@nauscakes1868 3 года назад

That random mention of a Land Rover around the 20:30 mark totally broken the tension for me, lol. I kept thinking this was olden-time story stuff, lol.

@imborahey7568 3 года назад

Yeah I legit thought this was a medieval story until that point

@SiiriCressey 3 года назад

@@imborahey7568 Timeless, sort of.

@theakspud 2 года назад

He mentions a shower in the first 3 minutes though

@SiiriCressey 2 года назад

@@theakspud People could take showers in Ye Olde Olden Tymes.

@Rup869 2 года назад

Same here too

@daledrakewriter4912 3 года назад

Hate is a seed that grows. We will cultivate it together you and I.

@cincylaw14 3 года назад

They taught me this in law school, too. 😈

@daledrakewriter4912 3 года назад

@@cincylaw14 Ha, ha brilliant lol.

@Wolffur Месяц назад

"Hatred is a seed that's easy to sow And buckets of blood will help it to grow" - GWAR "War is all we know"

@m.f.8273 3 года назад

The quality of the stories the past few weeks has been fanFUCKINGtastic!! The narration is always amazing but the quality is top notch!

@A_Cool_Tunafish 3 года назад

This is one of the better monster hunter stories, good shit

@andybaker8775 2 года назад

Facts, doesn’t start with “I hUnT cRyPtIDs”

@TheSkittleKing 3 года назад

Quick question, Mr Creepy Pasta... :U would you do a collab with Dark Somnium? Both of your voice acting is amazing and I think I would die from a collab :3

@cleverusername2721 3 года назад

Omg me too

@darkwolf9244 3 года назад

Aggggrreeeeedddd

@ghostivy7222 3 года назад

Yesssssssirrr

@borko3fkovixAC 3 года назад

Look up im a criminal profiler story on ds' channel, they already did. But yeah i wish they did way more together.

@MathewSteeleAtheology 3 года назад

Um, it's the same person. The voices are identical. It's just a different type of content.

@OerstedFGC 3 года назад

Dale Drake has captivated me recently with how good his stories are. Have not been this impressed with an author since I first discovered Mr_Outlaw. Can't wait for hellbound and hells creek to finish and see if there's an overarching universe here.

@daledrakewriter4912 3 года назад

Captivated. Nice you have my thanks. More on the way.

@GreenAndGoth 2 года назад

This series is a great serious one. Dale Drake is cool. Jack Townsend is great a recommendation I’d make if you like long form content (Tales From The Gas Station, the fourth book is coming out in just a few days). If you’re into serious scares without eccentricities and general extreme weirdness, though, Dale Drake is the way to go!

@mattmatt4608 3 года назад

Holy damn just finished an overnight shift was gonna turn this on to fall asleep to but ended up staying awake through the whole thing didn’t wanna miss what happened next. This is quickly becoming one of my favorite stories hope to hear more in the future it’s damn good!!!!

@THEPAGEBURNER1979 10 месяцев назад

The Masterson story is yoga for the mind. Thanks MCP.!

@ravivirk4674 2 года назад

This is by far the best creepypasta I've ever heard. The narration of this story unmatched and Mr drakes writing is scary and emotional. Long it continues

@dominikwilliams1703 3 года назад

At first thought, I had enough creepypasta narrators. But you honestly blew me away with only a few minutes in. Well done. Can't wait to hear more from you.

@brocowsci 9 месяцев назад

Lol he is the og, can't believe people have never heard mcp, he was seriously THE original lol he's the reason it blew up so much and others started narrating

@KingdomKali 3 года назад

Now that was a HELL of a story! Thanks for the great time, Mr. Creepypasta!

@AleignaJC 10 месяцев назад

This story is very well written. Im not particularly fond of religious stories but this one isnt preachy like others and was so enjoyable that i was 20 minutes in before i even realized how long id been listening. Very captivating storytelling

@lilrbigjohn1301 3 года назад

All those words you said go together so well! I would like to hear more of these words in the future... Ah, yes, future words...

@Digital_Happiness 3 года назад

The monster on the thumbnail is from Resident Evil Village❤ I love it

@C1nderfire 3 года назад

I kept thinking this was set like 200 some odd years ago until I kept hearing cell phone. Lol. Damn my brain

@toastmane1697 3 года назад

I'm so excited to hear an hour long creepypasta again

@leekendall7155 3 года назад

This is absolutely bloody awesome. Wow man. Wow wow wow. I cannot wait for the next installment . I'm off to check out the back story. Thank you, one for doing such an awesome job of it and two, for letting me know of how much more there is to this. Too good , too damn good!

@daledrakewriter4912 3 года назад

Loving the enthusiasm lol.

@greatgallade 3 года назад

Thought village werewolves would be actual wolves not weird things

@PixiePrincess501 3 года назад

Part 2? Loved this!

@KingBaboonTarantula 11 месяцев назад

That kicked more ass than a herd of donkeys!!❤❤❤

@fuckedworlds4326 3 года назад

I can't wait for part 2

@daledrakewriter4912 3 года назад

You won't be waiting much longer.

@TheStuart-of-Cosby Год назад

You Mr Dale Drake are the Bees knees. I'm back to Re listen for like the 10th time. Awesomeness as always MrCreepy Voice.

@charlesmcpe8464 3 года назад

Bro i always love ur stuff, but this one hit different today and it was absolutely awesome

@melissaansell9454 3 года назад

I love all your narrations Mr. Creepypasta. You are my favorite narrator 🖤🖤🖤

@Legendary____ 3 года назад

Finally a long one thanks mcp! I hope there’s More!

@johnarade 3 года назад

I just love doing something, listening to some good sh*t, making me stop and listen, can’t stop listening - must finish story-, man that was a ride and never actually finishing anything!!!!! Love the longer stories!!!!

@bertiebaxter4709 2 года назад

One of the best I've heard! Kudos to the writer and narrator!

@gabemesa3921 3 года назад

This story is sick bro. Shit's scary, action packed, and there's a hint of mystery even though it's about the book of revelations.

@docop8926 Год назад

did u listen to all these stories starting with the masterson chronicles?

@gabemesa3921 Год назад

@@docop8926 no but I'll have to check it out.

@docop8926 7 месяцев назад

@@gabemesa3921did u listen yet?

@gabemesa3921 7 месяцев назад

@@docop8926 definitely

@gabemesa3921 7 месяцев назад

@@docop8926 I have to re listen. I keep hearing it in my sleep.

@jimkimbrell4878 Год назад

Great story and great narration! Love this series!

@damienhughes7228 3 года назад

That was a damn good story. Can’t wait for the next part!!!

@JoyBoy0530 5 месяцев назад

Right when I heard his last name was Masterson I knew what time it was! Epic😊

@piggiebabe 3 года назад

Whoa! I hope this is a long series, good stuff 👍

@Some_Shmuck Год назад

This is a whole anime plot right here. W story!!!

@umbramlectorem3999 2 года назад

Oh my god that was the bloodiest werewolf transformation I’ve ever heard. Jesus Christ people love revamping werewolves. And I’m down.

@barkingbunny2928 3 года назад

THANK YOU for this speedball! Listening to you is the only thing that has kept me from rage quitting at work tonight. 😘😘😘😘

@daledrakewriter4912 3 года назад

Well in that case my story did its job. Keep pushing through my friend.

@barkingbunny2928 3 года назад

@@daledrakewriter4912 Excellent! You have a writing great style. I hope there will be a part two soon♡

@daledrakewriter4912 3 года назад

@@barkingbunny2928 already written lol

@joeybowen2347 3 года назад

Great upload brother.

@randomosity6878 3 года назад

Farmer Brown: Hey Johnny! When was the first time you heard a naughty word? Johnny: Well, a man killed my father and did bad things to my mother and used a lot of bad words when he told me what he was going to do with her. Farmer Brown: 😯

@joshquivey6990 2 года назад

This was fantastic to listen to, looking forward to the rest of the series!

@pieceless224 3 года назад

Thanks MCP, and author, I had fun listening to this one.

@cloverassassinscreed 3 года назад

mcp?

@pieceless224 3 года назад

@@cloverassassinscreed sorry, fixed it. I listen to so many different creepypasta channels that I get confused.

@williamstanley866 Год назад

Listened to The Masterson Chronicles, Hellbound and now Broken Messiah its been a good night. Master Storytelling Thank You.

@megazega5017 2 года назад

Great stuff

@P4T5H4RPify 3 года назад

Can't wait for part 2!! Mrcreepypasta is hands down the best channel on RU-vid..... My favourite is Tales from the gas station. But I don't recall hearing a bad story on here.... Brilliant, just brilliant! Thank you Mrcreepypasta.

@daledrakewriter4912 3 года назад

Who says I wrote one lol

@P4T5H4RPify 3 года назад

@@daledrakewriter4912 you just did 😜

@daledrakewriter4912 3 года назад

@@P4T5H4RPify Ha ha you got me it's already done and much bigger in scale than this one.

@P4T5H4RPify 3 года назад

@@daledrakewriter4912 Bigger!! Yikes it's gonna be good!

@daledrakewriter4912 3 года назад

@@P4T5H4RPify oh vastly bigger Demons, Angels and everything inbetween lol.

@blackwaterna8799 3 года назад

Is this the 1st Episode of a long time series? Because I'm already hooked. Basically are there any earlier episodes?? Fantastic job please give up the good work.

@lincolnhodge2371 Год назад

Out of the hundreds of no sleep/ Creepypasta's I've listened to I've never hear hot piss running down his leg until now

@daledrakewriter4912 Год назад

I am not a member of the no/sleep community and this isn't a no/sleep story.

@lincolnhodge2371 Год назад

@@daledrakewriter4912 sorry hard to keep track of story's and channels with autoplay on and I'm in another world painting and while listening to the beautiful world's like yours .

@daledrakewriter4912 Год назад

@@lincolnhodge2371 Thank you. I would love to paint or draw but I only seem to have this one skill. I am however very grateful for it.

@richarddreyer9310 3 года назад

This is one of the best stories I’ve ever heard and you’ve narrated perfectly thank you great great great

@daledrakewriter4912 3 года назад

Wow that's a big compliment thank you.

@travisweaver3959 2 года назад

Need more from this series I've listened to the 3 stories like 5 times each amazing work

@diannshowers9129 Год назад

Dang this kid almost reminds of my grand daughter.

@bromptoncocktail6788 3 года назад

Definitely waiting for this to continue

@alvinoclincy1809 3 года назад

Awesome bro 💯💪

@dawnhughes1707 3 года назад

Great story!!

@dahomie8206 7 месяцев назад

Kinda sus when the devil kid grabbed bro by the balls on the boat

@lavenderotaku2481 3 года назад

My goodness. I’m not even kidding, DAMN this would make an awesome-ass anime. Again, my mom’s maiden last name used to be Masterson. I think that’s cool as hell, our poor Johnny boy has the same last name as my grandpa. Maybe I have a long-lost grandpa who fights demons and werwolves?? That’d be awesome.

@geebee6395 Год назад

Excellently done gory violent 💯💯💯

@hiromitsumoonblossom8682 3 года назад

This story is great so far, I wonder why I didn't get notified about it. I love it, it's like Alexander Anderson's backstory

@jamiebaker7066 3 года назад

I need more of this story please! IT is absolutely awesome!💓🖤

@daledrakewriter4912 3 года назад

Already written.

@melvis0803 3 года назад

Hey! Don’t knock us knitters! I will knit you so hard your socks will fly off!🤪

@PaulosTheGamer Год назад

We need a sequel for this story :O

@jordandabbs9805 3 года назад

Loving these stories tbh, when I first got into stories I hated 3rd person tales. But now I kinda like them. Who ever has created these I love you 😂

@daledrakewriter4912 3 года назад

Thanks. Third person done correctly is always better. A lot of people who write creepypasta are just starting out and first person is easiest for them and suits audio more. I personally don't like it but I have done it more than once for this channel.

@modest8927 3 года назад

Need more of this!!

@paulshreve3792 3 года назад

Mrcreepypasta never disappoints.

@maxbyrne8062 Год назад

JOHNNY MASTERSON!? LIKE THE MASTERSON CHRONICLES. OMGGGGGGG

@rewatteefroimchuk8589 Год назад

Thank you ❤

@sageh.5228 3 года назад

Please do the whole book. This is so good

@Scottymo-pj7iw 8 дней назад

I just finished hellbound which I believe is the first one. Absolutely fabulous. I can't wait to get into the rest of the series in chronological order. So I guess what that means is I pretty much have my day planned out thank you for this Mr Dale❤

@JustAnElderscroll 3 года назад

This was great

@glocktaivious8825 3 года назад

Hey the thump nail is from resident evil 8

@jaybarbour7766 3 года назад

One of my favorite monsters too

@Nosraceroom 3 года назад

This is very Bloodborne and I love it

@michelechadwick3808 3 года назад

This story and the narration are crazy good, major chills, I could see it in my head. Can’t wait for the next instalment, thank you so much for sharing!

@AG-en5y 3 года назад

Great story

@morriganravenmist5539 2 года назад

This author is amazing!!!! Hear a few of his narrated now!

@marksullivan6319 3 года назад

Lol the first 20 mins my brain was imagining swords and people clothed in animal furs haha

@danielj5481 3 года назад

I was kinda thinking that too! Until he mentioned the Thomas the Train pajamas. 😂

@friendlycryptid6797 3 года назад

I'm already fascinated.

@SlReTTV 3 года назад

i already love this series

@winstonwins1096 3 года назад

Normally not too much into werewolf stuff but I really liked this one. Although, it came to be about much more than werewolves. Really hope to hear more. Soon. Along with Hellbound which is my favorite one that is currently in progress, aside from Lilly Madwhip of course.

@H0RR0R_HANG0VERZ Год назад

Ohhhhh Myyyy….WOW!! …and this is only the beginning?!?!! HOT DAMN! This is gonna be one heck of a good time!! 🙇🏻‍♀️ 🙌🙇🏻‍♀️🙌🙇🏻‍♀️

@jeeplord4067 3 года назад

22:37 fell asleep for a bit, heard this and woke up thinking my auto play stumbled upon some God of War.

@chrissygreig2277 3 года назад

Wow amazing, I believe this is the first part of a series 😊🌹

@daledrakewriter4912 3 года назад

Could well be lol

@kentworch Год назад

I listened to both hellbound and Masterson chronicles complete in order, just don't know what order to listen to these in.

@shadic971 Год назад

They're not meant to have a listening order, but chronologically it's Masterson, Hellbound, then this one

@irony373 2 года назад

7:54 sounds like the author has been reading a clockwork orange.

@paulross225 3 года назад

There has been an outbreak of above average stories right across the Creepy pasta world recently and this story is among them! - without a doubt!

@daledrakewriter4912 3 года назад

Thank you.

@paulross225 3 года назад

@@daledrakewriter4912 👍👌🇬🇧

@hiromitsumoonblossom8682 3 года назад

This story is great so far, I wonder why I didn't get notified about it

@houstonshannon7661 3 года назад

I love westerns hells creek is the icing on the cake for me. More please 😁😁😁

@leeh1395 3 года назад

Yes more Dale Drake been waiting on these! 😁

@daledrakewriter4912 3 года назад

I hope you enjoyed it Lee. I have another one of these already to go and Just started another Hell's Creek last week.

@leeh1395 3 года назад

@@daledrakewriter4912 Hey mate, I finally got to listen to it all uninterrupted. Amazing stuff yet again, really looking forward to how that shit storm is going to play out. 😁 Also this Protagonist hasn't quite yet awed us with his badassary yet. I'll be looking forward to that development. Absolute lad!

@daledrakewriter4912 3 года назад

@@leeh1395 wait lol.

@draztiktunez7104 2 года назад

This series and hells creek blew my mind gave me Constantine vibes . This would be great as a Netflix series or something.

@jakobbailey 3 года назад

Fuck me, normally I just somewhat enjoy these, but jesus christ, this one is fucking amazing. There are very few of these that I could see becoming a movie, but this one could definitely do it. Absolutely FANTASTIC story.

@monkeyd6716 3 года назад

Should try tales from the gas station. He’s done a narration on this channel it’s honest to god the best.

@goldenfox334 3 года назад

ah yes. rub wolfs bane into a cut, one of the worlds most toxic plant that can kill just from touching the plant

@creepy.cookie3187 Год назад

The thumbnail is the Alpha Wolf from Res Evil 8 right?? That’s cool!

@Wendy-ou1jz 3 года назад

Love it!!!😁👻💜

@daledrakewriter4912 3 года назад

Thank you. This is going to be a Novel so was nervous about releasing this prequel.

@EndersonOmega25000 Год назад

This sounds like a job for… the Doom Slayer.

@welcometoluxaria5363 3 года назад

beautifully brutal, just the way i like it. niiicce

@armaslanney8854 2 года назад

So, is this after the Masterson chronicles? I'm so confused on the placement of these..

@user-PuppyDan Год назад

I would think so as they were set back in the 1800's where as this is more recent. As soon as I heard the boy's surname I stopped it to see if anyone else was thinking if this and the Masterson Chronicles were linked.