Cain OC PMV Storyboard

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I started working on this a month or so ago and after finishing some owed art I let myself finish this! I’m excited to make this PMV. A lot of the character art should be pretty easy, I’m not looking forward to the backgrounds though lmao
I might do the same thing that I did with Pigeon and make a couple big backgrounds for the majority of the video, idk
Besides it maybe being kinda hard to tell which character is which, I feel like the storyline of the PMV is pretty straight forward. These are some of my OCs, the main one being Root. The wolf near the end, I’m sure some of you recognise, is Pyro! The other family members I have no names for yet rip
I was just excited about making this ah well.
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Instagram - / comic.savag. .
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Questions you may have -
What's an AMV/PMV -
AMV stands for Animated Music Video, and PMV stands for Picture Music Video!
What programs do you use?
Clip Studio Paint (iPad Pro) for drawing/animation - Premiere Pro and After Effects for editing!
Can I use your stuff for a compilation/tribute?
You're free to use my work in a tribute! But please don't use my work in compilations. Those videos actually harm animators by making the RU-vid algorithm think that they're spamming the site, so please don't make them!
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Cain by Cousin Marnie

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11 окт 2024

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@Starcheopteryx 3 года назад

The PMV for the storyboard is done! ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-UwqmiKqNyXA.html

@0rb 3 года назад

It is, and it’s absolutely amazing! Worth the wait. :0

@Faultliness 3 года назад

I’m so happy, it’s literally amazing. I’ve been waiting ever since this came out for the finished version to come out. Amazing work!

@cooler-ian 3 года назад

the fact that you actually finished it 2 years later is amazing, i could never-

@hotdog2611 5 лет назад

Ok late but I think we can all agree that Root doesn't regret a single thing they did at all, they just act sad around the wolf to not get caught (As in make the wolf believe it was a accident or something), but that's just what I think

@toxiccatron867 4 года назад

ClosestPoint or, you can go obvious and she actually doesn’t care, because that’s the smartest option for somebody to make. I think hot dog is right, and she actually doesn’t care, and she’s just acting not to get killed by the wolf

@Rudymentary 4 года назад

@@fauxmarble7439 where

@arson8265 4 года назад

Ngl this is kinda toxic

@no_dojo8056 4 года назад

I still don't see how the wolf could think that it was an "accident". She's covered in blood, there are graves prepared for her victims, and the family is lying dead there. Totally not suspicious..... The wolf is a cool character, but seems pretty gullible at the situation.

@tacomuncherkevin 4 года назад

Lil' Puff He’s probably in disbelief that his own friend would do that so he probably chooses not to believe it

@fernaldoishere 5 лет назад

I really like how the main character was written. They have a sort of manipulative personality, for example crying to make the wolf feel bad but then not actually being visibly sad at all. Everything drawn here is really dramatic and cool, especially the last death. I really can't wait to see this done! Edit: After reading a few comment, probably from people who know more about this story than me, I like that she only shows feelings when people look at her. Maybe it's not that she's manipulative and it's just that she doesn't show emotion?

@emmaesta9444 5 лет назад

She only seems to show emotion when someone, Pyro, looks at her after the killing spree, so id think its a manipulative personality!

@Featherpool 5 лет назад

I think that if the main is root, their brother shoud be tree! The tree is always seen while roots are usually forgotten, whileas trees are easily removed while roots tend to... linger. EDIT: this is the most liked comment I’ve ever gotten lmao

@frosted_clover2077 4 года назад

God that’s genius.

@Featherpool 4 года назад

MelanieHatter's Animations thanks! I’m pretty proud of the idea XD

@rabbiscuittt 4 года назад

This is such an underrated comment this is a great ideaaaa

@fazieco 4 года назад

Omg I love your idea so much, I hope they use the name tree for the kitty

@Featherpool 4 года назад

Haha thanks!

@Starstruck_Seven 4 года назад

And the fact that this wasn't just a snapping point, because Root already had planned enough to have graves dug for her family, shows how much this was premeditated.

@oogaboogaamy 4 года назад

Not only is the storyline perfectly written, but the song being called 'Cain' is a direct reference to the biblical story of Cain and Abel where Cain (Root) kills his Abel (Root's sibling) because Abel was God's (their parents) favourite. Very clever. Very perfect choice.

@calamity2383 4 года назад

That’s really cool, I can’t believe I didn’t notice

@MADM3LODY 5 лет назад

OHNMY GOD THAT PART AT LIKE 2:30 GAVE ME CHILLS LIKE DANG even tho this is an animatic it already looks so good!! Like youre really great at capturing mood and going with the music,, its crazy to see how quick it went to cute and calm to violent, and you can even see that reflected in your style too, like it subtlety changes when more intense things happen. Really cool!!

@skybloomchannel 5 лет назад

Hahaha holy shite

@gruslen 5 лет назад

Your song choices are always perfection! It's weird seeing such a sympathetic and concerned Pyro, but I absolutely here for that kind of duality. As well as with, Root. I like how as he (assuming he?) kills a member of his family he gets more violent with each one. He certainly seems to hold a bigger grudge towards his parents than his brother. Excited to see this when its completely done! I'm still reeling from Pigeon and this one might lay me out entirely.

@Starcheopteryx 5 лет назад

well this long before pyro is a bad pee pee man. it was actually really hard to draw him like this though, I'm so used to making him look like a mean old man!

@INAI1NAIREBOOT 4 года назад

@@Starcheopteryx i enjoy the term *"bad pee pee man"*

@movedaccounts9270 3 года назад

@@INAI1NAIREBOOT i enjoy the term, *"bad pee pee"* because it describes the current state of my life

@allout. 5 лет назад

I love how I can literally tell what’s happening This song fits good

@druidshollow 5 лет назад

oh! i was gonna do a video to this song!! this is so pretty, i adore your art and always love learning abt your ocs :3c thanks for feeding us

@whiskurr9987 5 лет назад

we are starving children, and comic provides 😔

@ROTICURE 5 лет назад

i need my dose of puzzli and comic food

@laperra5542 5 лет назад

puzzlii i made this 130

@Starcheopteryx 5 лет назад

There’s one thing I’m not sure about that maybe you guys can help me with; should I add lyrics to the final product? I feel like it would look good in some places, but not in others... thoughts?

@dreamofviolence1575 5 лет назад

ComicSavagery lyrics to accentuate some scenes would be super cool, just experimenting is a good idea

@rxraltzna 5 лет назад

Id say add them and see how they look! Maybe it they don’t look good you could put it behind characters or make it less obvious!

@littlefanggz8570 5 лет назад

ComicSavagery I think you should add lyrics in certain places but in others, just leave it to the animation. Sometimes the lyrics can pull away from scenes with a lot of movement, y’know?

@pinebarks 5 лет назад

I think lyrics would look good! If you cant really find a place for them try to add them in the bg and smaller or smth?

@crystalcolors2229 5 лет назад

Lyrics in only some parts can actually work really well and it can be pulled off! For example the map Needletails Duology only has lyrics in some parts

@user-tw8bh5bn1m 4 года назад

The part where the blood slowly spreads and their paw unclenches really hit me, it’s so suspenseful!! The story fits so well with the animation

@pierrotstar 5 лет назад

This is amazing!^ the characters seem so interesting! I'd love to learn more about them!! this may sound weird, but you're sorta one of my biggest inspirations. The ashfur pidgeon AMV inspired me to draw and learn about animation etc.

@Starcheopteryx 5 лет назад

that's so nice to hear omg ;o;

@StarrChild. 5 лет назад

I'm excited to see this finished. The emotion in the characters is so well done. I adore the little parts keeping in time to the beat. Real nice touch. What song did you use for this? It's a good choice.

@akreator6400 5 лет назад

Song - Cain by Cousin Marnie

@aphroditeb7726 4 года назад

THE SHOT AT 2:30 WHEN ROOT DRAGS HER CLAWS AGAINST HER (or is it his?) MOTHER'S THROAT LOOKS SO COOL I know it's kinda dark but I love how the blood effects make it seem like the sound is the mother's blood tl;dr this pmv is awesome

@nonactiveaccount964 5 лет назад

I swear to god I thought this was an Ivypool pmv about murdering her whole family *i'm stupid*

@sodapackyaoi 5 лет назад

Blackie Hat fucking same

@c4mph0r75 4 года назад

bruh me

@CringyFandoms 4 года назад

That was what I thought, so now I have a new Evil Ivypool AU that I wanna make

@princessnubbins7608 4 года назад

Bruh it wasn’t? I’m so dumb. 😂

@fazieco 4 года назад

ˢᵗⁱˡˡ ᵃᵖᵖˡⁱᵉˢ ᵗʰᵒᵘᵍʰ

@Donnyclaws 5 лет назад

THS IS SO GOOD, i swear everytime u post i just watch it like, 15 times to absorb it and see all the killer expressions over n over again

@Starcheopteryx 5 лет назад

AAAA i wish youtube comments supported pictures so i could send that picture of Kermit holding his phone with hearts everywhere!!

@Donnyclaws 5 лет назад

@@Starcheopteryx GDSJKHG dw dude i can envision it and i'm sending back that white cat screaming with the hearts around it !!!!!!

@kahbob3791 3 года назад

oh my gosh after the multitude of times i’ve watched this amv i’ve only just realized that when the dad shows up and there’s the shot overhead of the clearing you can see the three graves that have been dug. CHILLS!!

@skybloomchannel 5 лет назад

“This is what it feels like to get pepper sprayed” a comment from my brother when I showed him this.

@moonsilk3311 4 года назад

oh gosh your poor brother

@ROTICURE 5 лет назад

ohmygod this is really good!! the end gave me vibes that root had no regrets in killing his/her family, and played it off to the wolf to seem that way. im guessing root is close w/ the wolf?? also i love how you made hope when the third cat was about to kill them, but we got a sneaky pulled on us. [ haha tbh kinda wish they did,, im not one to like villain characters ]

@jewelsthecat5331 5 лет назад

I thought this was Ivypool at first due to the thumbnail, but I quickly realised its an OC. From the comments I’ve read, the story sounds really interesting! Can’t wait to see it finished!!

@yukaii0 5 лет назад

2:31 ok but that was geniuenly really out of nowhere and scary like omgshjcjs

@MINTLEFLOWER 5 лет назад

OH MY GOD THAT LOOKS ABSOLUTELY DELICIOUS!!! THE PART AT 2:30 THOUGH,, ABSOLUTE LEGEND!!! IT REALLY WAS UNEXPECTED NGL AND THAT'S REALLY WHAT I LOVE ABOUT IT,,,,

@ravenousrebel 5 лет назад

AAAA THIS IS SO GOOD + i love the timing in this pmv! even the little details! not sure if it was intentional or not but i love how the pool of blood at 1:54 is the shape of the cloud in the next image!!

@bubblesmeow7172 5 лет назад

Already had all 3 graves dug at 1:41

@russianvesper3866 4 года назад

Nice eye

@HER_Only_sIN 5 лет назад

The way the blood spurted from his mother when he did that claw rip omg

@tawdrytime 5 лет назад

Holy Heckin Heck,,,,, I was so pumped to finally watch this once i heard about it on twitter and jeez my dude,,, you did not disappoint!!! That beat drop at 2:33 literally made my jaw drop, I can't wait to see the rest!!!!!

@INAI1NAIREBOOT 4 года назад

The best part is that the blood spray is timed with the drop aaaaaaa

@sunlitwaters 5 лет назад

The emotions gave me literal chills! I love the ending how he started crying but then gave that look ooooh wow!!

@cncgordonchris 5 лет назад

I LOVE this there's so much emotion and ugggh I'm so excited for the finished product

@pinebarks 5 лет назад

Ur stuff literally gives me will to live i want to melt my teeth with it its so good

@Partyboxd 4 года назад

Can I just say I love how the lighting was on root when their siblings went to look for them. And when they were about to kill the dad.

@hyahymnal 5 лет назад

This is absolutely chilling! Great so far, and I do think lyrics could help decipher the higher parts of singing.

@grievers2762 5 лет назад

This is absolutely gorgeous. The song fits so well with the story board. If it looks this good now I can't wait to see it finished.

@ShigaDabii 5 лет назад

Root is terrifying. Good work on the video like always, comic!

@vanillahibiscus486 4 года назад

I watched this when it was first posted and I've loved it ever since! Can't wait to see it finished ^^

@DeadHouseMouse 5 лет назад

This is amazing my guy The part where the beat drops as he kills his mom gave me goosebumps Can’t wait for the final product

@amygdata 5 лет назад

Here's what I think, I think I might think Root didn't feel included in the family, or had something against the family. Therefore killing them. Root seems to only show emotion and cry when the wolf is around to not get caught, to seem pitiful to get the wolf to help them.

@luqaas 5 лет назад

let the bodies hit the floor

@Jenny-wz7nc 4 года назад

she really said: *"Im gonna pull something i like to call a pro gamer move"*

@snakescales7747 5 лет назад

When they killed the mom that was epic

@TheDragonCat99 5 лет назад

Gotta love sociopaths, even if they can’t love ya back!

@fadedkat 5 лет назад

woah this is going to look aMAZING when its done and also 10/10 song choice, I love this so much already and I can't wait to learn more about your characters!!

@Julia-pv4eo 5 лет назад

DUUUUUDE THIS IS ABSOKUTELY CRAZY!! Looking forward to it!!!

@Ijorkittoyou 4 года назад

Cant wait to see the finished animation!! This is amazing already

@Emma-mj3pz 3 года назад

This storyboard is so good, no wonder it evolved into the masterpiece of an PMV

@mono414 4 года назад

Christ, she even had the graves dug out for them already. Not to mention 2:30, you’ve done an amazing job creating this!

@gilnahnu 4 года назад

THIS IS SO GOOD THE BEST PMV EVER

@nightshade-warroir6915 5 лет назад

I need to learn more about this angsty darling. also this is really well done, and perfectly timed ;v; every frame hit its mark and the emotions in here, gosh, so well done man ;v; and the stories coherent too

@bellersbeetles3886 4 года назад

Bro she had graves already DUG!

@Коба-б8ф 5 лет назад

OH MY GOD YOU ARE SO ORIGINAL LIKE REALLY these days it's really hard to find a person who can show a story THAT good just with a song, and it's only a storyboard! Beautiful

@grimmcorvid5713 5 лет назад

This is an actual masterpice! Cant wait to see it finished!

@JOE-ik7bk 4 года назад

i know the ending shot has their pupils sliding to the right of frame but them staring directly at the viewer is arguably more haunting

@Melyuntonin 5 лет назад

Omg this is so freaking cool I love the idea you put for the main character, the story is so creative and the emotion you put for the victim and the killer are so amazing I love your pigeon mv and I know I'm gonna love this so much when the finish animation comes out

@definitelynotbonesgoogleac7660 5 лет назад

Wow! That's amazing! I love the art style and all the thought you put into the fight sceans!

@crypticharu2377 4 года назад

I like it how there are 3 graves made for them already

@axelf9947 3 года назад

Ahhh this is the best thing I’ve ever seen!! The designs are recognizable and the story is very clear! I love it!! It’s so well done when she climactically murders her mother- I love the camera movements!! And the manipulative vibes she gives off when she fake-cries for sympathy are chilling!!! The facial expressions are insane! There are even a ton of little details- like at 1:41 for example, there are already graves dug out for all three of her family members! The style of art and how the shots switch matches the beat of the music perfectly, and it’s incredible!!!!! Is this still going to become a full PMV? Honestly, it’s amazing enough right now- but if it is, I can’t wait!!

@ferretkin 4 года назад

root: *kills family* hip hip hooray *pyro sneaks in* root: *fuck-*

@thepastelcat8452 5 лет назад

Oh my gosh I absolutely LOVE the story here!!! It seems so cool!!!

@northskyline5995 5 лет назад

This is just stunning! I loved the story, the song and the timing! You did everything so well :)

@randomstuffcentral8356 5 лет назад

This looks soo good

@channelmoved6918 4 года назад

Oh my god.. OH MY GOD ITS AWESOME

@bambootriangle 5 лет назад

woah, it's so good! I can clearly see what is happening and your perspectives are the best!

@reesev3425 5 лет назад

THE LAST SHOT FUCKING SENT ME!!!! CHILLS LITERAL CHILLS

@mistydraws2573 5 лет назад

This is so great man the song the story everything I watched it so many times and took everything in man It also makes me think of my warriors oc X3 this song would fit very well with it man but keep up the great work!!

@vendotlover 4 года назад

I FOUND IT YAYAYSSAY YAS I THOUGHT I DREAMED THIS WHOLE VIDEO BUT I KNEW MY BRAIN COULDN'T COME UP WITH SOMETHING THIS GREAT AYAGGSFSH

@c0ld_st0rm 5 лет назад

Ive been watching this on repeat since it was posted and my dumbass only just now realized it was an OC thing, I thought6 this was some kinda Ivypool and Dovewing thing you were making

@yukaii0 5 лет назад

Oh hello there c0ld also mood i thought it was about Hawkfrost at first abdndn

@spiritanimations9629 4 года назад

If you look carefully at one of the scenes you can see three holes in the ground dug by Root.

@CheerJ0yy 5 лет назад

Question I have: *hows you’re bird*

@Starcheopteryx 5 лет назад

he's as fat as always!

@INAI1NAIREBOOT 4 года назад

@@Starcheopteryx is he a chonky man

@ToyCupcakes 5 лет назад

This seems so cool!! I really want to know more about them!!

@welliguessitsover8054 5 лет назад

Hey dude I sadly just found ur channel and I'm currently working on oc's that basically deal with murder in a town, and this surprisingly helped me with it a bit-

@Limbolots0 5 лет назад

Sounds interesting :0

@NullCake2224 4 года назад

Her ripping the last one's throat was actually a unique way to kill.

@fazieco 4 года назад

I like the way you describe the way the cat killed another one lol

@warmswimmer8045 5 лет назад

i just want you to know that i have a migraine and made the decision to not look at my phone while it clears up, but i saw this and was curious so i clicked on it to see the beginning. it was really good so i watched through the pain. (although im gonna be in pain no matter what haha) you have skill! all of this feels really nicely timed and shot. id love to see it if you ever finish it. :)

@warmswimmer8045 5 лет назад

(i went to subscribe and saw i already was, haha. now i recognize some of your older videos. love your work!)

@sshatter 5 лет назад

0:53 That cat didn’t do anything wrong! It’s not his fault his parents favored him over Root, R.I.P

@bonethegoth1782 5 лет назад

I know I'm late but am I the only one that was reminded of the Pigeon AMV by the very first frame with the four characters like they were? P.S., Amazing and work and chilling characters!

@cecilvessel 5 лет назад

I’m excited to see this finished!!

@GoldenSandwing 4 года назад

wow what a sad story of this cat that hardly gets attention if it was me I would do that too and of course even being sisters the other should get attention to herself looking like a wip to her animation It's amazing I don't know much about cat warriors but I like it a lot and I hope I can have their book so I can understand the stories

@patchedleaf2429 4 года назад

Oml I’m stupid thought this was a ivypool pmv But I like this

@mask3911 5 лет назад

im super late but I LOVE THIS ANIMATION. I felt bad for the brother honestly. I love this a lot. Good job. You have such a good style.

@darkstalkerdrawer31 5 лет назад

This is sooooo good! Your such an inspiration! I love it! Pls finish it!!! Also I love you Pideon AMV, I’ve probably watched it 50 times!

@darkstalkerdrawer31 5 лет назад

Your Pigeon*

@fiish5354 5 лет назад

Oh my jesus you are amazing at this you are a genius and even if this isn't animation it's greAT keep up the fantastic work :)

@CANINETHEROPY 5 лет назад

I thought this was ivypool for a second-

@vanillahibiscus486 5 лет назад

I'm so interested to see where the story goes! I would love to know more about Root

@icepool5163 5 лет назад

I feel root ( not the murder part of course ) I lived with my cousins for three years and everyone seemed to love my cousin so much , and my parents compared me to her and it pissed me off . I thought if you want to replace me with her fine then! not going to lie i thought of killing her ( Fantasized not actually planning it) but i am good now

@kidcore-puppy177 5 лет назад

This is so good I love this!

@Bluejaylover Год назад

Ok I am sorry but before the blood stuff all I could think every time it said "wheres your brother" I was like, "right there dummy?"

@INAI1NAIREBOOT 4 года назад

Okay so like inspiration struck me while watching this and now Thistlesnap might murder her family maybe

@wingedqueenlynx8380 5 лет назад

The goes so well with this👌

@hyahymnal 5 лет назад

Do you happen to be taking suggestions for family member names? Because you could go with plant themes, like Valerian, Burdock, etc

@Starcheopteryx 5 лет назад

Oh I really like Burdock as a name for the Dad...I’ll keep the plant thing in mind for the final video, thanks!!

@YumeQueen 5 лет назад

My lord . Would be great if ivypool be like cain

@innactiveaccount7390 5 лет назад

This is beautiful!!!!!

@grapiesoo 5 лет назад

I'm thinking they only acted sad around the wolf/fox because who's gonna win a fight, them or a kitten?

@No-bt4ne 5 лет назад

1:43, that scurch tho

@Meckolo 4 года назад

I watched this a while ago and i came back i only just realized that she had holes dug for their graves after she killed her brother ljazgouag 😩

@suspiciousvan3100 5 лет назад

I love it! It reminds me of an Ivypool AU.

@SadDayZzz 4 года назад

I have been watching this forever and I thought it was ivypool dovewing and their parents with fer song being the Tom she leaned against

@aaiknn 4 года назад

So Root murdered its entire family. It seems that the brother was the only target at the start with all the focus on him, then as the parents found Root it decided to go all out. It seemed that Root’s motive was its family took away the attention of Pyro? Root seems to feign being attacked at the end.