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Cash or Credit (Short Film) // Shot on BMCC 6k Full Frame 

Carsten Schlag
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When a grocery store cashier decides to mess with an anxious young boy. He does the unthinkable to regain his peace.
Cast
Boy Thomas FitzGerald
Mother Ashley Ringelberg
Cashier Kerryanne Devine
Man in line Zed Koleilat
Lady with Baby Ilsa Schlag
Crew
1st AD Colin Giering
Sound Juan Ortiz
Gaffer Jaymes Hargrove
Key Grip Kyle Apodaca
Swing Cameron Frassetta
Swing Vinnie Colon
HMU Madison Muller
BTS Mohamed Sannoh
PA Mattias Schlag
PA Camryn Miller
Post Production
Edit/Color Carsten Schlag
Sound Mixing Juan Ortiz
Special Thanks to Forestas' Meat Market in Phoenixville
for the location and food!

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@DannyGevirtz
@DannyGevirtz 5 месяцев назад
Oh snap! We're getting a breakdown?!
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
Yes sir, you better smash that like button !
@blakebuentello
@blakebuentello 4 месяца назад
Great work. Absolutely love the color grading
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Thanks dude! haha the color is my fav part
@camerachronicles7
@camerachronicles7 5 месяцев назад
Just came over after watching the breakdown! What an incredible short. Would love to watch a whole feature with this kind of look and style. Great work 🎉
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
Thanks for watching both man i really appreciate it!
@KaceyBakerFilms
@KaceyBakerFilms 4 месяца назад
I don’t know if I’m going to hell, but I burst out laughing when he threw the can at her.
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Haha I’m going there too then because I also find it hilarious. Thanks for watching!
@BRASAM.
@BRASAM. 4 месяца назад
This is amazing, never stop. Your time is coming🔥
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
thank you, I really appreciate that! haha we shall see
@kerryannedevine1834
@kerryannedevine1834 5 месяцев назад
This turned out amazing!! Thanks for letting me be a part of it.
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
Thank you for being a part of it, you killed it!
@its_tHoMaS1
@its_tHoMaS1 Месяц назад
same!
@1freakintaco
@1freakintaco 5 месяцев назад
This was absolutely phenomenal! Great work! Cant wait to see what you do next!
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
Thank you so much! Really appreciate it
@vinniecolon
@vinniecolon 5 месяцев назад
Absolutely great stuff.
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
thanks my guy!
@StoryDrivenFilmmaking
@StoryDrivenFilmmaking 4 месяца назад
Great job! This turned out fantastic.
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Thank you so much !
@mrdogpoopstudios
@mrdogpoopstudios 4 месяца назад
Amazing work. The fact that you spoke about how you did it in the BTS video for 20 minutes should show people how much goes into 2 minutes of film. It really is a great look on the colors, location. Would love to see a whole movie like that.
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Thank you so much man! Yeah definitely a lot goes into 2 min lol. Maybe one day there will be a whole movie 🤷‍♂️ :)
@RyanPiski
@RyanPiski 3 месяца назад
check out white noise!!
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 3 месяца назад
I’ll check it out!
@rayeditz672
@rayeditz672 21 день назад
I'm a bit late but this is so good there's no words to describe it. You are an amazing filmmaker and thomas is a very very good actor. I'd like to be a movie director one day ❤️❤️❤️
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 20 дней назад
Thanks brotha ! I really appreciate your kind words! Can’t wait to see what you direct one day! Appreciate you!! :)
@theshinybananamovies
@theshinybananamovies 4 месяца назад
Amazing work! Fun idea and visually stunning.
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Thank you so much! I really appreciate that
@Zenen_Saneshige
@Zenen_Saneshige 4 месяца назад
This was so simply genius! great work, thank you for the inspo
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Thanks Zenen! I appreciate you, thanks for watching!
@MadeByRealPerson
@MadeByRealPerson 5 месяцев назад
HOLY! This was fantastic!! Keep it upppp!!
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
Thanks man, I really appreciate it !
@RayRay357
@RayRay357 5 месяцев назад
Loved this short. Good job Kerryann
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
Glad you enjoyed it!
@jdandyfilms
@jdandyfilms 5 месяцев назад
This was awesome. Loved the music at the end. I'll be subscribing to see more!
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
Thanks man! The music is one of my favorite parts
@kirklanddees
@kirklanddees 3 месяца назад
Absolutely loved the editing of this!
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 3 месяца назад
Thank you, i really appreciate that!!
@islandprepperone
@islandprepperone 4 месяца назад
Wow! This is amazing.
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Thank you so much!
@jamesdoanecompositions
@jamesdoanecompositions 4 месяца назад
Great work!! I look forward to seeing more!
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Thank you! I really appreciate that!
@nickfilmaker
@nickfilmaker 4 месяца назад
Congractulations. Its a amazing short, very well crafted.
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Thanks nick! I really appreciate that
@REDDpenMEDIA
@REDDpenMEDIA 5 месяцев назад
Thanks for having me on this one!
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
Thanks for absolutely killing it !
@jaymeshargrove
@jaymeshargrove 5 месяцев назад
This was a fun one! Thanks for having me on
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
You killed it man, couldn’t have done it without you !
@mothercityfilm
@mothercityfilm 4 месяца назад
awesome job! looking forward to more. no doubt the 4k will pay off nicely :)
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Thank you! Appreciate you taking the time to watch! Lol I hope it will pay off
@captureinsidethesound
@captureinsidethesound 4 месяца назад
Love it! This made me think of the movies Eli and Brightburn.
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Thanks man! Ive never seen either, so I'll have to check em out lol
@TT9087
@TT9087 5 месяцев назад
this is so sick! i don't understand how this dosen't have a couple of million views
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
I don’t know if it’s that good lol but I appreciate it !
@GherardoDeBenedetti
@GherardoDeBenedetti 5 месяцев назад
D A M N. Bro this was amazing. Keep up the good work!
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
Thank you my dude ! I’ll try my best to keep making cool stuff lol
@juanenco
@juanenco 4 месяца назад
Great short ¡¡¡¡ storytelling, photo, grading, etc, thanks for sharing ¡¡ I have laughed a lot 😂😂
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Haha thank you man! I really appreciate that!
@nickoloui
@nickoloui 4 месяца назад
Damn! That's so good man. Looking forward to more.
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Thanks my dude!! There will be more!!
@nickoloui
@nickoloui 3 месяца назад
@@carstenschlag What lens did you use on the black magic 6k FF for this?
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 3 месяца назад
@@nickoloui I used the Leica 24-70 f2.8 photo lens
@nickoloui
@nickoloui 3 месяца назад
@@carstenschlag Thank you! Looking to upgrade soon to the bmcc6k ff and was looking at lens options.
@MartinVlog444
@MartinVlog444 4 месяца назад
great short. ! looks very cinematic - incredible image
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Thanks dude!
@devbhankhar
@devbhankhar 5 месяцев назад
That’s so good I really like and as beginning it feels like feature. Keep it up 👍
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
Thank you so much!
@JamesJacksonFilmz
@JamesJacksonFilmz 5 месяцев назад
Great job buddy!
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
thanks man!
@eldante1995
@eldante1995 4 месяца назад
I freaking loved it
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Thank you so much! glad you liked it
@JDStreetEnterprises
@JDStreetEnterprises 4 месяца назад
best short film ive ever seen
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Haha idk if it’s that good, but thanks dude! I appreciate that
@reyesproductionDK
@reyesproductionDK 5 месяцев назад
WTF! It escalated quickly! Masterpiece!! I hope i'll see more and more work from you. (And i guess i will, by your bio "just beginning" :) )
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
Thank you! Haha there may be some more coming soon 🤷‍♂️
@reyesproductionDK
@reyesproductionDK 5 месяцев назад
Good! :P@@carstenschlag
@redbeardfilmsaus
@redbeardfilmsaus 3 месяца назад
So good! Now to watch the breakdown 😮
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 3 месяца назад
Thanks man! Haha hope it’s helpful. If you have any questions, give me a shout!
@nashwiththeflash
@nashwiththeflash Месяц назад
So good man
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag Месяц назад
Aye thanks man ! I really appreciate you taking the time to watch!
@Thee_Media
@Thee_Media 5 месяцев назад
This is peak! 🙌
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
Thanks my man! more coming soon
@KarmReyes
@KarmReyes 5 месяцев назад
This was fire
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
Thanks man !
@lambo_drives
@lambo_drives 5 месяцев назад
👏🏻.👏🏻.👏🏻. My compliments to the writer/director/(all involved) great stuff
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
Thank you so much!
@lambo_drives
@lambo_drives 5 месяцев назад
@@carstenschlag you got my excitement level (being a hack creator stuck with 12gb RAM) waaaay into thinking of practical effect and cohesiveness. I am NO where near your input level yet but... wow. Thank YOU. 🙏
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
@@lambo_drivesI’m excited to see what you create! I’m sure it will be great
@lambo_drives
@lambo_drives 5 месяцев назад
Seriously the eye thing actually exemplifies his disconnection from his actions.... wish we could see what you thought was off, but his gaze not aligning potentially may just work.... but a glance her way may have worked best... alas, nice fix, if there needed to me one 😊
@vernon_x_sicboy
@vernon_x_sicboy 2 месяца назад
This was very good
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 2 месяца назад
Thanks Vernon! Really appreciate you taking the time to watch!!
@diamondlabelfilms
@diamondlabelfilms 5 месяцев назад
I'll never understand why film guys buy these expensive cameras just to dirty and kill the image with a ton of grain
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
Haha I’m sure you love the blur and barrel distortion I added as well then. Thanks for watching!
@RyanPiski
@RyanPiski 3 месяца назад
It adds to this story, being a time piece and the grittyness of the story (although I didn't make the creative decisions nor the script so I'm not sure if that was intentional or just because they liked the look). Most of the time color is an intentional piece, ie: a modern fashion commercial that focuses on business clothing would be shot on zeiss and have a super clean high key look compared to shooting a fashion commercial for vintage clothing where you may want to use a canon 8-64 t2.9 16mm and give it 16mm grain& halation so it feels more like that time. and the 6k ain't expensive lol
@luvair6765
@luvair6765 4 месяца назад
Great grade and lighting. Really sets the tone.
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Thank you! I really appreciate that
@Youtuberr35
@Youtuberr35 5 месяцев назад
Very Nice Colors !
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
Thanks man, I appreciate it!
@diazfilms
@diazfilms 4 месяца назад
This was great!!!! Ha! I was that kid once! I didn't take action like he did though, Oh the anxiety! Very well done!!!!
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Thanks man!! Haha I was that kid too.
@KianteMarron
@KianteMarron 5 месяцев назад
He’s a chef the way he be cookin🤌🏾
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
thanks my man!
@marcovernice
@marcovernice 4 месяца назад
This is a amazing
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Thank you so much, i really appreciate you taking the time to watch it!
@ukgreat
@ukgreat 4 месяца назад
great job
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Thanks Man! Appreciate you watching!!
@impatrickt
@impatrickt 4 месяца назад
couple classic musicbed jams
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Yess sir! Best place for good tunes
@artisticbehaviormn
@artisticbehaviormn 4 месяца назад
That was great!!! Saw the breakdown first.
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Thanks dude!! haha that seems to be the way a lot of people are viewing it
@KalomikaArts
@KalomikaArts 24 дня назад
Took a while for me to see a good short film shot on this. U what all equipment was used?
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 23 дня назад
Thanks man, so glad you think it’s good lol ! If you wanna see a pretty full list of all the equipment that was used, check out the bts vid of that short film I put out! But pretty much it was the pocket 6k ff. Lens was Lecia 24-70 f2.8 photo lens with 1/4th black satin. Lighting wise all tube lights and light mats and a ton of negative fill!! Appreciate you watching man!
@BenjiSelby
@BenjiSelby 5 месяцев назад
Broooo this is so relatable 😂
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
Haha I’m glad you can relate
@tomruckes562
@tomruckes562 5 месяцев назад
great work. would love to see the grading process! :)
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
You got it ! Thanks for watching
@iTzMisTV
@iTzMisTV 4 месяца назад
Dope!!
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Thank you!!
@Amiralimohazab
@Amiralimohazab 4 месяца назад
Oh sir, great 👌🏼
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Thank you good sir! Appreciate you !
@kate_meara
@kate_meara 5 месяцев назад
idk why youtube showed me this but im glad it did
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
I’m glad you liked it !
@joseacarrasm
@joseacarrasm 3 месяца назад
That was amazing, I could feel the child anxiety as the items were passing through the line 😢
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 3 месяца назад
Thank you! I’m glad it made you feel that way, that was my intention! Appreciate you watching!!
@NinaJerry
@NinaJerry 2 месяца назад
The baby has good music taste :D
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 2 месяца назад
Haha indeed. Appreciate you watching!
@AdioAsh
@AdioAsh 4 месяца назад
Looks good did you intentionally cross the line with the first action shot? I initially thought the clerk stuck him.
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
When he threw the can? if that's the shot you are talking about yes. Since the boy character is feeling anxious and overwhelmed I wanted the viewer to feel a bit jarred as well. lol maybe it was a bad choice. Really appreciate you taking the time to watch it!
@ZENTEMPLE_
@ZENTEMPLE_ 5 месяцев назад
so cool
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
Thanks man !
@DeanoProduction
@DeanoProduction 5 месяцев назад
🔥🔥🔥
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
Thanks bro !
@TrueURIELOfficial
@TrueURIELOfficial 4 месяца назад
Aweaome
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Thank you man! I really appreciate you watching!
@fedorbrockmann1698
@fedorbrockmann1698 4 месяца назад
Inspiring work! Everyone's saying it in the comments but the color grading is really really good
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Thanks man! I really appreciate you taking the time to watch
@romankuhler
@romankuhler 5 месяцев назад
Sooooo good😄
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
Thanks my dude !
@romankuhler
@romankuhler 5 месяцев назад
@@carstenschlag always great to see everyday life situations filmed in such a dark and funny way😄
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
I agree! It’s my favorite type of film
@gxdpictures
@gxdpictures 5 месяцев назад
That kid needs an oscar
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
he killed it
@its_tHoMaS1
@its_tHoMaS1 Месяц назад
THANK YOU SO MUCH! I DONT THINK I DID THAT GREAT BUT IT DID COME OUT VERY WELL
@JunKimCreative
@JunKimCreative 4 месяца назад
Great colours, love the twist, very Danny Gevirtz-esque! Was it intentional to break the 180 rule for the shots going back and forth from the cashier to the boy?
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Haha thanks man. Danny taught me how to be a dp so def a bit of his style has crept into my work. The 180 degree break was not at all intentional lol. It was just a dumb mistake. I explain it more in the BTS vid but yeah, just was so distracted trying to direct and dp at the same time I missed correcting the eye line. Damn near had a heart attack when I realized in the edit, lol one of those mistakes you make and you'll never make again. Thanks for watching !
@JunKimCreative
@JunKimCreative 4 месяца назад
@@carstenschlag keep at it man! You have a great eye👀👀👀
@grandaveragefilms
@grandaveragefilms 5 месяцев назад
relatable
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
It’s a stressful experience lol
@boogeyb
@boogeyb 5 месяцев назад
Love it 🔥 Which lenses did you use ?
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
thanks man! we didn't use anything crazy It was just Lecias 24-70 2.8 zoom photo lens
@boogeyb
@boogeyb 5 месяцев назад
@@carstenschlag Thanks 🙏🏾
@user-lv6et1tg4m
@user-lv6et1tg4m 4 дня назад
Can you write about the equipment you've used for your camera ? Please if you don't mind
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 2 дня назад
Sure! I used bmpcc6k full frame with a 24-70 Lecia photo zoom lens and 1/4th black satin! Appreciate you watching!
@GreatGuy14
@GreatGuy14 Месяц назад
Looks good what lenses did you use?
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag Месяц назад
Thanks man! I used the Lecia 24-70 f 2.8 photo lens. Appreciate you watching !!
@GreatGuy14
@GreatGuy14 Месяц назад
Oh thank you, did you use any mounts for it. Because, I have BlackMagic 6k
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag Месяц назад
The black magic I was using was L mount so if you have the standard Ef mount you would have to convert it to L mount!
@BenFryer-te3is
@BenFryer-te3is 4 месяца назад
What's the name of the country song played with the credits?
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Burnin’ down by Ken Lowery. Thanks for watching man!
@brickwars7799
@brickwars7799 5 месяцев назад
Literally epic when u go to Hollywood rember me
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
Haha thanks my dude
@ScottOmaVideo
@ScottOmaVideo 4 месяца назад
Great job, production, color grading, acting! I feel when the kid throws the can, it wasn't exactly clear what happened. Too quick. In your BTS, you showed the kid throwing against a plastic panel which would have been a great POV shot there. Cons: hard to relate to the kid even though we've been there. Didn't feel like the cashier was "messing with him" as much as doing her job out of robotic habit. Maybe if she sneered or rolled her eyes when the mom left, viewers would empathize with the kid more. As it is, it looks like an intro to a serial killer film. Either way, looks great.
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Hey Scott! I really genuinely appreciate the honest review. I can totally see why you think the kid throwing the can shot was too quick. I wanted it to feel confusing, because the kid in that moment was so overwhelmed and kinda was disoriented I wanted the audience to feel a bit like that as well. Then once you see him bashing her head in, it’s supposed to click what just happened. The same time he kind of realizes what he has done. I also totally understand your comment about the cashier. The reason I didn’t have her sneer or play it up more that she is messing with him, was because in reality she is not. it’s all in the kids head. His anxiety makes him feel like people are always out to get him or something is always going wrong. So in reality she’s just doing her job but in his mind that’s not the case. Maybe i didn’t do a good enough job getting that across, so i really do appreciate your critique! I’ll take it all into account going into my next film. Thank you so much for watching, I appreciate you!
@ShangauBisht
@ShangauBisht 2 месяца назад
​@@carstenschlagit was pretty clear to me that kid was anxious but i thought it was leading to that ending to be in the kids head too
@ShangauBisht
@ShangauBisht 2 месяца назад
The kid is Homelander... could be a prequel for boys
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 2 месяца назад
Haha i never thought about that, but you are so right. Appreciate you watching!!
@its_tHoMaS1
@its_tHoMaS1 Месяц назад
that’s the best but also weirdest compliment i’ve ever gotten
@Bart_kus
@Bart_kus 4 месяца назад
wow!
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Thank you !!
@Peka1000
@Peka1000 3 месяца назад
I love the composition, rhythm, and colors, but there’s a lot of noise in the image, isn’t there? Is this an intentional style, or is it because the Black Magic camera handles low-light situations poorly
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 3 месяца назад
Thank you man ! It was intentional, it’s film grain. My experience with black magic and lowlight has actually always been quite good! As long as you are exposing properly and having enough contrast points, it looks great in low light in my opinion. Appreciate you watching!
@MrMFCool
@MrMFCool 4 месяца назад
My anxiety went through the roof watching this 😅😅😅
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Haha Im glad, that's what I was going for. Thanks for watching!
@lambo_drives
@lambo_drives 5 месяцев назад
0:52 ooo 😮 got it
@lambo_drives
@lambo_drives 5 месяцев назад
but, pixel 🐥 be 🦫
@DR-gp4hn
@DR-gp4hn 4 месяца назад
You and your team have potential to make full movie.... Just you need good thriller script...All the best for your future projects
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Thanks man! I appreciate that
@MrJayclas
@MrJayclas 5 месяцев назад
Great work, the Cinema 6k is a tad too sharp but you still did a great job.
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
Thanks man!
@ball_a29000
@ball_a29000 4 месяца назад
Oh, man! This is absolutely great!!!!! Love the color grading!
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Thank you so much man! Appreciate it !
@michigan4theater799
@michigan4theater799 5 месяцев назад
Yo that’s my friend Thomas!!! Why did you kill her?
@its_tHoMaS1
@its_tHoMaS1 Месяц назад
yeah chris😂😂😂
@peterisbiernis7090
@peterisbiernis7090 5 месяцев назад
fr me
@dapunkof1975
@dapunkof1975 5 месяцев назад
What was the actual point?
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
The kid got stressed and over reacted in response, killing the cashier.
@phrasalsyntax
@phrasalsyntax 2 месяца назад
Interesting first try Carsten, you have talent and should keep doing this. And your casting was very good, specially the cashier woman, she was so real. In terms of how I see it, I think you should try to work more on the editing of face gazes and how they interact. In my opinion, some of the main frames of the kid were just too tight for an adequate appreciation of his interaction with the cashier and some of the other characters. And some scenes were just too short, not allowing viewers to stay more with the mind of the person portrayed. This is a science and an art that is not easy to master so the more you practice and the more you try different things, the better. And, many times, you don’t need to rely on something out of the ordinary to have a good film or a good ending; your film could have just show the point of view and stress of being that boy without the need for a violent ending. In my opinion, in America, filmmakers have naturalized violence because they watch just too much if it and they have naturalized it, but that is an scape from real life. Real life is violent but not violent like in movies, so those movies don't speak to us, they only entertain us, and that's ok but I would call it art. As some writer that I forgot said once, "the truly extraordinary in life is the four-leg cat, not the five one." A good suggestion to become a better filmmaker is always keep watching good movies (not necessarily north American ones, they rely too much on the spectacular in my opinion) and try to discover how they do them, why do they work so well sometimes. A recent film that I recommend and that you could find somehow in tune with your first person subjective style is ‘Shiva Baby’ (USA, 2020) by young American director Emma Seligman. She understands how to render the subjective point of view with camera framing and editing and the choreography of dialogue and interaction, with mastery, in my opinion. ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-XYycmW66JqQ.html
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 2 месяца назад
Hey there! First off, thank you so much for not only taking the time to watch but also taking the time to give constructive feedback. I greatly appreciate it! The violence was definitely a crutch to make it more interesting to the average viewer and just felt easier for my first time directing. In the future I plan on trying to tell more stories about the mundane and just try to inject a little magic. I’ll definitely check out that film. I appreciate the recommendation. Thank you again, i really appreciate you!
@anothersomeone7008
@anothersomeone7008 Месяц назад
😂😂😂😂 this is a real fear
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag Месяц назад
Haha i still fear this. Appreciate you watching!
@FishySquad90
@FishySquad90 4 месяца назад
I know the kid
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Nice, he was a great actor!
@FishySquad90
@FishySquad90 4 месяца назад
@@carstenschlag he is
@its_tHoMaS1
@its_tHoMaS1 Месяц назад
@@FishySquad90thanks nick
@enesberen
@enesberen 2 месяца назад
Bro its a good filmed video but cmon, use the 180 degree rule
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 2 месяца назад
Haha yeah trust me, I was just as mad at myself. Wasn’t done purposefully. Appreciate you watching though regardless!!
@ShangauBisht
@ShangauBisht 2 месяца назад
​@@carstenschlagrules are meant to be broken
@stanisawwojcik6847
@stanisawwojcik6847 4 месяца назад
cool shots but screenplay is very stupid and bad
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Appreciate your honesty. Would be interested to hear what specifically made it very stupid and bad to you?
@callmesalticidae
@callmesalticidae 5 месяцев назад
The kid is a great actor, but the plot is awful. "Autistic kid snaps and kills a cashier." Great job, you heard "horror is a conservative genre" and didn't think twice. I've watched this three times now and I can't see how the cashier has "decided to mess with" the kid. Because she swipes the items quickly? I could maybe believe that if the other sounds of the checkout aisle weren't shown to be just as impactful.
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
Haha it was my first time writing something, apologies if it wasn’t up to your standards. I appreciate the honesty tho ❤️
@callmesalticidae
@callmesalticidae 5 месяцев назад
If it helps, literally everything else was either “good” or “great.” I just mentioned the kid in particular because child actors are usually pretty bad, so he was downright exceptional. If this was your first time writing something, well, everybody writes horribly in the beginning. That doesn’t make the writing in this film better, but it does make me interested in what you’ll create in the future.
@its_tHoMaS1
@its_tHoMaS1 Месяц назад
@@callmesalticidaeomg thank you so much i was that kid 😂😂😂
@poetass357
@poetass357 21 день назад
Nice work !
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 20 дней назад
Thanks brotha ! Appreciate you !!
@levijonn
@levijonn 4 месяца назад
incredible
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 4 месяца назад
Thanks man! Appreciate you !
@zedkoleilat8858
@zedkoleilat8858 5 месяцев назад
🔥🔥🔥
@carstenschlag
@carstenschlag 5 месяцев назад
Thanks man!
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