CELPIP Writing Review - Task 1 - Will it get a score of 10?

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@abbasmamudu508 2 года назад

I just did my CELPIP test last weekend. I got a score of 12 in writing. That was my first time. It was amazing. I watched some of your videos some days before the test. Thanks.

@mkahinsa 2 года назад

Hey Abbas congrats, I have a question on the Writing test.. does celpip Word editor allow us to scribble notes and then delete them if required so that we can brainstorm on the editor itself instead of paper?

@bushrafarooque6960 2 года назад

Wonderful! Task response was achieved I believe..That’s really a good edit & learning..I have been practicing from your book..hope to crack the Celpip soon by referring to your books.

@MadEnglishTV 2 года назад

Thanks so much! 😃😃I'm sure you'll pass the test soon!

@minativishwakarma3985 2 года назад

Very nicely re-written making it concise, crisp, relevant and expressive, Mark!! Good gudelines!!👍👍

@MadEnglishTV 2 года назад

Thanks so much! 😎

@muhamadhasim2349 2 года назад

That's a very excellent editing from you, Mark.

@MadEnglishTV 2 года назад

Thanks so much! 😃😃

@josielyncoloma4316 2 года назад

Thank you for sharing this video, I'm hope and I 🙏 pray that I will past this exam this coming Sunday.

@sabrinasabi4177 2 года назад

Since I joined your amazing channel, my use of everyday English has been more natural and confident. Also, my vocabulary has expanded considerably. It's a safe place in which one can improve one's language skills thanks a million ☺️

@MadEnglishTV 2 года назад

I'm so happy to hear that! 😃😃

@mohammadafrouziyeh5677 2 года назад

Great lesson!

@MadEnglishTV 2 года назад

Thanks! 😃😃

@abdelilahjamali9099 2 года назад

Hi! You're a good teacher! You're awesome too! Take care!

@MadEnglishTV 2 года назад

Thanks so much! 😎

@ka-kk3lm 2 года назад

That is great advice Mark! :D I've never taken CELPIP exam but I will in the future, I hope. I'm sure I will pass the exam easily with your lessons and books if I study hard. Thanks a lot! It was funny when you said "My name is Mark, I like ice cream, I guess that's the only thing I like" 😀 I like ice cream too! :D

@MadEnglishTV 2 года назад

Haha, thanks! 😃😃

@user-nw3jp6ll7m 2 года назад

Hi, Mark! I participated in an English business email writing class a few months ago. The teacher told us that we need to be concise when writing e-mails so that others can easily understand what you mean. This is the same as you said.

@MadEnglishTV 2 года назад

Hi! 😃😃That's great!

@hanisadati8054 2 года назад

Thanks Mark for the great videos. Just regarding the length of the writing, I was in the Paragon Celpip writing workshop the other day and they advised word count should be between 135-220 words. According to them (and specificallyregardingthe max number), if the word count exceeds 220 words, then there will be penalties. 🤔

@MadEnglishTV 2 года назад

Oh really? But on the website it says 150-200. If they say you can write 220 without any penalties, then I guess you can!

@jeanmariendayizeye6651 2 года назад

Very good my brother Mark

@MadEnglishTV 2 года назад

😃😃

@dailycanada Год назад

Hi Mark - That was really helpful. Do you mind if I send you my writing sample to evaluate my score as well?

@matlindell5022 2 года назад

My thoughts are that I could listen to Mark speaking for hours and hours.It’s so pleasant and valuable..

@MadEnglishTV 2 года назад

Wow! Maybe I should start a podcast and just talk about random things for hours. Lol

@tramhicks1215 2 года назад

I have enjoyed it very much it was very useful

@MadEnglishTV 2 года назад

😃😃

@funmiarinola 6 месяцев назад

Morning Mr Mark,

@joselozano6129 2 года назад

Thank you my brother

@MadEnglishTV 2 года назад

😃😃

@kellybriceno547 Год назад

Thks I would like to know why can’t be used Both connectors on the second paragraph please?

@mihrinevcoker9245 2 года назад

🍁Hi Mark...Thank you for helping me learn english...take care 🍁

@MadEnglishTV 2 года назад

Hi! 😃😃You're welcome!

@wilmerhersa1808 2 года назад

Mark you're the man.

@MadEnglishTV 2 года назад

Wow! 😎

@Belle_Kam88 2 года назад

Would ¨ To whom it may concern¨ be a good greeting?

@tramhicks1215 2 года назад

I think you are quite a good English teacher online.

@MadEnglishTV 2 года назад

😃😃

@fikadumehari839 2 года назад

I like your style

@MadEnglishTV 2 года назад

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@ohiopines14 2 года назад

Whenever I hear the name Bob Marley, one word comes to my mind-Reggae. The kind of music done with strong Jamaican accent with steady unconventional beats. Imagine if this whole learning thing is a"face to face" method, we'll be rubbing elbows with him🎼🥁🎸 That's a good editing, Mark. I really needed this kind of tips-although I'm aware of the significance of a good first impression in composition. This lesson reminds me of the phrase we often times says about the word simplicity-"less is more." There's no reason Bob Marley wont get 12 points when he had provided such key vocabularies, I reckon. Ofcourse, I'm thankful that you have provided us other meanigful words to ponder. And when you're trying to threaten the celpip people with the "choice words" by your looks , that's so FUNNY!!😁🤨 Now that I put into practice the 3331 rule, I bid you farewell and hope for you the best of the day!🌻

@MadEnglishTV 2 года назад

Awesome use of the 3331 rule! 😃😃Your writing is superb!

@ohiopines14 2 года назад

@@MadEnglishTV I can't thank you enough! 🌻

@Gatubela23_5 2 года назад

May you explain that, what is the difference between the CLB and CELPIP tests?

@MadEnglishTV 2 года назад

CLB isn't a test. CELPIP uses the Canadian Language Benchmark (CLB) for evaluating scores.

@kieulam9306 Год назад

cool teacher

@doreenhundshagen1144 2 года назад

Hallöchen Mark!!! First and foremost, you look awesome!!!👍👍👍👏👏👏 Wow, Bob Marley is one of our classmates!!! That's awesome!!!😍 Only 150 to 200 words???🤔 No problem!!! In German almost everything can be ONE word😁😁😁!!! On the other hand, the German language has a lot of useless filler words, such as wohl/well, zwar, wirklich/really, recht/rather, mal/once etc.!!! I like ice-cream too🍦, but I like chocolate better!!!🍫🍫🍫😋 "Plethora" what a great new word to add to my vocabulary!!! I thank you most warmly!!!👍👍👍 Sadly enough, I'm very bad at making things up!!!😔😔😔 "3331 done!!!!" You really should have this saying patented, wouldn't you think so too??? Sure thing, I'll keep my fingers crossed for "Bob Marley"!!!🤞🤞🤞 Once I retire, I'd also like to do something useful voluntarily!!!🤝 Cheers, Mark!!! Have a wonderful day in Canada!!! Take care, my friend!!!😎👑😎👑😎🤝🇨🇦🇩🇪🙋‍♀️

@MadEnglishTV 2 года назад

Hi! 😃😃 Thanks so much! Yes, the German version of the CELPIP would allow only one monster word! rindfleischetikettierungsüberwachungsaufgabenübertragungsgesetz I'd probably get a score of 12 for that, eh? 😎 What kinds of useful things would you like to do after retirement? Have a great Sunday in Doreenchenville!

@abayubarodriguez26 2 года назад

Its not audio

@mohammadafrouziyeh5677 2 года назад

Hi Mark! Just a quick question. What is the difference between the following expressions? Are they the same? 1. Throughout the last ten years 2. Over the last ten years 3. Over the course of the last ten years

@user-nw3jp6ll7m 2 года назад

Yes, they are. It's because Google told me.😀

@MadEnglishTV 2 года назад

Hi! 😃😃Yes, they're the same!

@funmiarinola 6 месяцев назад

For the writing task,how many task is it Mark!

@MadEnglishTV 6 месяцев назад

There are two tasks on the writing test.

@valerykolganov9565 2 года назад

It were nice tips ! But audio is louder in one ear and weak in another one.

@MadEnglishTV 2 года назад

Sorry for the problem!

@ishaanchawla7886 2 года назад

Hi Can we use it eventually rather than lastly?

@MadEnglishTV 2 года назад

Hi! 😃😃In this case, you cannot use that.

@ishaanchawla7886 2 года назад

@@MadEnglishTV okay

@lingxiaoyue921 Год назад

Thanks for sharing Mark, and shout out to Bob Marley!

@mariapatricio1858 Год назад

My last celpip I did 11,10,7,10 I can’t believe I got 7 in writing. I already know my mistake I did more than 300 words in each task 😢

@tusharkumarvyas8442 2 года назад

Dear.......I will not going to call you Sir, but Mentor. The way of your teaching, your relevance to the topics and the normal behaviour attracts me a lot. My name is Tushar and I'm from India. Want to immigrate to Canada in near future, by the end of 2022-2023 fiscal year to be precise. I would like to let you know that I just have started CELPIP practice for 9-10 CLB score. I am planning to be appeared in the exam on 26th March from India. I would like you to kindly provide me some useful tips by which I can do well in particularly Reading and Listening. I have completed some practices on my own with the help of one of the RU-vid channels, and I have scored 27(reading) and 27(Listening) on an average of 7 to 8 exams. I need to reach at 34-35 to fulfill my requirement. I am eagerly waiting for your response. Thanks in Advance...!

@Vetgong 2 года назад

Hi Mark! There's no sound in this video?

@MadEnglishTV 2 года назад

Hi! 😃😃Sorry, I made a mistake with the sound. It only comes out one ear.

@Vetgong 2 года назад

@@MadEnglishTV Hi! It's OK now, thanks!

@toktamdokhanchi2903 5 месяцев назад

carpooling ;)

@samirtuduvlog8035 2 года назад

❤❤👍👍👍

@kimtravis5789 2 года назад

Mark, I like you!

@MadEnglishTV 2 года назад

Thanks so much! 😃😃I like you too!

@NIKXUS 2 года назад

Hi all this is Bob Marley - and I got 9 in writing in my first attempt ✌️ Thanks to Mark …👍🏼

@farooqalikhan83 2 года назад

Hi Nikhil, congrats could you pls share template or study material for Writing and Reading..or where I can opt for practice tests..Pls advice

@MadEnglishTV 2 года назад

I'm so happy to hear that! 😃😃

@GaribaMartha-ph8yn Год назад

Where can I get the book to but please

@shazshaz3142 3 месяца назад

Like for- "wait a sec guys, we know that this person is not bob marley " 😅

@jarmilasejnohova4013 2 года назад

Hey dumb speechless Markkkk :)))) I've find someting...every time I put link to your comments, my comments are deleted here....I was trying it many times and also just now...and really ...lol....That's why many of my comments to you was deleted ...Unbelievable....Take care...

@MadEnglishTV 2 года назад

Hi! 😃😃Yes, I think RU-vid deletes lots of comments without me knowing! Sorry about that!

@jarmilasejnohova4013 2 года назад

@@MadEnglishTV Never mind...take care...