I love what you've done here! These songs are amazing! So amazing in fact that they inspired me to write a poem called 'Pressure Refined, Struggle Redefined': On the beach Getting pulled down by the water Out of reach All my strength as I get taken farther Coral reef I've been here before but the colors are changing Stay with me If I lose a piece, no chance of me arranging When I hear the seabed calling my name To lay my head in an early grave I no longer submit to the sweetness of pain I was stuck in a cycle, but I'm breaking away All I see Is hope and strength in my peripheral Follow me Along this path to understand it all I want to be The guiding light that you've been craving ‘Cause all we need When we're a mess is some rearranging When I feel the seafloor causing dismay I've let myself be consumed by the thirsty waves I'll no longer just sit through the fiercest of rain I was stuck in a cycle, but I'm breaking away
This is so great! I read it with my track's rhythm, and it flows really nicely! I also love the idea of gathering strength from letting ourselves be carried by the waves of change. Thank you for listening and for the beautiful comment :)
This is amazing once again! it makes me want to take a roadtrip to the shore with my best friends and also lay in the ocean on my back and let the tides carry me away endlessly. Thank you so much for making such a wonderful track that so beautifully captures the feeling of the summer season!
3:32 What an incredible vocal harmony. Keep it up man, you are so criminally underrated. These worlds you're able to create are such a treasure, and I find myself looking forward to each one
