Devons lift is getting worse by the day, if he continues, the weight will hang at his ellbow. The hight the weight, the further he is moving it back to make it lighter... Sadly Devon will loose.
You seriously need to work on your speaking voice. Firstly, your accent is just way too thick. Secondly, your phrasing is just all over the place, with breaths in unnatural places, of which is particularly important in professional narration. Lastly, your audio is not clean. Crack on with a make shift vocal booth to kill that reverb 💪