Do NOT Submit Your Common App Without Watching This!! | 7 Deadly Sins (by Yale 2020 grad) 

Not clickbait. Here are the common application essay 7 deadly sins:
1. weak ash hooks
2. problem-solution ratio
3. things happening to you vs. you making things hapen
4. lack of specificity
5. no contribution to campus
6. no demonstrated personal growth
7. obvious insights
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