AMAZING work, great job ! Everything in this team fight scenario is illustrated correctly, Io saving Drow, Cent Stampede + Stomp, ET with the stun and ult and Invoker just to top everything off with his 3 huge spells. This film will definitely be a strong contender.
damn dude, i cant really see anything wrong with this. edit: only thing wrong is invoker orbs, needed to be www->qwe and an invoke animation. would have been 110% meta if drow was carrying manta style, and turns out the drow they attack is an image. still very well done and epic!
Hey dude thanks for your feedback. I agree about the invoke animation. It would be more obvious he is casting different spells. I like the manta style idea too, but it would have completely changed my idea about the story. Thanks again!
Man that was awesome but how could you forget about Earth Splitter animation? Its so cool and dramatic, maybe the travel time or the ending sound to add some effect, 9/11
This is very capable of being on the top 3, more so being the top one, maybe the judges didn't notice this, that is the only reason I can think of... cuz this is so perfect in every way, hell, it deserves to be higher than top 1, it's super good!
New one thing i commend you on was the cinematography. Animation was a bit stiff but there was never a wasted moment in each shot. Subtle gust of wind, panning shots into that ward, fantastic.
Really well done, love how you fitted the usage of abilities to the tune f.e. when centaur stomps. There's also literally not a single frame without action after drow gets hit by the smoke, great work. You got a lot of small details right as well, both sides have playable lineups f.e.. Love the Io safe, the tether through the trees animation looks great. Had to laugh at drow getting caught by a smoke under a ward though, greedy bastard. Typical "just that creep"-behavior. Invoker throws deafening blast before meteor, but I get that you wanted to show meteor into rampage. The only frame that looks bad is when drow falls down.
Looks fantastic.. The only comment I had was that, the Invoker arriving seemed a little goofy (with his little jump); instead, it could be either him blinking in, or even materializing from ghost walk. Also, the tornado and deafening blast did not get much screen presence compared to the meteor, I felt. A slightly zoomed out view showing the battle field with the deafening blast pushing them all back and the meteor ball landing on them would have made this even more awesome than it already is. Nonetheless, great video!!!
Classic "Bait"... Centaur with the 5 man stun only to be nullified by the 3k Invoker flying in and throwing everyone in the air with his tornado... This is truly how baits work in Dota
+maz9uka so the team lost 1.75 seconds of stun time cause of invoker ... I understand you still don't get it ...but don't worry I don't flame bad players
+Erbse lolgg yes I know and my original comment was just to be humerus but when the dick who responded said "second" which is singular which would not mean 5 seconds and then said "newbie" ... I decided I would respond to his comment using his time frame and even with those variables he is still wrong/dumb... Does that make sense to you? Or do I need to dumb it down?
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